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Thanks for pointing that out, much appreciated! It's been fixed now.

Okay! I've added those extra harmonies in, and also got to add that new melody in (though it may be a look a bit questionable, to say the least...).

I actually agree more with the option of keeping it. Despite this piece only having 8 bars split into 2 distinguishable repeated sections, I just feel like it looks more uniform like this. Nevertheless, thanks for both of your inputs.

Any other quirks that need to be addressed?

Also, about that forward repeat in bar 1: should that be there? I re-inserted it for clarity's sake (since there are 2 repeated sections now), but now that I'm thinking about it, it might be a bit redundant.

Thanks for the advice! I've been using Finale for about 5 years now, so although I've gotten used to a few of the techniques and shortcuts, there's still a lot I don't know. I appreciate it! (And thanks for making the layout changes as well.)

Also, I decided to keep measure 5 the way it is. Before submitting the sheet, I had a friend glance at it to see if there were any errors (I'm not primarily a piano player myself), and there weren't any issues in terms of playing that part of the piece, so I've just kept it as it is, though I still do appreciate the feedback.

With that, the updated files are up.

In that case, I put up those edited sheets with the D.S.

(nice pun love it *laughs in Morse code*)

I tried doing this but to no avail. It looks fine, but the playback doesn't repeat the entire form, instead just ending after playing through it once. I marked in a D.S., so that it could repeat back to the top, and remembered to make sure that it would reset on repeat action. How do I get around this?

(The reason I wrote it out the way I did before was because of this problem; initially, I did want to make it 8 bars rather than 16 bars, but I wasn't sure how I would've gone about doing it, because I anticipated that this could've happened)

That's all been taken care of now. Thanks!

Figured I'd just do one more before I'm done with arranging music from this game.

Okay, that's all fixed. Thanks!

Alright, those small fixes were made. Thanks for all the help!

Edits were made (hope I caught what you meant about inverting downwards...)!

One thing I experimented with was changing the Eb to a fully voiced Ebma7 in root position from the 3rd space, which ended up losing the impact from the low end, and caused another problem of making the flute harmony go somewhere; it's normal from m 19-20, but then 20-21 did become a problem spot for adding in the rest of the flute harmony.

I understand that sometimes you have to cut back on one thing in order to bring something else out, in this case being a matter of retaining the original sound vs. adding the harmony. I'd prefer going towards the accessible option for this one.

Also fixed the dyad, thanks for pointing it out.

Aaaaand with that, I've addressed the issues that were brought up (including a title fix).