[3DS] Fire Emblem Awakening - "Open for business!" by Maelstrom

Started by Zeta, February 22, 2015, 08:21:05 PM

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Zeta

Submission Information:

Series: Fire Emblem
Game: Fire Emblem Awakening
Console: Nintendo 3DS
Title: Open for business!
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Maelstrom

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Maelstrom


Bespinben

Quote from: Bespinben on February 10, 2015, 05:39:52 PMOh, and since m. 14 is derived from a DbM7 chord, you're gonna wanna spell the C# as Db and the G# as Ab.

That singular system on page 2 seems really lonely... let's give him a friend by taking 1 measure off from each system on page 1, then give 1 measure to the lonely 3 measure system, and finally, make a new 4-measure bubble buddy system below.
Quote from: Nebbles on July 04, 2015, 12:05:12 PM
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Bespinben

Some more fixes I found:
*M. 12 ~ That G# should be an Ab. Think of it as part of an Fm6/9 chord.
*^^^Also with that section, I think instead of having a 7/4 and then a 2/4, you should have a 5/4, then a 4/4. That would also have the benefit of helping the player see that broken Fm6/9 as a single unit.
*M. 15 ~ In the RH, use Ab and Cb, instead of G# and B, and spell the LH of beats 1-2 as Gb, Db, & Ab, instead of F#, C#, and G#.
*The title on the 2nd page is written as "Open for buisness", so unless the shop is ran by Buizels, well...
Quote from: Nebbles on July 04, 2015, 12:05:12 PM
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Maelstrom

Fixed, and removed extra quotation marks from the Submission title. (So, it's not ""Open for business"") any longer

Bespinben

I was just about to press accept, but one more tiny thing --- the first system on page 2 is a little squished together having 6 measures, so I suggest moving the first 2/4 measure to the last system on page 1. This also has the benefit of giving you time to turn the page during the chord.
Quote from: Nebbles on July 04, 2015, 12:05:12 PM
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Zeta

This submission has been accepted by Bespinben.

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