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Title: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "2P Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore & Gabriele Sechi
Post by: Zeta on February 06, 2018, 02:21:30 AM
Submission Information:

Series: Other
Game: Yoshi's Cookie
Console: Nintendo Entertainment System
Title: 2P Music Type C
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arrangers: Jacopo Tore (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=4805) & Gabriele Sechi (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=-33)
Title: Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "Two Player Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore
Post by: JacopoTore on February 06, 2018, 02:22:22 AM
Title: Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "Two Player Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore
Post by: JacopoTore on February 06, 2018, 01:09:15 PM
I miss the copyright claim. I'm sorry
Title: Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "Two Player Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore
Post by: JacopoTore on February 10, 2018, 02:33:48 PM
I adjusted somethings
Title: Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "Two Player Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore
Post by: JacopoTore on February 13, 2018, 01:08:41 PM
Could I recive a feedback please?
Title: Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "Two Player Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore
Post by: Latios212 on February 14, 2018, 05:42:45 AM
Could I recive a feedback please?
Patience, please. There are a lot of other submissions for us to go through as well.

Anyway, there's no need to write this in 2/2 with such a high tempo. Cut all the note durations in half, as well as the tempo.
Title: Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "Two Player Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore
Post by: JacopoTore on February 15, 2018, 11:21:29 AM
Only this change?
Title: Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "Two Player Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore
Post by: Maelstrom on February 15, 2018, 02:13:26 PM
For now
Title: Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "Two Player Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore
Post by: JacopoTore on February 21, 2018, 02:21:03 AM
Damn I forgot to reupload the pdf XD
Title: Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "Two Player Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore
Post by: InsigTurtle on February 22, 2018, 03:27:46 AM
m.8 and likewise: sounds like you're missing the G below the B in the RH
m.41-44 and its repeat: not hearing the G in RH, hearing DF and CE instead of FG and EG
Title: Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "Two Player Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore
Post by: JacopoTore on February 25, 2018, 11:03:44 PM
InsigTurtle you right! Thank you!
Title: Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "Two Player Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore
Post by: JacopoTore on March 04, 2018, 06:04:46 PM
I reupload it, it is better to export midis with Format 1 or Format 0 ? (finale 2012)
Title: Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "Two Player Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore
Post by: JacopoTore on March 17, 2018, 12:41:28 AM
Bump
Title: Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "Two Player Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore
Post by: Maelstrom on March 17, 2018, 07:17:40 PM
Patience, please. There are a lot of other submissions for us to go through as well.

Anyway, there's no need to write this in 2/2 with such a high tempo. Cut all the note durations in half, as well as the tempo.
Also it should really be in 4/4, not 2/4
m.8 and likewise: sounds like you're missing the G below the B in the RH
Likewise means it applies to everywhere else that same thing plays. This includes measure 16.
m49-52 right hand  should look exactly like m41-45
The 8vas in the 2nd and 4th system of page 2 are going off the side of the page.
I'm not totally sure what the brackets in measure 31 RH are supposed to do, so take them out?

Respace the systems so you have more than 4 on the first page.

I reupload it, it is better to export midis with Format 1 or Format 0 ? (finale 2012)
I didn't know that there were different formats. It shouldn't matter, as long as they play back in a different piece of software.
Title: Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "Two Player Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore
Post by: JacopoTore on March 18, 2018, 10:11:26 PM
Also it should really be in 4/4, not 2/4Likewise means it applies to everywhere else that same thing plays. This includes measure 16.
m49-52 right hand  should look exactly like m41-45
The 8vas in the 2nd and 4th system of page 2 are going off the side of the page.
I'm not totally sure what the brackets in measure 31 RH are supposed to do, so take them out?

Respace the systems so you have more than 4 on the first page.
I didn't know that there were different formats. It shouldn't matter, as long as they play back in a different piece of software.

Really thanks Malestrom, I appreciate your comments. The brackets in measure 31 RH was in the wrong place.
Anyway I have big problems with the 8va item, it display with many bugs and I can't edit this. Could you help me? I adjust everything but I'd like your help to insert the 8va item. I reupload it right now. THANKS!
Title: Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "Two Player Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore
Post by: Maelstrom on March 19, 2018, 12:49:56 AM
Ok, I tried to fix it by redistributing the measures but the I ended up with systems that were out of size so I copied it into my template and tidied up the composer and arranger information.
Did I put the second name in right? I wasn't sure if it was a second arranger or what.

File: https://www.dropbox.com/s/3pe9u8uztte47pj/Yoshi%27s%20cookie.mus?dl=1
Don't forget to update the PDF and midi when you upload this
Title: Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "Two Player Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore
Post by: JacopoTore on March 19, 2018, 02:13:27 PM
Ok, I tried to fix it by redistributing the measures but the I ended up with systems that were out of size so I copied it into my template and tidied up the composer and arranger information.
Did I put the second name in right? I wasn't sure if it was a second arranger or what.

