The Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Super Series!! Let the Journey Begin!

[braix]

I enjoyed that thoroughly
in ch.1 you should have a kungfu fight scene in which i karate chop nebbles ;^)

[Dudeman]

#BestTroll2016

[BrainyLucario]

BREAKING NEWS!
The Prologue is complete!!Thank you for your patience!
Now, you may know this or not, but that link in the OP was active the entire time! Give it a read! Tell me if anything needs to be fixed! (Some paragraphs aren't indented, but that'll be fixed once I get to my PC. Sorry for you OCD peoples out there ) Oh, and enjoy! If you have anything specific you want me to include in Chapter 1, you know what to do!

In chapter 1, you should make brainy do that thing we discussed as a Joke yesterday. Remember, the Bug...cliff....mud puddle....thing?

You know

[mikey]

if I could punch a guy that'd be great

[E. Gadd Industries]

Brainy: And that could be cause by Noc punching you!

[mikey]

yeah I could see myself punching a riolu
never particularly liked em

[BrainyLucario]

yeah I could see myself punching a riolu
never particularly liked em

Make it happen.

[E. Gadd Industries]

Alright. Now just to fit it in the plot...

[Hero of Trains]

That was really good! I have to say, I actually like Braix more than me... but she's my friend, so that would probably happen anyway in the story! I can't wait to see more about all of the other characters.

[E. Gadd Industries]

Thank you! One thing is certain, I won't have every character in every chapter. That would be WAY too difficult. I'll instead have different stories & such & perhaps tie it all up in a nice, colorful bow. Thing is, when you read this story, you'll need to think when you read it. I like to slide little details/references in at points in my stories & I like to see who notices them & who doesn't. I'm actually starting on planning for Chapter 1 right now.

[Ōkami~MD]

That was really good! I have to say, I actually like Braix more than me... but she's my friend, so that would probably happen anyway in the story! I can't wait to see more about all of the other characters.

i always think my friends r better than me lol

they ave better surnames as well

[Oronoco]

So sorry I'm late to the party, but I really enjoyed it! I'm excited to see everyone develop as the story goes on. And way to go for fitting everyone in there.

[E. Gadd Industries]

Thank you! Chapter 1 is being worked on, and progress is quite nice! (If only I could catch a break from chores)

[E. Gadd Industries]

Hey hey hey! Guess what!

What?

CHAPTER 1 IS COMPLETE!!!

[close]

[Hero of Trains]

Wonderful once again! I really like both the characterization and the new characters you added. As for that mysterious Pokemon, I looked up Pokemon that can use hyper beam, and the only ones that are big and have both wings and legs are Dragonite, Salamence, and Charizard. I don't think it's Charizard because you would probably use a fire type move, so it's either Dragonite or Salamence. Again, awesome job, I really enjoyed it.