[DELETED] [GCN] Paper Mario: The Thousand-Year Door - "Shadow Queen Final Battle" by mariolegofan

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Submission Information:
Series: Super Mario
Game: Paper Mario: The Thousand-Year Door
Console: Nintendo GameCube
Title: Shadow Queen Final Battle
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: mariolegofan

[Sebastian]

It might be easier for the updater if we supply a youtube original:

[Sebastian]

This one has been out......a while.
Any feedback?

[Sebastian]

Whacka's Bump...

[FireArrow]

It's kinda hard to give feedback becasue this song just doesn't really work on piano.

[Sebastian]

It's kinda hard to give feedback becasue this song just doesn't really work on piano.

Talking to updaters
Yeah, but I already looked over it with oilmar on tinychat. Just seeing if any other updaters have something to about it so I can get it accepted

[Olimar12345]

Talking to updaters

What an incredibly rude thing to say, and to the only one who bothered to look at your arrangement. It was righteous that no one else posted after that (until now).

Anyway, the piece has the major flaw of (as FireArrow stated) not really working for piano. To be honest, I don't even hear the resemblance except for the first four bars or so. If you want this to be accepted you'll have to do something more to simulate the original piece.

Aside from that there are other formatting errors, like measure 37 being squished, the music colliding with the copyright info, and the page numbers being a tad to close to the music.

[Sebastian]

What an incredibly rude thing to say, and to the only one who bothered to look at your arrangement. It was righteous that no one else posted after that (until now).

Anyway, the piece has the major flaw of (as FireArrow stated) not really working for piano. To be honest, I don't even hear the resemblance except for the first four bars or so. If you want this to be accepted you'll have to do something more to simulate the original piece.

Aside from that there are other formatting errors, like measure 37 being squished, the music colliding with the copyright info, and the page numbers being a tad to close to the music.

Ok.........mind if I ditch it and submit a new one?

[Bespinben]

Haaaaaapy 2000th post!!!!!!!

I believe this song, given a good treatment, could work for piano. But, I don't believe it will get to that level through this medium of peer revisions. So, maybe, ditching this submission, as you put it, and reworking it again from scratch, might just be the best route.

[Sebastian]

Haaaaaapy 2000th post!!!!!!!

I believe this song, given a good treatment, could work for piano. But, I don't believe it will get to that level through this medium of peer revisions. So, maybe, ditching this submission, as you put it, and reworking it again from scratch, might just be the best route.

Ok
I'll do just that. But I can't submit any right now because of what happend to my cord...