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Submissions / Re: [MUL] Celeste - "Exhale" by PlayfulPiano
« on: May 18, 2018, 03:43:53 PM »
Great.

Could I get a second opinion on the layers in M. 41+? Anyone? Updaters?

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I'm saying that lots of pianists (beginners, etc.) (Especially people visiting NSM) may not have the proper training to see these functional chords, especially in a difficult key like this. I was suggesting that an "easier" spelling could work. Not really a hill that needs to be died on.

EDIT:
I second this
I third this. If it was more than one measure, I would agree with what Static has, but since it's only one measure then it would be easier to read counting-wise to have it split into two measures.

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Except that they are functional chords, and that chords are much easier to read than choosing random accidentals  ???
"most plausible spellings" = functional chords. Also, lots of pianists don't see functional chords as easiest to read...and what I'm talking about isn't "random accidentals." I was just giving an option. Not a huge deal.

The problem here is that you are including the major third, which does not occur in any of the isolated sound files that Static provided. The theme of this piece is to plane the sus2 triad, and including the major third ruins that. There might be a de-tuned variation that can be rounded towards that F natural, but it should be omitted for the greater good of preserving the idea of the piece.
Again, not a huge deal. I was just specifying what I believe I heard.

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Archive / Re: [SNES] Chrono Trigger - "Zeal Palace" by Static
« on: May 18, 2018, 03:57:17 AM »
I doubly approve. Nice sheet.

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Submissions / Re: [NES] Aladdin - "Prince Ali" by Jacopo Tore
« on: May 18, 2018, 12:00:21 AM »
You've posted the copyright info for the SNES version, not the submitted NES version.
Oh, whoops. I saw capcom and was like, "Here it is." xD

I do not find the copyright for NES version...
Probably is in 1992 but I don't know who is the publisher, could you help me?
Here is the correct one:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Disney's_Aladdin_(Virgin_Games_video_game)

The NES version was released in 1994.
For the copyright info put this: "Virgin Games, NMS Software © 1994"
Composers: Donald Griffin & Tommy Tallarico.


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I agree with Static on the notes concerning the tuning. I did a pretty thorough note check and came up with what he has. Pretty weird song.

The accidentals look good to me. This is one of those songs where you go with the most plausible accidental spellings or you totally go user-friendly by forgetting the chords, etc. and helping the performer even if the accidentals are technically dead wrong. Kind of like this (first few measures as an example):


Also, the composer/arranger is slightly off alignment.  ;D

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Nintendo / Re: The Mario Movie
« on: May 17, 2018, 11:40:03 PM »
I've learned that video games and movies don't mix...or shouldn't mix at least.

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Submissions / Re: [NES] Aladdin - "Prince Ali" by Jacopo Tore
« on: May 17, 2018, 11:39:19 PM »
Here: kMJnIYV-cWs
That's the wrong video, by the way. I don't feel like scrolling through that to find the right song.

This is a comparison of the two, but works. The first pertains to this sheet.

Feedback:
- You missed M. 18 (LH) concerning the beaming. It should be beamed this way, by the way:
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- "Transcription" should be "Arrangement." Also, if you put "Arrangement by" then you should put "Composition by." If you want to leave "Composed by" then put "Arranged by" for the arranger.
- The copyright information should have the year the game was released:
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- Also, I don't think the composer is right.

Notes sound correct. Get this stuff fixed and I'll approve.


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Great work as always! I hope to see more. : )

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It sounds right, but I will check it out again and slow it down to make certain.

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No prob. Just a preference of mine. : P

Looks good.


EDIT: Oh, wait. You uploaded the wrong...

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Adding to what Static said...here is another option you could do (M. 13):
http://www.ninsheetmusic.org/download/pdf/3424

Basically just have the performer leave out one of the notes if it's too hard for them.


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Some feedback:
- M. 14 (LH): The eight note on beat 4.0 is a B.
- In M. 15 the C and G (second layer) are still being played. You can tie those over from M. 14.
- M. 18: Didn't know if you were aware, but there is a harmony part playing along with the second layer. You got it on beat 4 though.
- M. 19: Flip the first layer down and move the quarter rest down a bit so it's not hitting the whole notes.
- M. 20 (LH): The last two notes are E and then D.
- M. 22: Same as with M. 14.
- M. 27: Same as M. 19.
- The composer/arranger names are slightly off alignment. Go ahead and right-align those.

Good job with this sheet, by the way!

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Archive / Re: [MOB] Fire Emblem Heroes - "Main Menu" by Latios212
« on: May 16, 2018, 01:16:29 AM »
Excellent.

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