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Messages - JacopoTore

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Ok I understand it, thanks for your explanation!
Is a problem for you, Ben, if I put your name to?

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Archive / Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "1P Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore
« on: August 12, 2017, 12:08:34 AM »
Bump

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Archive / Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "1P Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore
« on: July 31, 2017, 04:52:02 PM »
Looking around the Italian Wikipedia page, the treble clef is the violino clef, being used with the chiave di sol (English - G clef) on the second line. Either way, it's the top staff on the piano.
Blue Planet Software was apparently founded as Bullet-Proof Software, so they're the same company. The English Wikipedia page for Yoshi's Cookie has Bullet-Proof as the developer. I'm not sure what the NSM policy is about companies that change names, so you should wait until an updater comes by to clear things up. Other than that, the publication information looks pretty good.

I also have a couple miscellaneous suggestions -
 - I also agree with Levi about removing the 8va marking. It sounds a bit too high with it.
 - It may just be me, but I hear the harmony in m2, 4 as two separate voices. I'd suggest splitting these measures into two voices.
Here's measure 2 -
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Note: I was ninja'd by Sebastian; this was relevant when JacopoTore last posted.

Ok I did it

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Archive / Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "1P Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore
« on: July 31, 2017, 12:26:59 PM »
What's wrong with it? No one calls Maelstrom, "Jacob", anyway. You seem a little tense today, Alti.

Also; Jacob; the treble can come down an octave. And check your copyright info; it's still wrong. Let me know if you prefer the title "Jacopo".

What is Treble? If you can translate in Italian I thank you, you did with my name I think it isn't a problem for you, also in the Italian Wikipedia  page https://it.wikipedia.org/wiki/Yoshi%27s_Cookie I see Blue Planet Software, are you sure that it isn't correct?

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Archive / Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "1P Music Type C" by JacopoTore
« on: July 22, 2017, 02:35:30 PM »
Ok thank you for your explanation, I just replace the score.

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Archive / Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "1P Music Type C" by JacopoTore
« on: July 21, 2017, 11:31:42 PM »
Bump

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Archive / Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "1P Music Type C" by JacopoTore
« on: July 16, 2017, 10:45:46 PM »

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Help! / Re: Two months waiting new score
« on: July 11, 2017, 11:31:47 AM »
Hi, can I create a new account to put another score?
I'm waiting to submission but in the last update we don't put my score

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Help! / Two months waiting new score
« on: June 21, 2017, 12:52:49 PM »
Hi, why you are waiting two months to publish sheets?
Thank you

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Archive / Re: [NES] Anticipation - "Puzzle Solving" by JacopoTore
« on: May 20, 2017, 12:24:42 PM »
it upload files here because this site doesn't use java or flash or other stuffs. Anyway I'm using mozilla 16.0.1 on mac os 10.5.8

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Archive / Re: [NES] Anticipation - "Puzzle Solving" by JacopoTore
« on: May 20, 2017, 04:07:19 AM »
If you would like, I can replace the files in the original post for you.
I have only a browser that not permit to me to download through dropbox and many other sites.
If you can send me an email than I can upload files. If you won't you can do what you want

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Archive / Re: [NES] Anticipation - "Puzzle Solving" by JacopoTore
« on: May 19, 2017, 03:47:50 PM »
It's because now it looks more like the left hand's part.

Also, you have the wrong files posted above. I'd recommend just using the files I posted. I also fixed the playback so that the swing eighth notes play correctly.
Sorry I can't download through DropBox because I have an obsolete browser, can you send me .mus file for email?
jacopotore@gmail.com

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Archive / Re: [NES] Air Fortress - "Evacuation" by JacopoTore
« on: May 19, 2017, 03:39:06 PM »
One last thing: move the text "lasciar vibrare" down closer to the staff. Now that the 8va is gone, it doesn't need to be so high up. (Sorry, I did this in the file I posted in my previous post, but I forgot to mention it)
Ok I did it

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Archive / Re: [NES] Anticipation - "Puzzle Solving" by JacopoTore
« on: May 18, 2017, 01:51:27 PM »
-Your arranger and composer names need to be right aligned (they are off a bit).
-There is an unnecessary second space between the words "by" and "JacopoTore."
-Your tempo marking is far out to the left, move it closer to the staff.
-The F# in the RH in measure 11 should be spelled as a Gb. The harmony there is Ab7 and Gb is the seventh. This occurs again in measure 19, so please make the change there too.
-I'd suggest adding a courtesy natural on the E in measure 12 (RH). There's an Eb right before it and this might help people play the right note the first time. This occurs again in measure 20, so please make the change there too.
-In measures that look like measure 1 (measures 1, 3, 5, 7, 13 and 15) I would recommend flipping the stem of the lower notes in the RH to go the opposite direction of the moving line. When done this way, it would be easier to read and will look kind of like what you do in measures 9-12. You can do this by using the double/split stem tool in the special tools (if you're working on a version of finale higher than notepad).

Here is a version of the sheet with the above changes applied. If you want to just swap out these files for the one in the main post, that's okay. Doing so (or making the changes yourself) will result in this submission being accepted.
[MUS] [Midi] [PDF]

Ok I did it but I don't understand why it look be easier to red if we add stems

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Archive / Re: [NES] Air Fortress - "Evacuation" by JacopoTore
« on: May 18, 2017, 01:43:14 PM »
Looks good. Just a few more things before it's ready to be accepted.

-The URL needs to be center aligned.
-The composer name needs to be right aligned.
-In the last measure (measure 6), the F natural needs to be an E -sharp. It's borrowing that note from C-sharp major, in which case it would be the major third (E-sharp), not the lowered fourth (F natural).
-In measure 6, the last high G should be an F-double-sharp. It's the raised fourth (just like the one at the beginning of that measure).
-Judging by the way the YouTube video sounds, it doesn't sound like you need the 8va in this piece. It sounds like it is supposed to be one octave lower than it currently is. I would suggest removing it.

Here is a version of the sheet with the above changes applied. If you want to just swap out these files for the one in the main post, that's okay. Doing so (or making the changes yourself) will result in this submission being accepted.
[MUS] [Midi] [PDF]

Thank you! You are right I really don't know why I wrote these wrong notes! I apologize!

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