[DELETED] [Wii] Wii Sports Resort - "Bowling Theme" by videogaminglegodude & LuigiKart

Started by Zeta, April 20, 2015, 11:00:50 AM

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Zeta

Submission Information:

Series: Other
Game: Wii Sports Resort
Console: Nintendo Wii
Title: Bowling Theme
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arrangers: videogaminglegodude & LuigiKart

videogaminglegodude

For lack of anything better to say, I love the Miis.

videogaminglegodude

For lack of anything better to say, I love the Miis.

Sebastian

Nice!
- I would recommend a more practical way of beaming the notes where you have dotted quarter; dotted quarter; eighth/or quarter, I'd put dotted quarter; quarter tied to an eighth etc.
I guess there could be multiple ways to beam this.....but I would ask an Updater. As you probably know I suck at beaming :p
- In measures 10, 12, 14, 16, 18, 20, 22, 24, 26, 28, 30, 32, 34, 36, and 38, I'd take out the 2nd voice for 2 reasons.
1. For starters, you can't play both voices in that hand at the same time.
2. It isn't the prettiest sound and wouldn't be fun to play over and over. When I arrange a song, I try to make it like someone would want to play it over and over cause it's fun :p
There is also the option of having the first hand come up and grab the first voice and having the right hand play the 2nd.....but I recommend taking it out completely.
- On the top of the 2nd page, the lettering for the title is regular not bold.
- Site url is http://www.ninsheetmusic.org/
- There is no tempo marking.

Other than that, excellent job! I hope to see more :)



Brawler4Ever

I agree with MLF. The song sounds fine without the second layer, imo.
Even when everyone else has gone,
I will punch the punching bag until a game comes on. XD

10 years later. Still Brawling!

videogaminglegodude

Quote from: Brawler4Ever on June 05, 2015, 04:08:04 PMI agree with MLF. The song sounds fine without the second layer, imo.

Yes, luigikart is working on that.
For lack of anything better to say, I love the Miis.

Latios212

If there's feedback, please try to make the changes within a reasonable amount of time. Feel free to resubmit if you do get around to fixing it.
My arrangements and YouTube channel!

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