[MUL] Super Smash Bros. for Nintendo 3DS and Wii U - "Magicant/Eight Melodies" by Nebbles

Started by Zeta, December 04, 2014, 12:33:08 PM

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Zeta

Submission Information:

Series: Super Smash Bros.
Game: Super Smash Bros. for Nintendo 3DS and Wii U
Console: Multiplatform
Title: Magicant/Eight Melodies
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Nebbles

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Shadoninja

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Nebbles


Guess I should post the original, huh? Here ya go.
Quote from: Dudeman on April 13, 2016, 04:54:04 PM
- Nebbles, the beauty with the heart of frozen steel

Olimar12345

I'll take it apart later, but two things I notice right off the bat:

-It looks like staccato marks would be welcome in the RH from 41-46

-Add double bar lines at key and time changes in this piece.
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Nebbles

Quote from: Dudeman on April 13, 2016, 04:54:04 PM
- Nebbles, the beauty with the heart of frozen steel

Olimar12345

-Add an F above the C in measure 1 and 2. This is what the strings are playing.

-Add a high B natural to the RH in measure 22 and tie it to the previous one. That note needs more length! d:

-I suggest adding a C to the bottom of the chord on beat one and a Bb to the bottom of the chord on beat two in the RH measure 62. That way you get that dominant chord and it doesn't come out of nowhere. I would be tempted to add a C to the next chord as well.

-49-56 could use some pedal imo.
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Nebbles

Quote from: Dudeman on April 13, 2016, 04:54:04 PM
- Nebbles, the beauty with the heart of frozen steel

SlowPokemon

Uh-oh! One last problem!

You credited the wrong composer--the composers are Keiichi Suzuki and Hirokazu Tanaka. Yoko Shimomura only arranged it for Smash.

Your sheet should read something like:
Composed by Keiichi Suzuki & Hirokazu Tanaka
Arranged by Yoko Shimomura
Piano arrangement by Nebbles
Quote from: Tobbeh99 on April 21, 2016, 02:56:11 PM
Fuck logic, that shit is boring, lame and does not always support my opinions.

Nebbles

Oops! Thanks for pointing that out, I'll get it fixed later tonight.
Quote from: Dudeman on April 13, 2016, 04:54:04 PM
- Nebbles, the beauty with the heart of frozen steel

Olimar12345

The links don't seem to be updated, but not to worry! I have updated them for you.

Quote from: SlowPokemon on January 06, 2015, 10:58:02 AMUh-oh! One last problem!

You credited the wrong composer--the composers are Keiichi Suzuki and Hirokazu Tanaka. Yoko Shimomura only arranged it for Smash.

Your sheet should read something like:
Composed by Keiichi Suzuki & Hirokazu Tanaka
Arranged by Yoko Shimomura
Piano arrangement by Nebbles

Thank you! I almost missed that. This arrangement is accepted.
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