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Author Topic: [NDS] Phoenix Wright: Ace Attorney - "Marvin Grossberg ~ Old Age, Regret, Retribution" by Onionleaf  (Read 137 times)

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Submission Information:

Series: Ace Attorney
Game: Phoenix Wright: Ace Attorney
Console: Nintendo DS
Title: Marvin Grossberg ~ Old Age, Regret, Retribution
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Onionleaf
« Last Edit: July 03, 2018, 08:50:28 AM by Onionleaf »
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Again, sorry for the lack of response. Here's the link to the previous submission: http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?topic=9872

To answer the query about the mordents, yes it was due to Finale playback that I have included them instead of grace notes. At the moment though, the playback sounds off only in m 6.
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Looks good!

Only one thing I noticed:

It's best to put quarter note  = 90, just so it's clear that you mean that rather than a eighth note etc. Just be super clear with tempo markings! I suggest notating it like this:

Swing (swing marking)
quarter note  = 90
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Cool, thanks for the handy advice, I've updated the files. :)
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Nice work. Notes are great.
Few things:
- You put slurs on some of the grace notes, but not all of them. For examples, M. 6 & 8.
- Put a courtesy natural on the B in M. 13 (RH).
- Also, on that same note, make the parenthesis farther apart. It's really close to that note. Same as the note in M. 15 (with parentheses).
- Put a courtesy natural on the B in M. 15 (LH).
- The top staff in M. 12 could be confusing to some. It looks like there is an eighth between the quarter notes with that quarter rest hidden. I would recommend un-hiding the rest and moving the eighth rest down a bit.
- I'd mess with the formatting a bit to give the arranger names and composer name more room, but I'll leave this one up to you.


That's all I have for this one.
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In case you didn't notice, you made a typo in your name on the sheet.
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Haha, Onionélaf sounds like a name for some fancy French cuisine. :D

I made all those adjustments, thanks!
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2 comments
-Should the DS arranger be bolded, since he's an arranger?
-Grace notes should be slured, but aren't those phrases already slurred in the first place?
 

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