[3DS] Pokémon Sun & Pokémon Moon - "My Home" by braixen1264

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Submission Information:
Series: Pokémon
Game: Pokémon Sun & Pokémon Moon
Console: Nintendo 3DS
Title: My Home
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: braixen1264

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[braix]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BwEVoxXde6M

[braix]

A year's passed since I posted this
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[E. Gadd Industries]

I looked it over, if it makes you feel any better. The only thing I saw, and this may be intentional, but there's some pitched percussion that plays beat 4, m21, RH*. I'm hearing G#.


*It's heard elsewhere in the song, but this is the only location that doesn't interfere with anything else, and likewise, wouldn't interfere with any notes in the sheet.

Hope this helps

[Latios212]

^braix ya there?

some minor things with the LH, check for me:
- m. 12 LH should look as m. 2 currently does.
- m. 2, 4 LH is all E's
- m. 4 LH E falls on beat 4, not 4.5
- m. 14 and 16: LH strikes again on beat 2.5, same note.
- m. 20 LH needs a lower B on beat 2.5

oh yeah and the 16th note parts at the beginning should be triplets

[Static]

I love how you incorporated all the parts in here in a very simple yet effective way; you kept the groove and the chords of the original which is awesome.

There a few things I would look over though:
- I'm hearing a D in beats 3-4 of bars 2 and 4 (E7 chord)
- Measure 14: Beat 1 sounds like an Fmaj7 chord to me, beat 3 sounds like a G7, and beat 4 sounds like Bdim
- Measure 16: Beats 1-2 are Fmaj7
- Measure 20: Missing E in the chord on beat 1
- Measure 21: You might want to consider adding that percussion thing E. Gadd mentioned, but it doesn't affect the sheet that much.

Also, just a small formatting thing: the staff size seems a bit too small. You might want to consider making the print larger, even if it means needing 2 pages.

Aside from those small little things, this is an excellent sheet.

[The Deku Trombonist]

Also, just a small formatting thing: the staff size seems a bit too small. You might want to consider making the print larger, even if it means needing 2 pages.

That, but at the same time I have no idea why you've put 3 bars per line. It fits easily on 1 page in normal sizing without spreading it out so wide. Also, you can make the LH margin narrower to give yourself a bit more room if you need it because at the moment the music is visibly skewed to the right.

[braix]

Updated. Didn't write in the D for measures 2 and 4 to keep the notes light and to make it simpler to play.

[Maelstrom]

Fixed rest in m13 to make it consistent with the final and touched up the placement of the tempo/swing markings just a tad.

Accepted.

[Zeta]

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