File: https://www.dropbox.com/s/3pe9u8uztte47pj/Yoshi%27s%20cookie.mus?dl=1
Don't forget to update the PDF and midi when you upload this

Oh Malestrom! I really hate this layout, but I trust you <3
Title: Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "Two Player Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore
Post by: Maelstrom on March 19, 2018, 02:58:25 PM
How so? Can I fix it for your? It's your sheet after all, and I don't want to accept anything you're not proud of.
Title: Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "Two Player Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore
Post by: JacopoTore on March 20, 2018, 02:07:37 AM
Maelstrom (maybe I write your nick correctly right now), your fix is perfect...but I like to see the sheet full of page and with large clear.
For example ... think about: you have to print and sell a score, would you leave a page with two staves and the rest of page blank? I believe that an editor would try in every way to fill the empty space ... at the cost of enlarging the lines and widening the spaces ... do not you think? Of course .... this example has nothing to do with what we are doing here :)
Title: Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "Two Player Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore
Post by: Maelstrom on March 20, 2018, 03:04:24 AM
I realize that english is not your first language. I still can't make sense of what you just said. At all.
Title: Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "Two Player Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore
Post by: BrainyLucario on March 20, 2018, 03:11:02 AM
I think he doesn't like the empty space on the sheet or something.
Title: Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "Two Player Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore
Post by: Maelstrom on March 20, 2018, 03:15:49 AM
But there isn't any?
Title: Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "Two Player Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore
Post by: Deku Trombonist on March 20, 2018, 03:17:28 AM
How is something like this?

Musx: https://www.dropbox.com/s/fxr4hmj3joexjch/Yoshi%27s%20Cookie%20-%20Two%20Player%20Music%20Type%20C.musx?dl=1

Mus: https://www.dropbox.com/s/zy7zt1rawz4g67l/Yoshi%27s%20Cookie%20-%20Two%20Player%20Music%20Type%20C.mus?dl=1
Title: Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "Two Player Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore
Post by: JacopoTore on March 20, 2018, 11:50:58 PM
I realize that english is not your first language. I still can't make sense of what you just said. At all.
XD I'm sorry Maelstrom, my language is music
Title: Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "Two Player Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore
Post by: JacopoTore on March 20, 2018, 11:54:04 PM
How is something like this?

Musx: https://www.dropbox.com/s/fxr4hmj3joexjch/Yoshi%27s%20Cookie%20-%20Two%20Player%20Music%20Type%20C.musx?dl=1

Mus: https://www.dropbox.com/s/zy7zt1rawz4g67l/Yoshi%27s%20Cookie%20-%20Two%20Player%20Music%20Type%20C.mus?dl=1

I really prefer this edition! REALLY! I think is more readable. But if I open the mus file I see the articulation and dynamics completely wrong (wrong places).
Title: Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "Two Player Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore
Post by: Deku Trombonist on March 21, 2018, 11:58:26 AM
That's really strange, everything looked okay for me on my computer.

Is this better?
https://www.dropbox.com/s/zy7zt1rawz4g67l/Yoshi%27s%20Cookie%20-%20Two%20Player%20Music%20Type%20C.mus?dl=1
Title: Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "Two Player Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore
Post by: JacopoTore on March 22, 2018, 01:31:14 AM
That's really strange, everything looked okay for me on my computer.

