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Show posts MenuQuote from: Latios212 on November 16, 2019, 02:24:49 PMJust a few very slight visual things:
- Move the slur in m. 18 away from the flat
- Move the gliss. in m. 22 slightly away from the left D
- Move the left end of the slur on the grace notes in m. 23 down a bit
Also I'd personally make the first system two measures instead of the last since it's shortened slightly, but that's up to you.
Quote from: Static on November 16, 2019, 12:49:53 PMWhat a shame the only non-extended version of this has the engine noise...
- m3 LH beat 4: The first 8th note should be a 16th and the 2nd should be a dotted 8th.
- m17 LH: I hear this measure like this:
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[close]- m19-20 RH: I would move the right end 2nd (from the top) tie to line up with the 3rd tie.
- m23: For the RH, I would make the C grace note an 8th note (make the F before it an 8th note also), and then leave the F and G# (which should be an Ab by the way) as grace notes. For the LH, the F and D on beat 3 should just be 2 16th notes right on beat 3.
- m24 RH beat 2.5: You should just write this as a staccato 8th note to reduce clutter.
- You can space the last system normally, I don't think it looks out of place that way. Up to you though.
Quote from: Static on November 13, 2019, 11:53:35 AMI am not at a computer to check this yet, but I can tell you the title should be "Persona 3 FES" without the colon.
Quote from: LeviR.star on June 06, 2019, 08:26:38 PMUntil next time, I hope you all have fun learning about yet another game you never knew existed.™
Quote from: Yug_Guy on November 03, 2019, 05:29:56 PM...I'm not trying to shill myself or anything, but the only Clu Clu Land OST video on youtube is the one with the horrible reverb.
Quote from: Latios212 on November 02, 2019, 07:55:03 PMOnly a couple of comments:
- I think m. 24 would be better written as 4-tuplets instead of 8-tuplets so it's clearer when the notes fall on the beat.
- For m. 53, 55, 56 I would suggest making the first left hand octave a dotted quarter and/or tenuto since that's a different part there.
Quote from: Latios212 on November 02, 2019, 07:55:03 PMThis is really good. Clean, accurate, and simple to play. Happy to see this one
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