Quote from: Bloop on April 08, 2024, 03:36:35 AMVery nice work, just a few small things I noticed:
-m4: I hear a grace note D after the C grace note too done!
-m22: If you want, you could notate in some way that the player can play the R.H. F-Bb dyad in beat 3 with the L.H., seems a bit easier than to jump around with the R.H. ^^ I actually find it easier to do the jump with the RH personally :p I left it unmarked
-m30: I don't explicitly hear the R.H. Eb in beat 2.5, I think it's an F in another voice? hmm I'm still pretty clearly hearing the Eb octaves. I do hear the F you mention, and I also hear the D's that Latios mentioned, but out of these voices the Eb still stands out pretty clearly to me as the melody when I slow it down
-m58: I can kinda hear an F on beat 3, but listening to the bar itself it sounds like beat 3 is supposed to be an Ab major chord in some way, or at least also an Ab on the bottom (I think I hear Ab-C-Ab in the electric piano) changed!
-m60: I hear a Bb on beat 4 in the L.H. (Bb below middle C) yep, done
Files updated; thanks for checking!