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Which series deserves a Nintendo Switch title the most?

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Author Topic: LeviR.star's Arrangements - [3DS] Team Kirby Clash Deluxe - "Mura Half"  (Read 2024 times)

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Wow, this song is great! (Gives me really strong Animal Crossing vibes.)

Couple of aesthetic suggestions:
- The layers in m. 4 are pretty messy. Combining them might be a good idea.
- Generally when using slurs, extend them to the end of the tied notes. This helps to avoid the lines starting and stopping on the same note, and helps to reduce confusion between ties and slurs. So in m. 7 you would start the slur at the G on beat 2.5, and extend the slur to beat 3 in the last measure.
- I don't think you really need the staccatissimos; staccatos seem like they would suffice just fine as the notes aren't that exaggerated. But, up to you.
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