Is this better?
https://www.dropbox.com/s/zy7zt1rawz4g67l/Yoshi%27s%20Cookie%20-%20Two%20Player%20Music%20Type%20C.mus?dl=1
This is what appear :(((
Title: Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "Two Player Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore
Post by: Deku Trombonist on March 22, 2018, 02:32:39 AM
Could you post a screenshot of what you're seeing?
Title: Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "Two Player Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore
Post by: JacopoTore on March 22, 2018, 02:59:55 AM
Could you post a screenshot of what you're seeing?
Could you see the PDF? I see exactly like the PDF
Title: Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "Two Player Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore
Post by: Deku Trombonist on March 22, 2018, 02:33:17 PM
Ah, yes I can see. I've never come across that problem before. I'll try and work out a solution and get back to you.
Title: Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "Two Player Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore
Post by: Maelstrom on March 22, 2018, 03:03:51 PM
Deku or I could make a PDF for you so it looks fine.
Title: Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "Two Player Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore
Post by: JacopoTore on March 22, 2018, 05:28:29 PM
Deku or I could make a PDF for you so it looks fine.
I was just ask about this!
Thank you Maelstrom!
Title: Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "Two Player Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore
Post by: JacopoTore on March 23, 2018, 10:13:33 AM
Deku or I could make a PDF for you so it looks fine.
If you want you can send to me at jacopotore@gmail.com
Really thanks
Title: Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "Two Player Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore
Post by: Maelstrom on March 23, 2018, 01:47:50 PM
https://www.dropbox.com/s/d9pxccv18bxc8wi/Yoshi%27s%20Cookie%20-%20Two%20Player%20Music%20Type%20C%20%281%29.pdf?dl=1
How's this?
Title: Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "Two Player Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore
Post by: JacopoTore on March 23, 2018, 02:21:55 PM
https://www.dropbox.com/s/d9pxccv18bxc8wi/Yoshi%27s%20Cookie%20-%20Two%20Player%20Music%20Type%20C%20%281%29.pdf?dl=1
How's this?
I think is perfect. Thank you <3
Title: Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "Two Player Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore
Post by: JacopoTore on March 25, 2018, 03:29:32 PM
https://www.dropbox.com/s/d9pxccv18bxc8wi/Yoshi%27s%20Cookie%20-%20Two%20Player%20Music%20Type%20C%20%281%29.pdf?dl=1
How's this?
Maelstrom what do you think about this arrangement?
Title: Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "Two Player Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore
Post by: Maelstrom on March 25, 2018, 04:18:47 PM
I think it's fine. We need a second updater to check it first, though.
Title: Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "Two Player Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore
Post by: Latios212 on March 25, 2018, 04:25:06 PM
Two things before we finish up here:
- Who's Gabriele Sechi and why are they listed as an arranger? If they are a co-arranger, it needs to be noted in our system as well.
- The title of sheet is inconsistent with this sheet you submitted last time - 1P Music Type C (http://www.ninsheetmusic.org/download/pdf/3722). I don't know anything about the soundtrack, but the titles should match in form at the very least.
Title: Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "Two Player Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore
Post by: JacopoTore on March 25, 2018, 07:22:57 PM
Two things before we finish up here:
- Who's Gabriele Sechi and why are they listed as an arranger? If they are a co-arranger, it needs to be noted in our system as well.
- The title of sheet is inconsistent with this sheet you submitted last time - 1P Music Type C (http://www.ninsheetmusic.org/download/pdf/3722). I don't know anything about the soundtrack, but the titles should match in form at the very least.

- Gabriele Sechi is one of my students, I assigned him the task of transcribing this piece under my supervision; unfortunately he is a minor then (according to the laws of my state) I had to ask permission to parents to be able to insert and publish his name and surname in the score (I got this permission), if he must create an account to be accredited as arranger then I can create one for him or ask the mother if she can handle it.
- For the title I think I understood, so I need to change the title from: "Two player Music Type C" to "2P Music Type C"?
Title: Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "Two Player Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore
Post by: Latios212 on March 26, 2018, 01:15:21 AM
if he must create an account to be accredited as arranger then I can create one for him or ask the mother if she can handle it.
Yup, for our system to log multiple arrangers on the main site correctly there needs to be an associated account for each arranger, so having him get an account would be swell.

"Two player Music Type C" to "2P Music Type C"?
Yep, either that or we can change the title of the one on site to "1 Player Music Type C" for you. (Let us know which and we can replace the files for you, since I recall there were file conversion issues before.)
Title: Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "Two Player Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore
Post by: Deku Trombonist on March 26, 2018, 02:13:33 PM
Yup, for our system to log multiple arrangers on the main site correctly there needs to be an associated account for each arranger, so having him get an account would be swell.
I can make an addition for an arranger that doesn't have a forum account. Originally that was intended just to be used for old sheets from before the site crash but it's not necessarily limited to that. Up to you.
Title: Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "Two Player Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore
Post by: JacopoTore on March 27, 2018, 05:59:03 AM
I can make an addition for an arranger that doesn't have a forum account. Originally that was intended just to be used for old sheets from before the site crash but it's not necessarily limited to that. Up to you.
I think this is the best choice (creating an account is not a school task). Thank you
Title: Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "Two Player Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore
Post by: JacopoTore on March 27, 2018, 06:02:05 AM
Yup, for our system to log multiple arrangers on the main site correctly there needs to be an associated account for each arranger, so having him get an account would be swell.
Yep, either that or we can change the title of the one on site to "1 Player Music Type C" for you. (Let us know which and we can replace the files for you, since I recall there were file conversion issues before.)
Yes I have a problem with the .mus file, so if you could help me to chance the title (2 Player to 2P) I appreciate it so much
Title: Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "Two Player Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore & Gabriele Sechi
Post by: Deku Trombonist on March 27, 2018, 09:46:09 AM
Okay, I sorted out the arranger issue for you.
Title: Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "Two Player Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore & Gabriele Sechi
Post by: JacopoTore on March 27, 2018, 10:09:14 AM
Okay, I sorted out the arranger issue for you.
Really thanks
Title: Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "2P Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore & Gabriele Sechi
Post by: Latios212 on March 30, 2018, 01:47:46 AM
Title changed; files regenerated.

Good to go!
Title: Re: [NES] Yoshi's Cookie - "2P Music Type C" by Jacopo Tore & Gabriele Sechi
Post by: Zeta on March 30, 2018, 01:47:50 AM
This submission has been accepted by Latios212 (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=4344).

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