[DELETED] [MUL] Geometry Dash - "Clutterfunk" by Mr. ML&G

Started by Zeta, March 18, 2015, 11:38:00 AM

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Zeta

Submission Information:

Series: Other
Game: Geometry Dash
Console: Multiplatform
Title: Clutterfunk
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Mr. ML&G


Mr ML and G

#2
Oh no I uploaded the wrong one!  :-X
Fixed!  ;D
Also here is the song for reference: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XmPPnAMbSgo
3mlg5u


Tobbeh99

A couple of things I thought about:
1) The dubstep section.. don't know honestly how to make this work on piano. But you could try using some glissandos, tremollos, grace notes, to make it better. And the left hand feels a bit boring, maybe you could make it more intressting and more rhythmical to fit the charter.
2) The 32th notes you have later on in the sheet can easily be replaced by acciaccaturas.
3) Add some articulation, especially accents. Some notes that are stronger needs to have accents to clarify how it should be played. This goes for all sections. I can see you have already done it in the beginning, which is great but you could add some more articulations where it seems appropriate.
4) Add some dynamics.
5)URL should be "http://www.ninsheetmusic.org/" with N,S,M being capital letters. 
Quote from: Dudeman on August 16, 2016, 06:11:42 AM
tfw you get schooled in English grammar by a guy whose first language is not English

10/10 tobbeh