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Title: [SWITCH] Splatoon 2 - "Acid Hues" by Olimar12345
Post by: Zeta on April 08, 2018, 09:38:51 PM
Submission Information:

Series: Other
Game: Splatoon 2
Console: Nintendo Switch
Title: Acid Hues
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Olimar12345 (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=83)

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Title: Re: [SWITCH] Splatoon 2 - "Acid Hues" by Olimar12345
Post by: Olimar12345 on April 08, 2018, 09:39:02 PM
Title: Re: [SWITCH] Splatoon 2 - "Acid Hues" by Olimar12345
Post by: Olimar12345 on May 22, 2018, 06:00:19 PM
Bump.
Title: Re: [SWITCH] Splatoon 2 - "Acid Hues" by Olimar12345
Post by: Maelstrom on May 31, 2018, 11:41:16 AM
I have a few weird issues with this arrangement, but have no idea how to fix them. Basically, the arrangement seems to be identical to the original when the original is slowed down. However, when the arrangement is played at full speed, it feels janky and unnatural. This probably stems from the original song's style, but it still bothers me. I'd like to hear what other people think, and if they have ideas. I will tentatively approve this, but I'd like multiple other people to chime in before it's accepted.
Title: Re: [SWITCH] Splatoon 2 - "Acid Hues" by Olimar12345
Post by: Latios212 on May 31, 2018, 05:11:54 PM
Is there anything specific you think sounds off? Splatoon songs are inherently weird, but the arrangement seems pretty straightforward and faithful as it's going to get.

(Side note, though, listening to the playback for the intro, particularly the bassline rhythm, reminds me of Mario Kart DS (http://www.ninsheetmusic.org/download/pdf/3738)!)
Title: Re: [SWITCH] Splatoon 2 - "Acid Hues" by Olimar12345
Post by: Maelstrom on May 31, 2018, 07:26:56 PM
It just sounds and looks like it would be unnatural to play on piano. I'm not sure how to fix it or if it even can be, but idk how to better put in words. I guess I'll let it pass for now because I don't know what to do about it honestly.

I approve of this sheet.
Title: Re: [SWITCH] Splatoon 2 - "Acid Hues" by Olimar12345
Post by: Latios212 on June 02, 2018, 07:55:39 AM
Cool, just a few small things.

- Consider putting 5 systems on page 1 to free up a bit of space. There's ample unused room on page 3 for things to be pushed downwards to.
- The D flat at the end of measure 30 is uncomfortably close to the preceding note.
- Mind checking the chords in m. 47 and 51? I feel like they should be inverted upwards, as the original track sounds like it's ascending to me (similar to what m. 3 does).
Title: Re: [SWITCH] Splatoon 2 - "Acid Hues" by Olimar12345
Post by: Olimar12345 on June 02, 2018, 08:12:17 AM
Quote from: Latios212 on June 02, 2018, 07:55:39 AM- Consider putting 5 systems on page 1 to free up a bit of space. There's ample unused room on page 3 for things to be pushed downwards to.
Considered.

Quote from: Latios212 on June 02, 2018, 07:55:39 AM- The D flat at the end of measure 30 is uncomfortably close to the preceding note.
Also considered.

Quote from: Latios212 on June 02, 2018, 07:55:39 AM- Mind checking the chords in m. 47 and 51? I feel like they should be inverted upwards, as the original track sounds like it's ascending to me (similar to what m. 3 does).
That chord is already ascending, it just happens to have a common tone between the two destinations.
Title: Re: [SWITCH] Splatoon 2 - "Acid Hues" by Olimar12345
Post by: Latios212 on June 02, 2018, 08:17:25 AM
Cool, page layout's great.

The D flat still looks the same as it did before? :(

About the chord, I meant I imagined it having the top note in each ascend as well. But this is fine as is.
Title: Re: [SWITCH] Splatoon 2 - "Acid Hues" by Olimar12345
Post by: Olimar12345 on June 02, 2018, 08:22:06 AM
Quote from: Latios212 on June 02, 2018, 08:17:25 AMThe D flat still looks the same as it did before? :(
That's probably because I didn't change anything about it.

Quote from: Latios212 on June 02, 2018, 08:17:25 AMAbout the chord, I meant I imagined it having the top note in each ascend as well. But this is fine as is.
That's not what the recording does.
Title: Re: [SWITCH] Splatoon 2 - "Acid Hues" by Olimar12345
Post by: Latios212 on June 02, 2018, 08:25:27 AM
Quote from: Olimar12345 on June 02, 2018, 08:22:06 AMThat's probably because I didn't change anything about it.
You could be a little clearer next time about what you're changing. You said the same thing for a thing you changed and a thing you didn't change. Anyway, why not give the accidental more space? It's not like there's not enough room to shift things over a tad.
Title: Re: [SWITCH] Splatoon 2 - "Acid Hues" by Olimar12345
Post by: Olimar12345 on June 02, 2018, 08:32:57 AM
How incredibly negligible. Check the file now.
Title: Re: [SWITCH] Splatoon 2 - "Acid Hues" by Olimar12345
Post by: Latios212 on June 02, 2018, 08:38:12 AM
I would appreciate it if you didn't belittle my feedback. I'm offering suggestions to help improve your sheet, which is why I'm reviewing it. I'm not forcing you to change anything, but the least you could do is clarify why you want to or don't want to write something the way it is.

Anyway, looks better now!
Title: Re: [SWITCH] Splatoon 2 - "Acid Hues" by Olimar12345
Post by: Olimar12345 on June 02, 2018, 08:46:27 AM
Meh, I guess I don't really care anymore. This good now or what?
Title: Re: [SWITCH] Splatoon 2 - "Acid Hues" by Olimar12345
Post by: Latios212 on June 02, 2018, 09:18:21 AM
Yeah!
Title: Re: [SWITCH] Splatoon 2 - "Acid Hues" by Olimar12345
Post by: Zeta on June 02, 2018, 09:18:26 AM
This submission has been accepted by Latios212 (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=4344).

~Zeta, your friendly NSM-Bot