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NinSheetMusic => Submission Center => Submission Archive => Topic started by: Zeta on February 11, 2018, 11:38:28 PM

Title: [ARCADE] Bubble Bobble - "Sin No Endeling" by FugalOmen
Post by: Zeta on February 11, 2018, 11:38:28 PM
Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: Bubble Bobble
Console: ARCADE
Title: Sin No Endeling
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: FugalOmen (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=5234)

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Title: Re: [ARCADE] Bubble Bobble - "Sin No Endeling" by FugalOmen
Post by: FugalOmen on February 11, 2018, 11:40:37 PM
The chords in the right hand are my own invention, to make the higher notes sound a bit fuller (Psst, I'm also not very good at distinguishing chords through ear). Since this was made with Finale Notepad, it may likely need tweaking in a fuller version.
Title: Re: [ARCADE] Bubble Bobble - "Sin No Endeling" by FugalOmen
Post by: FugalOmen on February 12, 2018, 04:28:04 AM
Oops, forgot the video for the music.

Title: Re: [ARCADE] Bubble Bobble - "Sin No Endeling" by FugalOmen
Post by: joeberryosponge on February 12, 2018, 03:32:11 PM
One thing I noticed is that the video you posted is in C major rather than the Bb major you have. Is there a reason?
Title: Re: [ARCADE] Bubble Bobble - "Sin No Endeling" by FugalOmen
Post by: FugalOmen on February 13, 2018, 12:50:23 AM
Quote from: joeberryosponge on February 12, 2018, 03:32:11 PMOne thing I noticed is that the video you posted is in C major rather than the Bb major you have. Is there a reason?

Yeah, I has having problems telling if it was in C or B-Flat Major. If it really is in C Major, I'll fix it soon.
Title: Re: [ARCADE] Bubble Bobble - "Sin No Endeling" by FugalOmen
Post by: FugalOmen on February 13, 2018, 12:54:45 AM
Should be in C Major now.
Title: Re: [ARCADE] Bubble Bobble - "Sin No Endeling" by FugalOmen
Post by: Sebastian on May 25, 2018, 02:54:25 PM
Nice work! Some feedback (sorry for the late respond time):

- You're missing the high G in M. 5-13. Example:
Spoiler
(https://www.dropbox.com/s/sr4eyv4u35ewgof/Screenshot%202018-05-25%2017.48.54.png?dl=1)
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- Excluding those measures that I pointed out, this song is basically two voices the whole way through, kind of like an invention except inventions don't have parallel octaves like this song.
So all the places you added a note there technically (according to the original) shouldn't be there. For example, the right-hand C in M. 14.
- The BPM is 123. You can use this tool to help you get the exact bpm next time:
http://www.all8.com/tools/bpm.htm
- The formatting is a little so-so. Would you mind if I messed with it a bit (assuming that you're using notepad or importing/exporting)?

That's all from me.
Title: Re: [ARCADE] Bubble Bobble - "Sin No Endeling" by FugalOmen
Post by: FugalOmen on May 28, 2018, 01:59:02 AM
Quote from: Sebastian on May 25, 2018, 02:54:25 PMWould you mind if I messed with it a bit (assuming that you're using notepad or importing/exporting)?

Hey, thanks for the feedback. Go ahead and improve it. I am indeed using Notepad, so the formatting can't be edited except in a fuller version.
Title: Re: [ARCADE] Bubble Bobble - "Sin No Endeling" by FugalOmen
Post by: Sebastian on May 30, 2018, 11:39:46 AM
Sounds good! I'll be sure to take a look later today
Title: Re: [ARCADE] Bubble Bobble - "Sin No Endeling" by FugalOmen
Post by: Sebastian on June 02, 2018, 02:56:04 PM
Got those fixes for you!

I approve.
Title: Re: [ARCADE] Bubble Bobble - "Sin No Endeling" by FugalOmen
Post by: Maelstrom on June 02, 2018, 08:03:04 PM
is gud.

added 8va so it's even better

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Title: Re: [ARCADE] Bubble Bobble - "Sin No Endeling" by FugalOmen
Post by: Zeta on June 02, 2018, 08:03:09 PM
This submission has been accepted by Maelstrom (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=4119).

~Zeta, your friendly NSM-Bot
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