[GCN] Super Monkey Ball - "Desert" by Static

Started by Zeta, June 03, 2018, 01:09:55 PM

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Zeta

Submission Information:

Series: Other
Game: Super Monkey Ball
Console: Nintendo GameCube
Title: Desert
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Static

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Static

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Edit: Sheet has been revised with repeat systems so it fits on 2 pages instead of 3.

Latios212

Have you considered sempre 8vb? That entire left hand part is awfully low.
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Static

I considered it now. The files have been edited.

nacho2420

Beautiful looking sheet!

I do hear G,C,G, (the C eing C4/middle C) as the RH voice instead of D,G,C. The rest of the chords would voice lead accordingly.

Also maybe make the "LH sempre 8vb" bigger? I was almost gonna comment about the LH colliding with the RH but I see the light now, lol

Good work!

Static

Thanks for the feedback! I hear the top voice now, but I also hear the other voice I had with the D, so I moved that up and edited the voicing just a bit. It sounds much more full now, I think. I also made the LH sempre 8vb a bit bigger.

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Sebastian

I don't have any further comments on this one. Looks good to me.



Latios212

Looks great. Just a spacing comment - you've got ample room at the bottom of page 2, so you can move everything down so it's not so close to the header. You can also put 4/5 systems on each page if you want to flesh out the two sheets.
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Quote from: Dudeman on February 22, 2016, 10:16:37 AM
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Static

I respaced the systems, it's a lot more even now.

Zeta

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