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Author Topic: [GB] Game & Watch Gallery - "Manhole" by ShyYoshiGuy  (Read 95 times)

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[GB] Game & Watch Gallery - "Manhole" by ShyYoshiGuy
« on: May 31, 2018, 03:49:44 PM »

Submission Information:

Series: Other
Game: Game & Watch Gallery
Console: Game Boy
Title: Manhole
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: ShyYoshiGuy
« Last Edit: June 02, 2018, 02:51:48 AM by Olimar12345 »
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Re: [GB] Game & Watch Gallery - "Manhole" by ShyYoshiGuy
« Reply #1 on: May 31, 2018, 04:09:08 PM »

Be sure to post the YouTube video in a reply when you submit something. This is so we can check to see if the notes/rhythms etc. are correct.

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Re: [GB] Game & Watch Gallery - "Manhole" by ShyYoshiGuy
« Reply #2 on: May 31, 2018, 04:28:52 PM »

Looking at this a little more closely, there are some spots that you could incorporate more of the harmony in relatively easily:
-Measures 11-12 (and the same thing at 19-20) you can add the third above.
-Measures 29-34 leave plenty of room down below to add the missing voice.

Here's an edition that includes the above suggestions: https://www.dropbox.com/s/b50zof41xt467yu/Manhole_2018-1234567.mus?dl=1

Additionally, some might suggest using an 8va, but I don't think it's necessary. Pretty much everywhere up high in this arrangement works its way up scalular-ly, and the off-set octave jump that comes with adding an 8va would be more harm than potentially lowering other things.
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Re: [GB] Game & Watch Gallery - "Manhole" by ShyYoshiGuy
« Reply #3 on: May 31, 2018, 04:50:04 PM »

I have updated the submission as you suggested.
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Re: [GB] Game & Watch Gallery - "Manhole" by ShyYoshiGuy
« Reply #4 on: May 31, 2018, 04:53:28 PM »

Excellent. I approve of this submission.
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Re: [GB] Game & Watch Gallery - "Manhole" by ShyYoshiGuy
« Reply #5 on: May 31, 2018, 06:42:05 PM »

I was going to suggest an 8va, but olimar brought up a valid point and I agree with it.
Additionally, some might suggest using an 8va, but I don't think it's necessary. Pretty much everywhere up high in this arrangement works its way up scalular-ly, and the off-set octave jump that comes with adding an 8va would be more harm than potentially lowering other things.
Otherwise, this is an excellent first submission. Great job.

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Re: [GB] Game & Watch Gallery - "Manhole" by ShyYoshiGuy
« Reply #6 on: May 31, 2018, 06:42:29 PM »

This submission has been accepted by Maelstrom.

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