[3DS] Pokémon Omega Ruby & Pokémon Alpha Sapphire - "Lilycove City" by Olimar12345

Started by Zeta, July 25, 2018, 08:00:47 PM

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Zeta

Submission Information:

Series: Pokémon
Game: Pokémon Omega Ruby & Pokémon Alpha Sapphire
Console: Nintendo 3DS
Title: Lilycove City
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Olimar12345

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Latios212

Just a couple of minor comments from me:
- I've always heard the figure at the end of m. 13 as part of the melody as opposed to an embellishment, and think it would be better written as 32nd notes since the B falls exactly on beat 3. This isn't something you have to change, just thought I'd mention it.
- Suggestion: try a measure distribution of 5-6-6-4-5 measures per system on page 2, since currently the first and fourth systems are noticeably more cramped than the third and fifth.

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Quote from: Dudeman on February 22, 2016, 10:16:37 AM
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