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#31
I arranged 078 - You Idiot.


As for the song that follows it...What. The. F*ck. Is this. And I'm not even thinking of the drums part. In fact, it's a terrible idea to arrange some breakcore when you're tired as f*ck. -__-"

More seriously:
Minor spoilers on the last boss, if you didn't play the game, DO IT! ;P
I'm not used to that much accidental notes, and given that Toby was probably one step apart using quarter-tones for this song, I'm totally lost when looking for the Omega Flowey's theme key signature (just looking for something writable is a torture, just look at the left hand I did for "You Idiot"). I'll need your advice on this one :/
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Bonus: Kudos to anyone who can arrange the laugh effect.
#32
Quote from: mastersuperfan on November 22, 2015, 01:48:27 PMThe 3rd and 9th notes in the left hand of most measures, turn them from an eighth note into two sixteenths tied together to show the beat clearly. Same applies to the right hand in m4, m6, m8, and m10-11--turn it from a dotted eighth into a sixteenth tied to an eighth.

Title should be in quotes.

Delete "Dating Fight!" in the top left.

Pretty sure normal pianists can't reach that far in the right hand near the end.

Beginning repeat is unnecessary.

Don't use a repeat sign at the end; use a D.C. instead. You already have repeats earlier on.

I condensed it in hope it doesn't take a second page for one system. But I'll do it proper then. I didn't know for the title quotes. I'll lower the third voice by one octave.


Quote from: Zeila on November 22, 2015, 08:53:56 PMFeedback for 072 - Song That Might Play When You Fight Sans

Solid arrangement! However, some harmonies were missing throughout the whole song. I tried adding them in, but some of them sound a bit iffy so you should double check it. Also, next time you should slur the grace notes

Thanks for that, I missed a lot (if not all) of harmonies. And I totally forget about grace notes. I always forget. >_>
Gonna work it again and post an update later. (I already got an error on measure 3 and 5 where the melody bases on D Major and the first B was in fact a A)
Btw, these additional harmonies makes it even harder to play, lol

Updated links:
027 - Dating Fight!
072 - Song that definitely has a too long name
#33
I thought it would be harder, but I managed 027 - Dating Fight!, now In Submission. The panel says I've reach max submissions (2), even if one of them has been accepted...

Dropbox link instead, I don't think it need review but I'm still open to suggestions.

I'd love to do the two Mettaton's report songs but let's face it, Your Best Nightmare's gonna keep me busy a while and my semester exams are approaching... ;__;

Btw Pathetic House is a really slowed down version of Muffet's theme, if you want to spare yourself some time ;) (pun intended =P)
#34
I finished Stronger Monsters, and I feel confident about it, except for the last part maybe.
So I submitted it: 053 - Stronger Monsters
#35

From the Undertale topic:
Quote from: mariolegofan on November 19, 2015, 11:43:06 AMCurious, why do you have parentheses around some notes?
Quote from: Enaryok on November 20, 2015, 02:32:29 AMThese are optional notes from the trumpet-like thing. I find them hard to play with the rest of the song, and you can play the song fine without them. So the player can easily discern the layer he can choose not to play. Even if these notes aren't played, there are the accents to remember the presence of the trumpet voice.
On the last part, the optional notes are from a string-like thing.
#36
Quote from: mariolegofan on November 19, 2015, 11:43:06 AMCurious, why do you have parentheses around some notes?

These are optional notes from the trumpet-like thing. I find them hard to play with the rest of the song, and you can play the song fine without them. So the player can easily discern the layer he can choose not to play. Even if these notes aren't played, there are the accents to remember the presence of the trumpet voice.
#38
Hey MJsSheet, try to raise the higher note of the second chord, I think that's the one you missed. Btw, you should provide a .mus or any e-sheet format so we can see it (that makes it easier to correct chords imo) when asking for advice.

@Yug_Guy You made a typo in my name on the first post ;_;
But I got you this so you have a valid reason to edit it =P

This theme is...SO HOT!!! ❤_❤

Whoever gets this quote, gets the font =P
#39
The corrupted songs from Genocide are for most the same music but lower pitched (Toby loves doing that in the game, such as pitched higher and higher Undyne's theme, for example, or even Flowey's theme slowed down a lot to become the "But nobody came" theme).

That said, after that project I plan to do an Aftermath medley, which would be an audio summary of a Genocide run. ^^

And while we're at it, I'll claim two more songs:

027 - Dating Fight
079 - Your Best Nightmare (I'll maybe try a piano+drums version as a challenge, not to be submitted here ofc)
#40
Ready for review! Download link: 072 - Sans oh my god you're supposed to be lazy and not pick names that long for songs >_>

It's almost finished, except for two main things on which I need some help:

- Measure 1 and 3: I made this pattern left-hand because of the difficulty to spam G staccato at 120 bpm, and I want to know if I should keep it or remove it.
- Right hand measure 9 and 10, then the red layer measure 11 to 13: I simply can't get the notes and get it to sound good (I know these aren't the good notes I put in), but if it isn't there, the music just lacks something, please send help >< I didn't put it in the two last measures to mark the end of the song.

Also, the 8va on measure 11-12 and 15-16 is to reflect the bass that isn't the same between measures with melody and measures without. The red layer should also reflect it with octave doubling at 13-14 and eventually 17-18, but since I can't get it to sound good...
#41
Progress of 072 - Song That Might Play When You Fight Sans

I'll also claim 053 - Stronger Monsters.

EDIT: The full Menu (093) has been accepted.
#42
Quote from: mariolegofan on November 14, 2015, 06:16:23 AMThe glockenspiel that Bespinben noted is in there is not an octave away from the melody. It's like 2 or 3 octaves higher.

Oh, I misread.
#43
I'll add a repeat and reupload it, thanks for the feedback. For octaves, MLF suggested me to not add them (earlier in the topic).

EDIT: Done!
#44
Thanks for the edit, I've still a lot to learn about harmonics, octaves were part of my poor try at it (I hope I can improve this while arranging Undertale songs). I didn't put the same on first and second line to add a bit of diversity, and also to see from reactions if one was too far from the original (still the doubts on "how to chords").

I'm reuploading it right now!
#45
Quote from: mariolegofan on November 11, 2015, 01:42:11 PMBtw, you don't need to put this [ youtube ][/youtube ]. Just put the link and the video will appear when you post the post. :P

The more I know =D
And thanks again for the help ^^