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Title: [GBA] Hamtaro: Rainbow Rescue - "Tip-Top Fair" by Altissimo
Post by: Zeta on December 25, 2017, 03:30:34 PM
Submission Information:

Series: Other
Game: Hamtaro: Rainbow Rescue
Console: Game Boy Advance
Title: Tip-Top Fair
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Altissimo (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=3843)
Title: Re: [GBA] Hamtaro: Rainbow Rescue - "Tip-Top Fair" by Altissimo
Post by: Altissimo on December 25, 2017, 03:30:59 PM
Title: Re: [GBA] Hamtaro: Rainbow Rescue - "Tip-Top Fair" by Altissimo
Post by: Altissimo on April 15, 2018, 03:47:56 PM
bumpin this cause im an asshole
Title: Re: [GBA] Hamtaro: Rainbow Rescue - "Tip-Top Fair" by Altissimo
Post by: Olimar12345 on May 30, 2018, 05:17:14 AM
-I would recommend a D.C. instead for obvious reasons, but eh it's your call here.
-Did you write measure 2 (LH) and elsewhere like that for a reason? eighth-quarter-eighth is more concise and common, as well as easier to read imo.
-The first-line E on beat 1 of measure 8 (RH) is being unnecessarily doubled. If there isn't a reason for it, I would suggest it be removed.
-For consistency's sake, remove the second-line G from the triplet in measure 28 (RH). It looks like it was placed there by mistake.
-Maybe make that left margin not so big?

Everything else looks fine. Nice job on this one.

File containing all suggested changes: https://www.dropbox.com/s/brgl47w9zlv1rpy/Tip-Top%20Fair12345.mus?dl=1
Title: Re: [GBA] Hamtaro: Rainbow Rescue - "Tip-Top Fair" by Altissimo
Post by: Altissimo on May 30, 2018, 02:15:29 PM
i have no particular attachment to anything so your changes are incorporated lol
Title: Re: [GBA] Hamtaro: Rainbow Rescue - "Tip-Top Fair" by Altissimo
Post by: Olimar12345 on May 31, 2018, 12:07:59 AM
I approve.
Title: Re: [GBA] Hamtaro: Rainbow Rescue - "Tip-Top Fair" by Altissimo
Post by: Maelstrom on May 31, 2018, 06:52:33 PM
It looks great, and passes my checklist.
gud sheet
accept
Title: Re: [GBA] Hamtaro: Rainbow Rescue - "Tip-Top Fair" by Altissimo
Post by: Zeta on May 31, 2018, 06:52:36 PM
This submission has been accepted by Maelstrom (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=4119).

~Zeta, your friendly NSM-Bot