JDMEK5's Banana Hoard

[JDMEK5]

The Legend of Zelda: Spirit Tracks - Byrne's Death - [MUS] [MIDI] [PDF] [YouTube][/url]

The Legend of Zelda: Spirit Tracks - The End of the Chancellor - [MUS] [MIDI] [PDF] [YouTube][/url]

No special comments this time. Let me know what you think!

[Yugi]

Byrne is a Gym Leader?

[JDMEK5]

*pfft* Wow. I just realized I forgot that. XD Oh well. Fixed now. 'Tis a shame that the only comments I can get are on my typos..

[FierceDeity]

'Tis a shame that the only comments I can get are on my typos.

Haha yeah, hasn't been too much commentary as of late. I'll take a quick look at The End of the Chancellor, I suppose
It's very good. Two minute details I wanna point out, though. One, I think those two quarter note A's in bar 5 are just one half note. Two, I think it'd sound nice if you added in the last little chromatic couplet in bar 4. That is, if you put the Db-C over the 1st and 3rd notes of the 32nd note run. If you're worried about playability, you could notate it as optional.
That's all. Great job
Oh, and I'm really jealous of the length of this arrangement XD

[JDMEK5]

Thanks, Deity.

I think those two quarter note A's in bar 5 are just one half note.

Hm. You're right. Done.

Two, I think it'd sound nice if you added in the last little chromatic couplet in bar 4. That is, if you put the Db-C over the 1st and 3rd notes of the 32nd note run. If you're worried about playability, you could notate it as optional.

Not sure what you meant by that. I failed to follow you there..

Oh, and I'm really jealous of the length of this arrangement XD

I know. It's my pride and joy. :] *sarcasm

[FierceDeity]

You know how the top line of the melody in bar 4 goes from F up to Bb, then down a half step to A natural? Right after, it goes up to Db, then down a half step to C, still in sixteenth notes. So, you could notate that in the second layer (my first idea of just having those notes added on top of the first and third 32nd notes was stupid/probably resulting from my deep-seated hatred of having to layer in finale, disregard that).

[JDMEK5]

disregard that

Ok then.

Rolled out a new one! This one was written for piano originally, making it really nice as an arrangement.

Pokémon Black/White Version - Unwavering Emotions - [MUS] [MIDI] [PDF] [YouTube][/url]

Please comment and/or critique!

[Jompa]

Nice

[Yugi]

dude are you trying to arrange every song in this game

[SlowPokemon]

Already done by shado a couple years ago tho

[FierceDeity]

Argh, sorry, I don't make much sense when I'm tired XD I didn't mean to disregard the comment entirely, but to disregard the original way in which I said to do it. My updated suggestion is to have, in 16th notes at the end of bar 4, Db and C written in on a second layer. If that still doesn't make sense, I'll just write it out once I get back from class.

[JDMEK5]

Nice

Thanks, Jompa! No things-to-improve from you is one of the best immediate compliments an arrangement could receive. (Assuming you weren't holding back on me)

dude are you trying to arrange every song in this game

Maaayyyybbbeeee..

Already done by shado a couple years ago tho

Well that's fine. Good for him; this song is awesome.

Argh, sorry, I don't make much sense when I'm tired XD I didn't mean to disregard the comment entirely, but to disregard the original way in which I said to do it. My updated suggestion is to have, in 16th notes at the end of bar 4, Db and C written in on a second layer. If that still doesn't make sense, I'll just write it out once I get back from class.

Lol maybe do that. This (^) made more sense than before, but I'm still not 100% sure of what you mean. Maybe showing me would be best.

[Jompa]

Thanks, Jompa! No things-to-improve from you is one of the best immediate compliments an arrangement could receive. (Assuming you weren't holding back on me)

You're flattering me.
I really meant it - good job!

[FierceDeity]

Whoops, apparently I'm still really incoherent in the morning. I meant that the last two sixteenth notes you have written in bar 4, Db and C, are reiterated again an octave up. And to risk my point being even further diminished by my apparent inability to explain anything, I'm just gonna give you a MUS file showing what I mean.

[JDMEK5]

You're flattering me.
I really meant it - good job!

Thanks man.

Whoops, apparently I'm still really incoherent in the morning. I meant that the last two sixteenth notes you have written in bar 4, Db and C, are reiterated again an octave up. And to risk my point being even further diminished by my apparent inability to explain anything, I'm just gonna give you a MUS file showing what I mean.

You know what's funny? I finally understood what you meant. What I saw on the example is exactly what I had pictured in my head from reading that. (^) And I concur. I'll make the change momentarily.