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Author Topic: [GEN] Alex Kidd in the Enchanted Castle - "Castle" by Sebastian  (Read 150 times)

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Series: Other
Game: Alex Kidd in the Enchanted Castle
Console: Sega Genesis
Title: Castle
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Sebastian
« Last Edit: June 01, 2018, 03:42:49 AM by Sebastian »
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Re: [GEN] Alex Kidd in the Enchanted Castle - "Castle" by Sebastian
« Reply #1 on: May 16, 2018, 02:36:50 AM »

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Re: [GEN] Alex Kidd in the Enchanted Castle - "Castle" by Sebastian
« Reply #2 on: May 22, 2018, 03:05:03 AM »

I approve of the notes, but there's one big issue plaguing this sheet: the spacing.
For example, this measure:

The 8th rest gets less room than the two 16th notes, and it's really disorientating to sight read. I'd recommend rearranging measures to make it fit better. You have a whole second page, why not fill it up the rest of the way? If you want, you can put 3 measures in the first 3 systems and 2 in each after that (and 3 for the last one). It'll screw up the hypermeter and your ossia measures, but it looks a lot better. If you come up with something better, go for it.

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Re: [GEN] Alex Kidd in the Enchanted Castle - "Castle" by Sebastian
« Reply #3 on: May 22, 2018, 11:53:17 PM »

Fixed. Thanks for the feedback.
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Re: [GEN] Alex Kidd in the Enchanted Castle - "Castle" by Sebastian
« Reply #4 on: May 30, 2018, 02:18:39 PM »

Bump.
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Re: [GEN] Alex Kidd in the Enchanted Castle - "Castle" by Sebastian
« Reply #5 on: June 01, 2018, 03:25:01 AM »

Careful - your left margin on page 2 doesn't match that of page 1. I'd increase the size of the one on page 2 to make them the same.

Banking off of what Maelstrom said, have you considered 2-measure systems for some of the piece as he mentioned? Not saying you have to, just if you've tested it out. Right now the first system on page 2 is pretty cramped, though I suppose that might be passable if it's only that one time. But it will get more cramped after you increase the margin.
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Re: [GEN] Alex Kidd in the Enchanted Castle - "Castle" by Sebastian
« Reply #6 on: June 01, 2018, 03:45:24 AM »

Fixed.
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Re: [GEN] Alex Kidd in the Enchanted Castle - "Castle" by Sebastian
« Reply #7 on: June 01, 2018, 03:47:20 AM »

Splendid!
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Re: [GEN] Alex Kidd in the Enchanted Castle - "Castle" by Sebastian
« Reply #8 on: June 01, 2018, 03:47:28 AM »

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