- I would recommend changing those titles and putting them into the expression text/metronome marking. Similar to this sheet and others like it: http://www.ninsheetmusic.org/download/pdf/2914
It will give it a cleaner look.
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- Curious, is there a reason for the bpm marking in M. 2 of "Boss Battle" and M. 2 of "Angry Wiggler" and "Very Angry Wiggler?"
For "Angry Wiggler" and "Very Angry Wiggler", it is to show the tempo the performer should reach by the time they finish the introduction, and the tempo they should play the rest of the piece at. For "Boss Battle", it's a bit more uncertain; this stems from Latios' suggestion to make the Boss Battle introduction two measures long at a given rhythm structure. In making it two measures, I had to change the tempo, and since the main part of the piece is played at 190 and not 127 (or whatever I have the intro tempo set at), I placed the second tempo marking. It is intentionally in the middle of the system, as it was uncertain how that whole situation should be handled.
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- I would recommend hiding one of the eighth rests in M. 1 (in both Angry Wiggler and Very Angry Wiggler)and then aligning the unhidden eighth rest with the rest of the rests in that measure.
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- This is a personal preference of mine, so don't feel obligated to change this. I find courtesy accidentals without parentheses much more appealing because they take up less space and look less messy. Just a recommendation. : )
I will look into this more as the sheet is cleaned up. And possibly discuss with you via Discord.
- The performance note looks a bit...odd. I would recommend a different format. I'm not exactly sure, at the moment, so stayed tuned for an idea from me later.
Roger that. I did find a typo and fixed that.
- Accidentals look odd to me in a few places, but I'll check that out when I compare this sheet to the original.
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