Hey thanks a lot Brassman! Nothing like an experienced arranger to help me with my first arrangement. I see all the changes you made. I think I'm going to try and submit it soon. Should I credit you for helping me with this?
As a side note, almost done with completing a preliminary version of a sheet from Pokémon Ωr/αs. It's longer and more complex, so I can already tell it's going to need some considerable work. But as is the case here at NSM, quality over quantity, as I want to get this sheet right and learn what I can before I post another one!
You can do what you want with the sheet. I'm only here to facilitate and help those who are striving for quality sheets. Don't get me wrong, you did do 90% of the work here. I just cleaned it up bit.
Take your time, figure the tones and rhythms and make sure above all; that, whoever you're presenting it to, may it be an experienced player or a novice, that it's readable it both regards of sound and technicality.
Good luck, and if you need help, you know where I'll be. I look forward to your next sheet.