[Wii] Super Paper Mario - "An Unrivaled Battle" by King Sammer

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Submission Information:
Series: Super Mario
Game: Super Paper Mario
Console: Nintendo Wii
Title: An Unrivaled Battle
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: King Sammer

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[Maelstrom]

Just stop. This is going to get you banned just as fast as spam posts, if not faster.

edit: it's not as bad, but the lack of repeats/dynamics/constant repitition make it clear this is not original.

[King Sammer]

Just stop. This is going to get you banned just as fast as spam posts, if not faster.

edit: it's not as bad, but the lack of repeats/dynamics/constant repetition make it clear this is not original.

But it is original! My friends back at the other forum where I came from approved of it!

[Xaoz]

But it is original! My friends back at the other forum where I came from approved of it!

Nah, do not mind Maelstrom. He is just kidding. This is perfect.

[Maelstrom]

I'm sorry I acted before I looked at it. 

[Xaoz]

I'm sorry I acted before I looked at it. 

Yeah, you thought he is just spamming, but then you opened it and saw the perfection! I am really happy King Sammer finally stopped commiting weird stuff and now even sticks to the NSM template.

[mikey]

This is not bad
put in some articulation and dynamics though

[King Sammer]

There are dynamics!

 

[mikey]

add some dynamic variations then lol
anything other than FFF and FF

[Bespinben]

It was really great seeing the improvement you made King Sammer from the last submission. It shows.

I can understand how you might be feeling "what more is there left to be done?" - you got the notes right, for sure. If you're pressed on ideas for applying these fine details we're asking for, it might be helpful to take a look at some of the other incarnations of this song:
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/35209091/SMW2%20-%20Powerful%20Baby.pdf
http://www.ninsheetmusic.org/download/pdf/1121

...but yes, definitely make a repeat system, please.

[Bloop]

butbutbut

guidelines D:
Points 2, 4, 5, 9 and 10 are missing, and points 1 and 3 are done wrong.

[Maelstrom]

I'm pretty sure I'm not the only one who is disturbed that he knows proper note barring.

[Xaoz]

I cannot believe anyone really takes this commit serious...

[Olimar12345]

I'm pretty sure I'm not the only one who is disturbed that he knows proper note beaming.

Ftfy. But yeah, that's pretty impressive on it's own. xD

[King Sammer]

butbutbut

guidelines D:
Points 2, 4, 5, 9 and 10 are missing, and points 1 and 3 are done wrong.

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