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Author Topic: [Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Hole in One" by WaluigiTime64  (Read 164 times)

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[Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Hole in One" by WaluigiTime64
« on: June 03, 2018, 11:10:15 AM »

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Series: Other
Game: Rhythm Heaven Fever
Console: Nintendo Wii
Title: Hole in One
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: WaluigiTime64
« Last Edit: July 18, 2018, 10:40:50 AM by WaluigiTime64 »
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Re: [Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Hole in One" by WaluigiTime64
« Reply #1 on: June 03, 2018, 11:10:53 AM »


Somewhat tricky, but not too hard to check.
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Re: [Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Hole in One" by WaluigiTime64
« Reply #2 on: June 05, 2018, 12:28:45 AM »

Ooh, interesting. Love this song. As usual, I never imagined this working out well for solo piano when I thought about arranging it but you've done a great job!

- Hypermeter is nice and all, but I don't think it warrants having these unsightly two-measure systems. Speaking of the intro, don't you think it's a bit misleading to leave out the first couple of bars, even if there's nothing pitched playing?
- The left hand of the first section (and when that comes back later) worries me a bit. Do you intend for the pedal to be held for four measures at a time? That would blur the melody to a bad effect. I would suggest not tying the whole notes for that long.
- How about filling in some of the silence by including some of those really neat jazzy chords when the right hand is doing nothing in the first section? :P Same with the last section, you could try including a bit more of the riffing/chording instead of having blocks of two measures with only bass in them.
- End the 8va at the barline in 68, instead of arbitrarily before it.
- I think it's really cool what you did with the left hand beginning at 37. I like it.
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Re: [Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Hole in One" by WaluigiTime64
« Reply #3 on: June 05, 2018, 10:12:48 AM »

Ooh, interesting. Love this song. As usual, I never imagined this working out well for solo piano when I thought about arranging it but you've done a great job!
Thanks! I'll be honest, I didn't see this working out for a long time either, until I sat down and thought about it.

- Hypermeter is nice and all, but I don't think it warrants having these unsightly two-measure systems. Speaking of the intro, don't you think it's a bit misleading to leave out the first couple of bars, even if there's nothing pitched playing?
Fixed the second two-measure system, but not yet the first. It'd be fixed if I knew a good way to fill in the empty measures at the start. I can see where you're coming from with the "misleading" element. Would really appreciate a suggestion!

- The left hand of the first section (and when that comes back later) worries me a bit. Do you intend for the pedal to be held for four measures at a time? That would blur the melody to a bad effect. I would suggest not tying the whole notes for that long.
I made the chords half as long, which is a bit more reasonable I think. Very good point.

- How about filling in some of the silence by including some of those really neat jazzy chords when the right hand is doing nothing in the first section? :P Same with the last section, you could try including a bit more of the riffing/chording instead of having blocks of two measures with only bass in them.
This takes me back to how I originally tried the first section. I originally was just going to use the piano part for the LH, but then I got really lazy trying to figure out the chords, and the tonality was screwed anyway, so that's how I ended up with what I have now. I've put the chords back in though, now in the RH.

- End the 8va at the barline in 68, instead of arbitrarily before it.
Fixed.

- I think it's really cool what you did with the left hand beginning at 37. I like it.
Thanks! Definitely the hardest part of this piece (in terms of arranging and performing).
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Re: [Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Hole in One" by WaluigiTime64
« Reply #4 on: June 20, 2018, 09:14:42 PM »

Bump.
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Re: [Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Hole in One" by WaluigiTime64
« Reply #5 on: July 05, 2018, 01:49:32 PM »

Beautiful sheet. Few things:

- Courtesy # on the LH G# in M. 67 (beat 3).
- The tenuto is slightly colliding with the tie in M. 68.
- Same thing with the slur in M. 83.
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Re: [Wii] Rhythm Heaven Fever - "Hole in One" by WaluigiTime64
« Reply #6 on: July 18, 2018, 10:41:56 AM »

- Courtesy # on the LH G# in M. 67 (beat 3).
- The tenuto is slightly colliding with the tie in M. 68.
- Same thing with the slur in M. 83.
Finally done. Was extremely tricky, but I think I managed to do it.
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