Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: Rhythm Heaven Fever
Console: Nintendo Wii
Title: Micro-Row
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: ThatHiddenCharacter (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=5110)
Nice work; looks good overall.
For consideration, have you considered retaining two voices in the left hand for the beginning section like below? It might help it sound less empty.
https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/322982206958206978/412057803599904773/unknown.png
Yeah, I had originally attempted that, but messed it up. I fixed it, updated the files, and all that jazz. Well, all that upbeat genre-ambiguous music, more likely.
Oof, the formatting got messed up...
That's okay, we can fix that later. For now, part of the reason I suggested that left hand pattern was to make that part at measure 19 less awkward. Go ahead and update that in a similar manner.
Oh, I think I see what you mean by the formatting messed up. Sadly, as far as I know, I can not fix that myself. I updated measure 19 and 20.
m.60 - I'd make it more clear when the melody comes in (right now it's almost indistinguishable from the accompaniment, even with the beam break)
Bass notes clash with copyright on PDF
m.27 1st RH melody note should be F# not A
Quote from: InsigTurtle on February 21, 2018, 07:28:17 PMBass notes clash with copyright on PDF
Yeah, that's already been established. Sadly, that's not a problem I can fix, cause Notepad. As for everything else, I'll take care of it as soon as I can.
Alright, I've updated the files.
Don't wanna be this guy, but
(https://catmacros.files.wordpress.com/2010/06/bump_kitty.jpg)
It's been over a month, I'm well within my right to do this... Maybe.
Sorry.
I feel really bad now. Forgive me, please.
Arrangement looks fine to me. However, I think the layout could be much better optimized. Instead of squishing as many systems as possible onto every single page (which has resulted in huge amounts of unused whitespace on page 3), spread it out evenly over the 3 pages you're using. In fact, if you did 5 systems on page 1, you could fit 6 systems on pages 2 and 3 each, creating a nicely balanced and evenly filled layout.
Alrighty, taken care of! Thanks Wah for the formatting help! And now just to wait a few more months.
Careful, you just might jinx it.
Thanks to both of you for doing that. I noticed a few micro-irregularities with the layout though, so I fixed those real quick. Ideally, you want the top and bottom systems to align horizontally across page spreads, and you also usually want to space systems evenly on the same page.
Exhibit A
https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/401094846107877377/431271749326471188/Screen_Shot_2018-04-04_at_7.14.53_PM.png?width=910&height=140
Exhibit B
https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/401094846107877377/431271746512093194/Screen_Shot_2018-04-04_at_7.15.10_PM.png?width=910&height=600
Here's the file with those fixes:
https://www.dropbox.com/s/9extaoe2dbi7iea/micro-row.mus?dl=0
Alrighty, I'll take care of that tomorrow as soon as I can get on my computer and remember I need to do it.
Well it needs an MUSX too, so it'd probably be easier if I just uploaded it. This is how it looks:
https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/401094846107877377/431281348045438976/Screen_Shot_2018-04-04_at_8.37.38_PM.png?width=955&height=418
Quote from: Bespinben on April 04, 2018, 07:41:33 PMWell it needs an MUSX too, so it'd probably be easier if I just uploaded it.
I mean, technically musx is optional, and I've never even seen a way to get one from the site anyway, but that's cool with me.
~Yay~ ✿ ͡◕ ᴗ◕)つ━━✫
This one looks good to me! Go ahead and slam that green button, Ben.
Quote from: Sebastian on April 04, 2018, 08:10:28 PMThis one looks good to me! Go ahead and slam that green button, Ben.
Am I the only one that pictured the NUT button, but it's green & it says "ACCEPTED"?
This submission has been accepted by Bespinben (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=2510).
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