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Archive / Re: [NES] Anticipation - "Puzzle Solving" by JacopoTore
« on: May 20, 2017, 12:24:42 PM »
it upload files here because this site doesn't use java or flash or other stuffs. Anyway I'm using mozilla 16.0.1 on mac os 10.5.8

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Archive / Re: [NES] Anticipation - "Puzzle Solving" by JacopoTore
« on: May 20, 2017, 04:07:19 AM »
If you would like, I can replace the files in the original post for you.
I have only a browser that not permit to me to download through dropbox and many other sites.
If you can send me an email than I can upload files. If you won't you can do what you want

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Archive / Re: [NES] Anticipation - "Puzzle Solving" by JacopoTore
« on: May 19, 2017, 03:47:50 PM »
It's because now it looks more like the left hand's part.

Also, you have the wrong files posted above. I'd recommend just using the files I posted. I also fixed the playback so that the swing eighth notes play correctly.
Sorry I can't download through DropBox because I have an obsolete browser, can you send me .mus file for email?
jacopotore@gmail.com

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Archive / Re: [NES] Air Fortress - "Evacuation" by JacopoTore
« on: May 19, 2017, 03:39:06 PM »
One last thing: move the text "lasciar vibrare" down closer to the staff. Now that the 8va is gone, it doesn't need to be so high up. (Sorry, I did this in the file I posted in my previous post, but I forgot to mention it)
Ok I did it

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Archive / Re: [NES] Anticipation - "Puzzle Solving" by JacopoTore
« on: May 18, 2017, 01:51:27 PM »
-Your arranger and composer names need to be right aligned (they are off a bit).
-There is an unnecessary second space between the words "by" and "JacopoTore."
-Your tempo marking is far out to the left, move it closer to the staff.
-The F# in the RH in measure 11 should be spelled as a Gb. The harmony there is Ab7 and Gb is the seventh. This occurs again in measure 19, so please make the change there too.
-I'd suggest adding a courtesy natural on the E in measure 12 (RH). There's an Eb right before it and this might help people play the right note the first time. This occurs again in measure 20, so please make the change there too.
-In measures that look like measure 1 (measures 1, 3, 5, 7, 13 and 15) I would recommend flipping the stem of the lower notes in the RH to go the opposite direction of the moving line. When done this way, it would be easier to read and will look kind of like what you do in measures 9-12. You can do this by using the double/split stem tool in the special tools (if you're working on a version of finale higher than notepad).

Here is a version of the sheet with the above changes applied. If you want to just swap out these files for the one in the main post, that's okay. Doing so (or making the changes yourself) will result in this submission being accepted.
[MUS] [Midi] [PDF]

Ok I did it but I don't understand why it look be easier to red if we add stems

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Archive / Re: [NES] Air Fortress - "Evacuation" by JacopoTore
« on: May 18, 2017, 01:43:14 PM »
Looks good. Just a few more things before it's ready to be accepted.

-The URL needs to be center aligned.
-The composer name needs to be right aligned.
-In the last measure (measure 6), the F natural needs to be an E -sharp. It's borrowing that note from C-sharp major, in which case it would be the major third (E-sharp), not the lowered fourth (F natural).
-In measure 6, the last high G should be an F-double-sharp. It's the raised fourth (just like the one at the beginning of that measure).
-Judging by the way the YouTube video sounds, it doesn't sound like you need the 8va in this piece. It sounds like it is supposed to be one octave lower than it currently is. I would suggest removing it.

Here is a version of the sheet with the above changes applied. If you want to just swap out these files for the one in the main post, that's okay. Doing so (or making the changes yourself) will result in this submission being accepted.
[MUS] [Midi] [PDF]

Thank you! You are right I really don't know why I wrote these wrong notes! I apologize!

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Archive / Re: [NES] Anticipation - "Puzzle Solving" by JacopoTore
« on: May 17, 2017, 02:07:55 PM »
Ok did it
Hi I want to bump this post, I have another arrangement to upload.

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Archive / Re: [NES] Air Fortress - "Evacuation" by JacopoTore
« on: May 17, 2017, 02:04:32 PM »
Hi I want to bump this post, I have another arrangement to upload.

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Help! / Re: Problem with upload
« on: May 17, 2017, 02:03:28 PM »
Essentially if your thread sinks to a deeper part of the submissions board (usually halfway down the second page or so), you can "BUMP" it to bring it back to the first page, increasing the likelihood of an Updater to pay attention to it. You are allowed to double post for bumping purposes.
Ok really Thanks! I will do it

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Help! / Re: Problem with upload
« on: May 17, 2017, 01:44:21 PM »
She means that every month or so, you post in one of your submission threads so that the updaters might look at it.
Ok I think I understood, but I posted the last reply, so I need to post another reply?

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Help! / Re: Problem with upload
« on: May 17, 2017, 12:35:12 PM »
If you'd rather submit something else (with higher priority), you can delete/take down one of your arrangements from the NSM Panel and replace it. Otherwise, you'll have to wait (and bump your submissions threads every month or so as necessary).
Ok thank you!
What do you mean for "bump every month"?

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Help! / Re: Problem with upload
« on: May 17, 2017, 11:00:09 AM »
Everyone on this website has a limit of 2 submissions (admins included). There are no ranks; only music.
Ok thank you
Therefore I must to wait for my submissions?

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Help! / Re: Problem with upload
« on: May 17, 2017, 09:14:08 AM »
Hi, how I can become a composer? I have another arrangement to put in this site

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Archive / Re: [NES] Anticipation - "Puzzle Solving" by JacopoTore
« on: April 03, 2017, 02:24:36 PM »
Ok did it

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Archive / Re: [NES] Anticipation - "Puzzle Solving" by JacopoTore
« on: March 25, 2017, 07:38:14 PM »
You might want to write down that the eighth notes are swung, as there is no indication to do so. I'm not a fan of the double dotted Half notes. I might look better if you tie the half note to a dotted quarter, so the beat is easier to find. The rest looks great!

This is right, I did it, thank you

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