Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: The Binding of Isaac: Rebirth
Console: Multiplatform
Title: The Calm
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Bloop (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?action=profile;u=1023)
hey
sadness
Haven't checked notes yet, but some dynamics could use some straightening up and some are clashing with some notes.
Fixed those!
A couple of things:
- Check m.1-4 and related measures (9-12, 37-40) for the RH notes
- For m.8 it'd seem more practical to have the E's be played by the LH and the eighth notes by the RH, although you don't need to
- Clashing slurs with accents on m.19-20 and m.47-48
- The G in m.30 sounds like it should be an A
Other than that, looks good!
Quote from: InsigTurtle on August 31, 2017, 09:45:31 PM- Check m.1-4 and related measures (9-12, 37-40) for the RH notes
It's really hard to make out what the right notes are. I did some messing around though.
Quote from: InsigTurtle on August 31, 2017, 09:45:31 PM- For m.8 it'd seem more practical to have the E's be played by the LH and the eighth notes by the RH, although you don't need to
Good point, fixed that!
Quote from: InsigTurtle on August 31, 2017, 09:45:31 PM- Clashing slurs with accents on m.19-20 and m.47-48
Fixed!
Quote from: InsigTurtle on August 31, 2017, 09:45:31 PM- The G in m.30 sounds like it should be an A
Yeah, I know, but it isn't. Check the original.
pmub
This is a pretty interesting piece. It's hard to make out notes some points, but I think you did a pretty good job with it.
Two formatting things I have:
- You can put the composers in two lines so that it's not creeping under the subtitle.
- Go ahead and right-align the composers/arranger. It's slightly off.
I'll have another Updater check this one out so we can get it accepted.
Bump for arranger.
oops forgot fixed
Bump for Bloop!
Vicarious bumping is not encouraged.
I'm archiving this. Feel free to re-submit this with the suggested changes made, Bloop.