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Really nice. Few more small things and we'll be done here.

-Composer/arranger names and copyright info are not aligned.
-The second page title and page number aren't properly aligned for some reason... Did you import this from another software? Weird...
-RH measure 4 last note in the bar should be a third-space C.
-RH measure 6 E natural needs to be an Eb.
-RH measure 14 E natural needs to be an Eb.
-RH measure 18 E natural needs to be an Eb.
-LH measure 8 last note in the bar should be a C above the staff. The last rest also needs to be adjusted.
-LH measure 10 E natural needs to be an Eb.
-LH layer 1 measure 10 last note in the bar should be a C above the staff. I might even suggest that it be moved up an octave and put in the RH since the line continues in that register. Your call there.
-LH layer 2 measure 10 I would recommend raising those F's up an octave. The last one needs to be a second-space C btw.
-Any particular reason you changed the chord at the end of the bar in 14 (LH)? Beats three and four sound the same in the recording...

This file contains all of the changes listed above. Hope it helps

Thanks for making those changes! I've updated the files!

It's your arrangement. I don't need to be credited this much. If you want, you can write in a "special thanks" below the arranger name. That'd probably be more appropriate

Noted and changed!

This was a comment about the best way to arrange the sheet, not about what changes you have to implement right now. We can help you do things that Notepad cannot, but we need to be on the same page first regarding how to write it out.

Sorry, thanks for clarifying! If someone could alter the file to 12/16 time, that would be fantastic! I agree, it's much more uniform/clear that way.

I ... uhhh .... may have got carried away
Here's what I fixed:
Fanfare: swapped 1st and 2nd note of the RH triplet set in m1.
added F to RH chord

Intro: Redid how the voices were divided to give it a much fuller feel and make it fun to play. For the first half, I swapped the RH and LH. For the 2nd half, where the flute comes in, I put them back where they go, but added in the droning F in the LHto give the song more flavor. Also added a bit more room between the staves.

Section A: I straight up rewrote all the chords here. For one, the first hit of each measure is 100% a single F, and it doesn't move. I also beefed up a few chords to give it the nice omph it needs. Also, that offset chord is definitely an Eb major.

Section B: M19 RH - changed last note (c) to a d
Rewrote all the chords here

Ending: Rewrote this completely to not sound weird and kinda match up with the percussion of the original

General: Resized to 90%, redistributed measures and systems
Made the repeat work
Made the tempo mark from text into a dynamic

I felt all the changes greatly helped the piece, so this is the most current submitted version.
I credited you as a co-arranger, because your changes were pretty significant! Thank you for all the help!

Bump for arranger?

Also while I'm here, I think this would be better written in 12/16 with note durations halved.

I only have Notepad, so I can't do much with the timing.

I can't hear all triplets in measure 20, to me it sounds more in line with how measure 24 looks

Something more like this?

Yeah, sorry about that! I edited my first post!

I've had this done for ages and finally got around to submitting it ::)

I've been playing a lot of Fire Emblem for the past while. I cleaned up this sheet from the main site, but there's still a decent chunk of left hand that's placeholder right now. I'm not sure if I'll ever get around to making it 100% accurate, but it's here nonetheless.

[GBA] Fire Emblem: The Sacred Stones
Rise Above (Replacement) [MUS]

Piano Arrangements / Re: Beta's Arrangements
« on: March 11, 2017, 11:55:17 PM »
Every time I post is going to be long time, no forum.
The ending is...very off. But I couldn't find any other arrangements of this song, so I thought I'd take a stab at it anyway. Here's my piano arrangement of You of the Dark!

[3DS] Fire Emblem: Fates
You of the Dark [MUS] [PDF]

Piano Arrangements / Re: Beta's Arrangements
« on: May 23, 2016, 08:58:48 PM »
It's good to be back!!

Piano Arrangements / Re: Beta's Arrangements
« on: May 23, 2016, 05:36:19 PM »
Long time, no forum.
I haven't arranged anything Nintendo-ey in a while, but KIU was calling to me.

[3DS] Kid Icarus: Uprising
Viridi, Goddess of Nature [MUS]

This song is an orchestral piece, so in the interest of mediocre players like myself being able to play it, I tweaked some of the runs.

Piano Arrangements / Re: Beta's Arrangements
« on: July 19, 2014, 06:20:03 PM »
Awesomesauce!  Thank you for the help!!

Piano Arrangements / Re: Beta's Arrangements
« on: July 16, 2014, 11:56:58 PM »
I think this is the necessary change!

Piano Arrangements / Re: Beta's Arrangements
« on: July 01, 2014, 03:32:19 AM »
*crawls out from oblivion*

Hello's been quite a while since I've arranged anything, hasn't it?  Here is a peace offering!  (Still in-progress.  Critiques are appreciated!)

[3DS] The Legend of Zelda: A Link Between Worlds
Minigame [MUS]

And the Youtube link should anyone care to listen :)

Forum Games / Re: The Post 1782 game
« on: December 07, 2013, 05:30:46 PM »

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