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looks great.

Go one or the other, but not both. I'd say put it was q=whatever because that fits the 4/4 you have. Don't forget about the other thing I said tho

looks really great

Any reason the tempo is half=108 when it's in 4/4?
not a fan of the 2nd layer in m39-40. I'd say merge it with layer one and hold it the whole way. It just sounds unnatural and takes away from the general feel of the song imo.

fix/comment and I'll probably approve

fedbak tim

1 - Formatting
Your measure numbers look awfully small.....
Your initial tempo mark looks a bit wonky. That's probably from the musescore import.

2 - Notes
m2-9: I know you left it out intentionally, but I really think the 3rd voice should be added here. The intro feels so empty without it. Heck, when I listened to the original, that's what my ears were drawn to the most. If you don't think you can shove it all in the RH, could you move the chords down to the LH for parts?
Maybe include the 16th notes in b1 and 3 of m12 and 16 in layer 1?
m20 b1.25 the Bb should be an A

I'd write m1 like this (also m9 and m49 and 57 and anywhere lse this happens):

3 - Theory/Performance
m57 -
slur the grace notes pls in m13

fix/comment on this and I'll probably approve

Excellent sheet.
However, your composer/arranger data is kinda floating there. Maybe bring it down a little?

make mine and seb's adjustments and I approve

yesssssssss steins;gate 0. That song is a monster, but you somehow managed to pull it off. I'd recommend trying to play it on piano before you submit it, as there were a few parts that looked unnatural.

Feedback / Re: The Great NSM Audit
« on: June 19, 2018, 03:18:23 AM »
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Submission Archive / Re: [MUL] Celeste - "Exhale" by PlayfulPiano
« on: June 19, 2018, 03:14:29 AM »
ok, sorry this took a while.
in m23, 25, and 27, those 1st layer RH chords should just be octaves, not chords.

otherwise it looks great

Feedback / Re: The Great NSM Audit
« on: June 19, 2018, 03:05:45 AM »
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Music / Re: How to easily make Sheet Music (without perfect pitch)
« on: June 16, 2018, 02:24:51 AM »
also it's
p  l  a  g  i  a  r  i  s  m

Off-Topic / Re: The Post Your Thoughts of the Moment Thread 2
« on: June 09, 2018, 02:02:57 PM »
Nascar is still better than curling.

The Werewolf Game / Re: TWG CVII Player Sign Ups yay
« on: June 08, 2018, 12:41:30 PM »

Forum Games / Re: The NSM Guess-That-Melody Quiz!
« on: June 07, 2018, 04:38:59 AM »
I deserve half a point because I guessed that the FE song was from thracia 776

Site News / Re: So long, and thanks for all the fish
« on: June 06, 2018, 10:25:53 PM »
I'm having flashbacks to the update Don got when he left.

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