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Show posts MenuQuote from: Static on February 11, 2022, 05:07:30 PMLooks good! I swear you had it fixed earlier, but the titles on pages 2-4 should match page 1. That's all I have left!I forget!
Quote from: Static on February 10, 2022, 02:20:02 PMLooks good, one last thing though: the dotted rest in m4 should be split into quarter + 8thDid it
Quote from: Static on February 09, 2022, 12:43:19 PMVery cool to finally see some PC Engine/TG-16 stuff. There were a bunch of great overlooked games and soundtracks to be found here...Really thanks Static!!Edit: Also, the titles on pages 2-4 should match the one on page 1.
- m11 RH: The natural sign is too far away from the note; it should be moved closer. To get the default spacing, remove and re-enter the note and accidental.
- m12 RH: The glissando marking is touching the flag of the 8th note.
- m21-28 RH: The lower voice should not be tied; it re-articulates in each measure.
- m29-32 RH: Both voices should be tied all the way through.
- Before the track loops, there are an additional 4 measures of the LH ostinato that you're missing at the end.
Unrelated, but I think it might be a good idea to change the console abbreviation to [TG-16], with the dash. This is the most common abbreviation I see at least, and it wouldn't be out of place with our other abbreviations like the CD-i. Curious to hear anyone's thoughts on this.
Quote from: Latios212 on February 07, 2022, 03:56:00 PMAwesome, changes look good. I'll approve, pending the title.I've done it. Thanks a lot Latios <3
There needs to be a (verifiable) reason for including "Character Demo", otherwise we should just leave it as "Dungeon Theme 7".
Quote from: Latios212 on February 06, 2022, 01:40:37 PMI think this may be the first oneDid it!
In the future, please try to link a version with just the track you're arranging, for reference:
Feedback:
- Remove the D whole notes in m. 5-12, since the left hand is playing them anyway; it's not possible to keep them sustained.
- This is similar to what Fantastic Ike said above. I would suggest not tying over the lower whole notes between m. 6-7 and m. 10-11 in favor of re-striking them when the melody changes. Although that voice is sustained for four measures at a time in the original, the piano can't sustain the volume like the original does and re-striking them when the melody changes would sound good on piano.
- The same comment applies to not tying the whole notes between m. 21-22, 23-24, 25-26, 27-28. Though you can keep them if you want as it's only sustaining a voice for two measures here instead of four. If you do, make sure to flip the ties downwards.
- The D.C. is a bit high.
Also, do you have a source/reference for why this theme is called "Character Demo"?
Quote from: Libera on January 28, 2022, 12:16:58 PMThis looks pretty clean, I just have a few suggestions.
-In bars 3-11 you have a lot of mixing of staccato and non-staccato notes and I think it would massively aid the readability if you added slurs onto the non-staccato notes. Like this:-The 8va and tempo marking could be a little lower at the start.Spoiler
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-The slur in bar 2 is a little off from the target G on beat 3. Try to make it reach the staccato dot in the usual position.
-The midi currently loops endlessly, so you should change the D.S. to only repeat twice.
I have fixed all of these in a file if you want to use it. Feel free.
Quote from: Fantastic Ike on January 21, 2022, 06:17:10 AMCool, let's see what others have to saydid it!
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