JDMEK5's Banana Hoard

[FierceDeity]

If you've changed it, you should update your link
If you haven't, then...ok...haha

[JDMEK5]

Bahaha whoops. XD Yeah, fixed now. Should be anyways.. Thanks for the reminder.

[spitllama]

Your OP organization is genius. May have to steal...

[JDMEK5]

XD Thanks.

[JDMEK5]

Pokémon Black/White Version - Musical "Exciting Nimbasa" - [MUS] [MIDI] [PDF] [YouTube][/url]

Be sure to take a second and tell me what you think!

P.S. ~ Does anyone know whether this song piece is supposed to repeat or not? I know nothing about musicals..

[FireArrow]

Oh, this song! I was always planning on arranging it but never really bothered. Anyways, I think it would be a better idea for you to add in some of the other layers rather then octaves (they don't really add much.)

[Jompa]

I think you should re-stable the chords so that you don't have those tight intervals so low - it makes it sound muddy, and it's hard to hear what chord it is.

[SlowPokemon]

The piece (not song) doesn't repeat. It's a musical show, and it's timed according to the music.

[JDMEK5]

I think it would be a better idea for you to add in some of the other layers rather then octaves (they don't really add much.)

I can't really add in the other chords because that would take away from the straight tango feel I'm trying for. Thanks, but I think I'll leave the right hand the way it is.

I think you should re-stable the chords so that you don't have those tight intervals so low - it makes it sound muddy, and it's hard to hear what chord it is.

You're right. Done. Thanks!

The piece (not song) doesn't repeat. It's a musical show, and it's timed according to the music.

That's what I was wondering about. Thanks!


Pokémon Black/White Version - Champion Alder - [MUS] [MIDI] [PDF] [YouTube][/url]

Same as before, leave comments, critiques, and opinions! Otherwise, enjoy!

[Jompa]

You've got some chords at the end wrong:
Last two measures:
A7b9(b13)sus l A7b9(b13) ll
^In the second to last measure you're using a B in the chord and in the undervoice - use a Bb instead, and you're good.
^In that last measure you have a weird C in one of the voices - this has to be C#, because obviously.
^As well as that, the undervoices in these two measures are kinda weird - They look very random
^And also, there's a bunch of close intervals that collide in the deep.

[JDMEK5]

^In the second to last measure you're using a B in the chord and in the undervoice - use a Bb instead, and you're good.

It's actually B natural. I'm 110% sure. G major that gets bumped up to an A7 to lead to the D minor at the beginning again. It makes sense.

^In that last measure you have a weird C in one of the voices - this has to be C#, because obviously.

Right. Fixed.

^As well as that, the undervoices in these two measures are kinda weird - They look very random

I double and triple checked. Everything's good.

^And also, there's a bunch of close intervals that collide in the deep.

Fixed.

Thanks Jompa!

[Jompa]

It's actually B natural. I'm 110% sure. G major that gets bumped up to an A7 to lead to the D minor at the beginning again. It makes sense.

Yeah, no. Definitely wrong.

[JDMEK5]

Baha ok. I'll take your word for it then.

[JDMEK5]

About time I rolled out another. And hey look! This one's not Pokémon!

The Legend of Zelda: A Link To The Past - Overworld - [MUS] [MIDI] [PDF] [YouTube][/url]

Leave comments and critique!

[Olimar12345]

Have you tried playing those first three measures? I can't play 32nd note chords at that tempo. colon capital pee