Pno. markings need to go.
The last system on pg1 is particularly squished. Also the system starting with m40.
Please no image files. Nothing against them, but they tend to spoil over time like the last page of this sheet
m30 will need some creativity there with the slur to avoid collisions.
m46 LH - Cross stave notation why? It's not nessicary and complicates stuff.