The dropbox link to everything but Volcanic Overworld doesn't work.Replay & Wifi Waiting
-The Original name of this tune is Wi-Fi Waiting Room.
-The bass tune is a octave lower.
-The song and game title, the arranger and composer name and the copyright need to be fixed, like you did in Volcanic Overworld. Also, the song needs a tempo marking.
-The song is a bit too fast; the BPM is 140.
-There is no Title on the second page (at the top where it says [Title])
-A repeat marking at the last bar would be appreciated.Bar 1:
The dynamic in the left hand is unnecessary. I would remove it.Bar 21-22:
There are no violins in these two bars, so the notes in the right hand here need to be removed.Volcanic Overworld
-The original name of this song is Volcano Theme
-The song is a bit too fast: the BPM is 120. The tempo marking of this also needs to be added.
-There is no title on the second page
-The song is in D-minor, meaning the key signature has one flat.Bar 1-4:
The crescendo here is unneeded: You can't change volume of a note when you've hit it.Bar 3-4:
The top note in the right hand needs to be removed.Bar 5:
A wild fortissimo appeared in the left hand. It needs to be removed.Bar 13:
More wild fortissimos. These also need to be removed.Bar 14-20:
The dynamics and (de)crescendos here aren't needed, they aren't there in the original song.Bar 21-24:
These bars need to be replaced with two empty bars.Bar 25 (and where this pattern reoccurs):
Wrong rhythm groupings. I would recommend reading this
Another one.Bar 34 & 38:
The half note here misses a BbBar 41:
The notes in this bar need to be in bar 40, and there needs to be a D-A-D on the 4th beat.