[DELETED] [PS1] Resident Evil - "Peace of Mind" by LaGazela

Started by Zeta, April 13, 2015, 07:44:31 PM

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Zeta

Submission Information:

Series: Other
Game: Resident Evil
Console: PlayStation
Title: Peace of Mind
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: LaGazela

Maelstrom


Bespinben

#2
Pointing out problems is good; offering solutions is better:



A.) You can EASILY incorporate the pad line into your piano arrangement if you move the voice up on octave. Note overlap also becomes non-existent if you do the following--
B.) Sustain pedal - This is one of the most widely used techniques in piano playing, and it works perfectly for the legato feel this song is trying to create. It also will allow you to sustain the pad line while using the right hand to play the top of the arpeggio.

***VERY IMPORTANT -- Measures 5-9's accidentals are all off. G# should be Ab, and C# should be Db. Even without knowing any theory, anyone should at least be able to tell having a G# and a G in the same measure is an eye-brow raiser, especially since the key signature (C minor, 3 flats) already says it should be an Ab.
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That's the music end of this review. If you intend this sheet to get onto the NSM main site, you're going to have to write this natively in Finale, and not dumping a MIDI into Notepad. Additionally, you must conform the NinSheetMusic formatting guidelines (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?topic=481.0)
Also, curious question -- did you originally write this in Sibelius? The PDF has that look to it.


Quote from: Nebbles on July 04, 2015, 12:05:12 PM
Someone beat Bespinben to making PMD music?! GASP!

MLF for Chatroom Mod next Tuesday

Bespinben

Deleted for inactivity. While it is a possibility to complete the version I made for the sake of the critique above, it is not my place to do so. MIDI dumps will not be rewarded.
Quote from: Nebbles on July 04, 2015, 12:05:12 PM
Someone beat Bespinben to making PMD music?! GASP!

MLF for Chatroom Mod next Tuesday