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Title: [NES] Sweet Home - "Cave Theme" by Rwars
Post by: Zeta on November 08, 2017, 09:22:26 PM
Submission Information:

Series: Other
Game: Sweet Home
Console: Nintendo Entertainment System
Title: Cave Theme
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Rwars (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=5243)
Title: Re: [NES] Sweet Home - "Cave Theme" by Rwars
Post by: Rwars on November 08, 2017, 09:32:33 PM
Title: Re: [NES] Sweet Home - "Cave Theme" by Rwars
Post by: Sebastian on November 14, 2017, 02:45:12 AM
Whoooo...interesting sheet. :P

Here are a few things:
- You're missing a dynamic marking.
- The last low B in each measure (LH) should mirror the RH making it a D.
- The spellings are a little awkward. Since there isn't a discernable key (to me at least), these accidentals may work better:
(https://www.dropbox.com/s/z3w1ndmcchb738x/Screenshot%202017-11-13%2020.42.07.png?dl=1)
- From what I can tell from the original, M.4+ is faster than M. 1-3.

Whew...weird song. Does anyone else have any thoughts on this one? Updaters?
Title: Re: [NES] Sweet Home - "Cave Theme" by Rwars
Post by: Deku Trombonist on November 14, 2017, 04:01:25 AM
(https://www.dropbox.com/s/31njn92lx51bc0t/Sweet%20Home%20-%20Cave%20Theme.png?dl=1)

If you beam it differently and respell some accidentals it shows up something interesting.

There are the following arpeggios: Abm, D, Fmin, Bmin (I'm assuming the transcription is correct). If you just take the roots of the arpeggios, you have four notes which spell a diminished chord (B, D, F, Ab). And seeing as diminished chords can resolve any of four ways, that's why there is seemingly no 'discernable key'.

I'm sure you could probably tinker with the spellings a bit to find an optimal spelling, but I just thought it was an interesting little quirk that was worth pointing out.
Title: Re: [NES] Sweet Home - "Cave Theme" by Rwars
Post by: Rwars on November 14, 2017, 06:14:54 PM
I've reworked the spellings, and finally added the dynamic mark. Don't know how that escaped me the first time around.

- From what I can tell from the original, M.4+ is faster than M. 1-3.
You seem to be correct, it does speed up a bit there, actually. I'm not sure on what it speeds up to, though.
Title: Re: [NES] Sweet Home - "Cave Theme" by Rwars
Post by: Sebastian on November 14, 2017, 07:44:17 PM
Awesome.
We, the Updaters, have discussed it and have come to a consensus.

Go ahead and change the time signature to 12/16 and beam it this way. Also, change the Cb to a B#. That was my bad.
(https://www.dropbox.com/s/4bxjt85wy8woylf/Screenshot%202017-11-14%2013.40.58.png?dl=1)
Title: Re: [NES] Sweet Home - "Cave Theme" by Rwars
Post by: Rwars on November 15, 2017, 02:06:51 AM
There we go. Changed the remaining flats into sharps, and changed the time signature. Anything else, perhaps?