Submission Information:
Series: Super Mario
Game: Super Mario Sunshine
Console: Nintendo GameCube
Title: Pinna Park
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Mitch Norris (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=5204)
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ooooh I like it
Few small things need to be addressed:
-There's a prominent C# on the down beat of measure 3 (RH) that is absent.
-The octave A's in measure 22 (RH) should be a single fourth-line D.
-Measure 23 should end with an E on the up beat of 2, preceded by a D the sixteenth note before that.
-Measure 39's layer 2 sixteenth notes should only be a single eighth note.
-Measure 40's LH bass line is incorrect.
Other than that, I like it. The absent harmonies seem strategically chosen to provide a more approachable arrangement, making it much less awkward to play than a piece like this needs to be. Below is a version of the arrangement with the changes listed above.
https://www.dropbox.com/s/5b3i4678kqc1nw6/%5BGCN%5D%20-%20Super%20Mario%20Sunshine%20-%20Pinna%20Park%20-%20WheelmanMitch12345.mus?dl=1
It's very clean...almost too clean in some ways for me. I'd personally love to see an arrangement with more 'wrong' stuff in it, something captures the Country Band March vibe a bit more. The original does sound pretty wonky after all.
But it is a good arrangement nonetheless and it does what it does well. Those were more musings than criticisms.
Nice work, guys. Looks good to me.
This submission has been accepted by Sebastian (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=3424).
~Zeta, your friendly NSM-Bot