[GG] Sonic the Hedgehog 2 - "Final Boss" (Replacement) by mariolegofan

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Submission Information:
Series: Sonic
Game: Sonic the Hedgehog 2
Console: Sega Game Gear
Title: Final Boss
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: mariolegofan


Replacement Information:
Links to Existing Sheet: MUS | MIDI | PDF
Replacement Type: Challenge (new arranger)

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[Sebastian]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x4L4TSrDB4M

[Tobbeh99]

Nice, we could need some new sonic sheets . some thoughts:
1) measures 1-2: there are some pitched bass drums. You might want to add it to to make the first two measures less "empty".
2) measures 5,6,9,10: those slurs should end at the first note, not the tied note.
3) measures 16- 7, 20-21: I'd say that organ-like middle accompaniment is more important than the bass and that you should include that as the LH.

[Sebastian]

1) measures 1-2: there are some pitched bass drums. You might want to add it to to make the first two measures less "empty".

I don't really like the pitches of that bass drum and left that out on purpose.

2) measures 5,6,9,10: those slurs should end at the first note, not the tied note.

I have always done my slurs like that in all my sheets and no one has had problem with that.
And:
"When slurs are placed over a passage that ends in a tied note, the slur sign should extend as far as the second note of the tie, rather than end of the first note. The principle involved should be obvious; the breath of the singer or wind instrumentalist, the bow of a string player, cannot stop at the first note if it is to be prolonged by a tie." (Music Notation: A Manual of Modern Practice, 267)
This really isn't applied to piano but I still do it anyway.

3) measures 16-17, 20-21: I'd say that organ-like middle accompaniment is more important than the bass and that you should include that as the LH.

I think the bass sounds better through that section. It wouldn't sound quite as "whole" without that bass part.

[Sebastian]

Anything else?

[DonValentino]

1. Align the copyright and fix the justifications of the composer and arranger, as well as align them too. Also, maybe drag the title and subtitle a little higher
2. Add a legato in ms. 21-22 to those C-E-C too just for consistency.
3. m. 5, courtesy natural in first F of the LF, and in m. 7 you have both a G sharp and an A flat , the A flat should be a G sharp, and the next G should also have a courtesy accidental.

Fix this and it should be ready to go.

[Sebastian]

Fixed

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