Thought I'd give a little feedback on this song since I love it so much and I've been wanting to see a replacement of it for so long!
- You seemed to have beamed this song in an interesting way. I don't think it should be beamed in the style of a -/8 song the way you have it. Don't get me wrong. The signature
is correct (13/8), but I don't think the note beaming
is correct. It should probably be beamed
more like a 61/2
For example, you have it beamed as 3+2+2+3+3. It would be better as 2+2+3+2+2+2. I hope that doesn't sound confusing
- I would recommend adding some sort of articulation (maybe staccato?) on the left hand eighth notes. The original seems to have more pomp. Same with the right hand of M. 5+
Maybe do something that is the opposite of M. 22 & 23. You have great articulation in those measures.
- Don't forget the "/" at the end of the url.
Nice job with this challenging sheet! You did a great job at hearing the notes.