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Title: [MUL] The Legend of Zelda: Breath of the Wild - "Temple of Time" by Nacho2420
Post by: Zeta on December 05, 2017, 12:10:18 AM
Submission Information:

Series: The Legend of Zelda
Game: The Legend of Zelda: Breath of the Wild
Console: Multiplatform
Title: Temple of Time
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Nacho2420 (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=37)

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Title: Re: [MUL] The Legend of Zelda: Breath of the Wild - "Temple of Time" by Nacho2420
Post by: Sebastian on December 05, 2017, 06:44:22 AM

Haven't note checked yet, but everything else looks great! I'll finish this one up shortly.
Title: Re: [MUL] The Legend of Zelda: Breath of the Wild - "Temple of Time" by Nacho2420
Post by: Sebastian on December 05, 2017, 09:34:11 AM
Notes are good!
Only thing I'd recommend: You could add an expression text along with your metronome marking. Those aren't required on NSM sheets, but it's nice to have those on sheets, especially pianistic pieces like this one.

Great work!
Title: Re: [MUL] The Legend of Zelda: Breath of the Wild - "Temple of Time" by Nacho2420
Post by: LeviR.star on December 05, 2017, 12:07:31 PM
Quote from: Sebastian on December 05, 2017, 09:34:11 AMNotes are good!
Only thing I'd recommend: You could add an expression text along with your metronome marking. Those aren't required on NSM sheets, but it's nice to have those on sheets, especially pianistic pieces like this one.

Agreed! But after 149 sheets, you may find it hard to come up with new material

Quote from: Sebastian on December 05, 2017, 09:34:11 AMGreat work!

Ditto on this. Great to see you here again, Nacho!
Title: Re: [MUL] The Legend of Zelda: Breath of the Wild - "Temple of Time" by Nacho2420
Post by: Sebastian on December 05, 2017, 02:09:19 PM
Quote from: LeviR.star on December 05, 2017, 12:07:31 PMBut after 149 sheets, you may find it hard to come up with new material
https://www.allmusic.com/moods
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tempo
Title: Re: [MUL] The Legend of Zelda: Breath of the Wild - "Temple of Time" by Nacho2420
Post by: LeviR.star on December 05, 2017, 03:29:33 PM
Quote from: Sebastian on December 05, 2017, 02:09:19 PMhttps://www.allmusic.com/moods

*Frantically bookmarks*

Back before my NSM account, I looked to the Tempo article every time for a marking.
Title: Re: [MUL] The Legend of Zelda: Breath of the Wild - "Temple of Time" by Nacho2420
Post by: Maelstrom on December 05, 2017, 03:45:37 PM
Just come up with a good word and then google translate it into italian.
Title: Re: [MUL] The Legend of Zelda: Breath of the Wild - "Temple of Time" by Nacho2420
Post by: Olimar12345 on December 05, 2017, 04:16:15 PM
Quote from: Maelstrom on December 05, 2017, 03:45:37 PMJust come up with a good word and then google translate it into italian.

He's kidding, really don't do this.
Title: Re: [MUL] The Legend of Zelda: Breath of the Wild - "Temple of Time" by Nacho2420
Post by: Olimar12345 on December 05, 2017, 05:17:01 PM
Feedback time:
-Again I'd suggest using 0.5 left margin.
-Measure 1's Gb should be an F# (it's quartal there).
-A little thing about the placement of your dynamics: Try to place them evenly between the two staves when both hands are playing the same dynamic. Sometimes you have them right underneath the top line which looks odd. This is okay to do when only the top staff is playing, but looks funny when both hands are supposed to be the same volume.
-Right now the repeat scheme looks odd. You don't have to include the forward repeat bar if the repeat goes back to the beginning, but since it does go back to the beginning, a D.C. (which literally means to return to the beginning) would be more fitting, methinks.
-Measures 20 and 21 would look much better as rolled chords.

Once again, here's a version that contains these changes. Use it if you desire.
https://www.dropbox.com/s/33iob2brou54ycu/The%20Legend%20of%20Zelda%20Breath%20of%20the%20Wild%20-%20Temple%20of%20Time12345.mus?dl=1
Title: Re: [MUL] The Legend of Zelda: Breath of the Wild - "Temple of Time" by Nacho2420
Post by: nacho2420 on December 06, 2017, 05:08:18 PM
Thanks Olimar!!! You are bae.

Final files are uploaded and ready to go
Title: Re: [MUL] The Legend of Zelda: Breath of the Wild - "Temple of Time" by Nacho2420
Post by: Sebastian on December 06, 2017, 05:19:06 PM
Awesome!
Title: Re: [MUL] The Legend of Zelda: Breath of the Wild - "Temple of Time" by Nacho2420
Post by: Zeta on December 06, 2017, 05:19:21 PM
This submission has been accepted by Sebastian (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=3424).

~Zeta, your friendly NSM-Bot