[PC] Yume Nikki - "FC Castle" by Rwars

Started by Zeta, July 16, 2018, 07:59:42 PM

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Zeta

Submission Information:

Series: Other
Game: Yume Nikki
Console: PC
Title: FC Castle
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Rwars

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Sebastian

Nice work!
Two things:
- Go ahead and remove the "s" in "https" from the copyright info.
- The composer/arranger names are a bit misaligned. Right-align those.




InsigTurtle

Only issue I'm noticing is beat 1.5 of m.3, that E is pretty difficult for a regular piano player to hit with the A. In m.1, it's fine because you have the LH to help out, but here it's not too easy unless you pedal to keep the B in the bass going. So you should try to add an indication to a performer so they know how exactly they should play that (unless you want them to decide for themselves, in which case the current version is fine)

Rwars

Quote from: Sebastian on July 18, 2018, 06:56:24 PM- Go ahead and remove the "s" in "https" from the copyright info.
- The composer/arranger names are a bit misaligned. Right-align those.
Hm, dunno why the composer/arranger lines keep getting misaligned, even if I make sure that they're aligned beforehand. Also, if I remember, doesn't https work fine?

Quote from: InsigTurtle on July 24, 2018, 01:54:39 AMOnly issue I'm noticing is beat 1.5 of m.3, that E is pretty difficult for a regular piano player to hit with the A. In m.1, it's fine because you have the LH to help out, but here it's not too easy unless you pedal to keep the B in the bass going. So you should try to add an indication to a performer so they know how exactly they should play that (unless you want them to decide for themselves, in which case the current version is fine)
I'll leave it blank, since it could be that, they could just reach, left hand or right hand. There's probably more possibilities that's slipping from my mind, even.

Sebastian

Quote from: Rwars on July 29, 2018, 04:21:03 AMAlso, if I remember, doesn't https work fine?
We've decided that we want to just have http on our all sheets for conformaty's sake.



Latios212

Quote from: Rwars on July 29, 2018, 04:21:03 AMAlso, if I remember, doesn't https work fine?
We haven't actually performed the migration to https yet (it's on our to-do list). Formatting guidelines will be updated after that takes place.

Anyway, sheet looks great! I think it's pretty clearly implied to take the middle layer with the left hand.
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