[DELETED] [SNES] Gradius III - "Departure for Space" by 0Aero0

Started by Zeta, March 24, 2015, 09:15:12 AM

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Zeta

Submission Information:

Series: Other
Game: Gradius III
Console: Super Nintendo Entertainment System
Title: Departure for Space
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: 0Aero0

Maelstrom

Better. Still a few of the same problems, though. You still need to review this for the text formatting. And a lot of the dotted quarters need redone as tied eighth-quarters or the other way around. It's pretty clear which should be the case. Just try to always make the beat visible.

Bespinben

*Cb in m. 8 should be a B. This note exists diatonically from the C major key.

*Rhythm notation - You need to always clearly show beat 3 in a 4/4 time signature. Because of that:
~~ Right hand of m. 4 should be notated dotted quarter, eighth-tied-quarter-quarter
~~ Left hand of m. 6 should have the half note on beat 2.5 notated instead as eighth-tied-dotted quarter
~~ M. 22-23 are also in error. Use this principle to fix it.
Quote from: Nebbles on July 04, 2015, 12:05:12 PM
Someone beat Bespinben to making PMD music?! GASP!

MLF for Chatroom Mod next Tuesday

Bespinben

Archived for inactivity. Try to respond to critique within at most 1 month.
Quote from: Nebbles on July 04, 2015, 12:05:12 PM
Someone beat Bespinben to making PMD music?! GASP!

MLF for Chatroom Mod next Tuesday