[GB] The Legend of Zelda: Link's Awakening - "Southern Face Shrine" by Tobbeh99

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Submission Information:
Series: The Legend of Zelda
Game: The Legend of Zelda: Link's Awakening
Console: Game Boy
Title: Southern Face Shrine
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Tobbeh99

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[Maelstrom]

95% complete.
Some cross staff notation/rests in the last measure would make it better.

[Tobbeh99]

Umm it actually is cross staff notation in the last measure. All the notes are in bass clef but the last four are shifted up into treble clef (cross staf). Do you mean that i should include the rest in the final measure in the treble clef? I hided it because i thought it was unessesary, but i can show it if you want to.

[Tobbeh99]

Do you mean that I should do rests like this:
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/24842881/Zelda%20-%20Southern%20Shrine%202.zip

[Bespinben]

No no no, keep it how you had it at first. You had it right.

I recommend marking both hands to be played one octave higher than written. Also, since I see you're using higher version of Finale, you may (but not mandatory) consider writing in invisible pedal markings to facilitate the legato you marked in the score.

[Tobbeh99]

I've edited my score and made it a bit more expressive. I changed the right hand to play one octave higher while the left hand remains the same. Added some cresc/dim and more expressive symbols, so it starts out somewhat mystresious, but gradually becomes more anxious/dramatic. I think in general that it is better than the old one.
 

[Bespinben]

Cool.

In your new edition, in the RH of the last measure, you forgot to put natural markings on the B of beat 1 and 4.5

Edit: I got ninja'd

[Tobbeh99]

Ahh y i will fix that soon.

[Tobbeh99]

Fixed

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