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Title: [NES] Sweet Home - "East Garden" by Rwars
Post by: Zeta on August 05, 2017, 12:00:24 PM
Submission Information:

Series: Other
Game: Sweet Home
Console: Nintendo Entertainment System
Title: East Garden
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Rwars (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=5243)

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Title: Re: [NES] Sweet Home - "East Garden" by Rwars
Post by: Olimar12345 on August 05, 2017, 12:05:55 PM
All double flats should be regular flats. Also, the URL should look like this: http://www.NinSheetMusic.org/ with the capital letters.
Title: Re: [NES] Sweet Home - "East Garden" by Rwars
Post by: Sebastian on August 05, 2017, 02:19:57 PM
Nice work!

A few things I noticed:
- The playability of the arrangement is one of my concerns. You could arrange the first two measures this way:
(https://www.dropbox.com/s/nc6pc5nzlrm7s4q/Screenshot%202017-08-05%2017.07.39.png?dl=1)

The line indicates that the left hand should play the notes in layer two after the C is played. The C can be held for the whole duration with the use of the pedal (which can be indicated with a pedal marking if you wish). You can create the line using the Smart Shape Tool.
- The entire left hand once again is in the third layer. Go ahead and transfer that to layer 1.
- Put a courtesy accidental on the first D in the second layer of M. 3 & 5.
- Go ahead and respace all the measures. The easiest way is just by clicking a note in each measure and it will automatically respace that measure.
- All the Gbs in M. 9 should be F#s.

The first layer in M. 3 onward is missing some bass notes, but I assume you left it a whole note for playability reasons.


Title: Re: [NES] Sweet Home - "East Garden" by Rwars
Post by: Olimar12345 on August 05, 2017, 03:03:27 PM
Seb, I wouldn't recommend using the line like that, as it can be mistaken for a glissando. I'd recommend shortening it to begin somewhere near the end of the measure or use some other indication to switch hands (like simply putting "l.h.").
Title: Re: [NES] Sweet Home - "East Garden" by Rwars
Post by: Latios212 on August 05, 2017, 03:33:00 PM
Cross-staving the last note in m. 7 is fine because that'd be a large jump for the RH, but I feel like the last notes of m. 3, 4, 5, and 6 are probably more easily reachable by the right hand to avoid the left thumb having to play two notes in a row.
Title: Re: [NES] Sweet Home - "East Garden" by Rwars
Post by: Olimar12345 on August 05, 2017, 04:04:08 PM
Check this out:

https://www.dropbox.com/s/aws6n1z3i385998/eastgarden12345.mus?dl=0

This is what I did:
-Moved the LH to layer 1 (using 3 is unnecessary)
-Adjusted the formatting slightly.
-Changed the D.C. Al Fine to a regular D.C. adding the note to only jump on the second time through the piece.
-Edited the second measure to the way I mentioned in my previous post.
-Added the courtesy naturals that Seb mentioned.
-Changed the Gb's in measure 9 to F#'s. The harmony there is D7 (D F# A C) and F# is the third note in that, not Gb.

Title: Re: [NES] Sweet Home - "East Garden" by Rwars
Post by: Sebastian on August 05, 2017, 04:12:12 PM
Rwars has made the fixes. Excellent work once again!
And thanks MSF, Lat, and Olimar for your input with this sheet.
Title: Re: [NES] Sweet Home - "East Garden" by Rwars
Post by: Zeta on August 05, 2017, 04:12:28 PM
This submission has been accepted by Sebastian (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=3424).

~Zeta, your friendly NSM-Bot