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Don't hear it. I recommend googling slurs, as you seem to have trouble finding where to put them. As for pedal, you can just hold the pedal through each measure and let it off at the end.

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ugh yes.

TPBM has applied for colleges

Yes. At least all the reality shows..... *shudders*

TPBM thinks nintendo is for kids

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Patience young one...

What are we waiting for? I don't know who will ever do these

I personally wouldn't use 8vb, it's easily readable due to the top note of the octave (and it would mess up the higher notes in the bass.)

A good rule for piano music is to try to keep things from exceeding three ledger lines.

There are 5

Woops.

When you say that the violin has no harmony, do you mean that there should be no other harmony in the right hand? Because I'm fitting another voice in the right hand as well--should I take it out?

I hear it now

What exactly do you mean by "Keep Lh chords in Lh"?

Nvm. Something seems weird about measure 16. I'd recomend double checking it. At the very least, the Lh is a C instead of a D

And also, I could be wrong, but I'm fairly certain that most of my harmonies are correct--the only thing I'm actually unsure about is the Lh chord in measure 12.

The harmonies are correct. The Lh chord in measure 12 is correct (I think), and it should be arpeggiated.

Also, when you say chords should be arpeggiated, on beat 1 of measure 17, is it okay to use one arpeggio between two different layers?

You should only really do this when it's part of a cadence. (Ending harmony)

One more thing--the B flat in measure 8 is an octave and a half lower than the F in the left hand, should I move it up an octave to make it playable? If not, how should I change it?

This is absolutely fine. You are not holding any other notes at that point, so it's not that bad.

Other advice from me:
-Pno. should be removed
-Please, make the composers two lines
-Some pedal markings wouldn't hurt

And from Slow:
-The ledger lines in measures 3 and 4 for the LH are pretty high. I'd recommend moving the notes from beat 2 and 3 of those measures into the RH's second layer and marking them LH with the expressive text tool, or changing to treble clef in the LH for those two measures.
-Maelstrom was kind of vague when he mentioned slurs, so in case you don't understand or need some help, think about it like this: the music is a conversation, and each slur represents a phrase that makes up a sentence. So starting at measure 5, I would mark a slur from the G to the C in measure 6, since that strikes me as the first phrase, and so on and so forth. There's no concrete rule here as far as phrasing goes, just use your intuition to place the slurs.

Those last 8 songs aren't going to be arranged....... So now what?

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