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#1
Forum Games / Re: Topic Kicking
October 31, 2021, 11:45:35 PM
eggn't
#2
Site News / Re: Staff Update
August 25, 2021, 08:30:54 PM
Hi guys, I'm glad I got the chance to mess around and contribute to the community for the past few years. So many things have changed, and so many people have changed since then. I am sure that we have many great members among us who will step up to the plate!
#3
Forum Games / Re: Topic Kicking
October 24, 2020, 08:30:47 PM
egg
#4
Forum Games / Re: Whoevers post last wins. New rule.
October 24, 2020, 08:30:36 PM
no
#5
Forum Games / Re: Topic Kicking
October 12, 2020, 11:29:25 PM
no
#6
Forum Games / Re: Whoevers post last wins. New rule.
October 12, 2020, 11:29:06 PM
no
#7
Congrats!
#9
I think it looks good, it is quite a lot but since I hear the stresses in the original I think it works out.

Just need a second opinion here but I personally approve
#10
i'm hearing m14 as msf said
m48's bass i'm hearing an octave lower than written
otherwise, i have nothing else to say
#12
I think that works. I don't see any other problems so this has my approval
#13
This one's almost there, I just have a couple of comments

m.22: the lone E on the third beat should be an octave higher
Intro: I don't quite understand the justification for the tenuto markings on alternate notes in the bass. I feel doing something akin to the treble clef would be better? Also, as you have a simile marking at m.5 you could also remove the tenuto markings from thereon out.

Optional stuff:
I feel like you know what you're doing, so you could add just a few optional things to really make it shine. For example, you could add phrase marks and tenuto marks to really emulate the phrasing and emphasis found in the original. Completely optional, but hey, it'd be cool.
#14
i take it that michael jackson was not involved however

my only real beef with this is m.8, m.12 where the two voices in the top staff overlap and obscures the direction of the melody and the accomp on beat 1.5: on a pdf especially, where it's all black and white, it can be hard to tell what is going where. i'd use the note mover tool here just to boop them apart slightly so when you read it you can clearly say "oh this A is from the melody and this C is from the accomp"
#15
Couple of comments
- I noticed your use of the (i forgot what it's called, but like in m.7 beat 2.5) is a bit inconsistent compared to what i hear
- For m.8 and other related measures, i think putting the top in another layer would be preferred (it shows how that line continues, and it's perfectly possible with the pedal you've notated)
- honestly? i'm not sure if it's just me but the courtesy flat on m.11 confuses me more than it helps, i think. looking through it, i would have already played a Db for the first beat, and seeing that courtesy accidental on the next Db would confuse me and make me second-guess myself
- m.28's first beat looks too empty compared to what i hear (a fuller D7) + misspelling