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Title: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 3 : Your Best Friend
Post by: BrainyLucario on February 26, 2016, 08:28:48 AM
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Google Docs story link
https://docs.google.com/document/d/19MG4Th3YFBGQPww92zFYTmYf0mKiQiCHsi-D3dw42oY/edit?usp=sharing
 (https://docs.google.com/document/d/19MG4Th3YFBGQPww92zFYTmYf0mKiQiCHsi-D3dw42oY/edit?usp=sharing)
 Chapter 1: The Hunch
I'll go ahead and start the story, If anyone still wants to sign-up, you can.PM ME YOUR CHOICE...


Chapter 1: The Hunch

E. Grill Industries stood behind his bar counter, as usual, and watched as monsters filed into his diner. As always, he spotted his best customer, Sans, at the front of the crowd, but unlike most of the time, he appeared to have someone with him. He watched as the two approached the bar and took a seat in front of him. "hey, e. grill, my friend , waddle brisk, here wants an order of  burg, and I'll have the usual," Sans chuckled. Across the diner, Lesser Braixen was getting ready to play cards by himself, as he normally did. When he went to get his cards from his pocket, he felt nothing but air. The realization struck him that he forgot to take them with him when he left the diner last night. Frantically, he searched the diner for his missing cards, which he soon spotted in the middle of Doggo and Greater Dog's table. In order to retrieve his cards, he would have to interrupt their game. (WHAT SHOULD E. Grill, Lesser Braixen, AND Waddle Brisk DO?)
 E. Grill Choices
1. Hand Sans a bottle of ketchup
2. Give Sans a plate of Fries
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 Lesser Braixen Choices
1. Ask Waddle Brisk to retrieve the cards
2. Approach Doggo's table and retrieve the cards
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 Waddle Brisk Choices
1. Ask E. Grill for a glass of water
2. Ask Sans about a talking flower
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PM ME YOUR CHOICES, E. Gadd, Braxien, and Waddle.

(E. Gadd chose choice 1) (Waddle chose choice 1) (Braixen chose choice 1)

"I'd like a glass of water, as well," Waddle Brisk stated to E. Grill.  E. Grill gave Brisk a ticked off stare and replied," I'd get you it, but i don't really touch the stuff....for obvious reasons." He then rushed through the "fire exit" to fetch the order Sans requested. As E. Grill walked out, Waddle Brisk noticed Lesser Braixen beckon him over to his table. "I'll be right back, Sans," Brisk murmured. "Heh, whatever you say, kid," Sans replied. Waddle Brisk rushed over to Lesser Braixen's table. "Hey Lesser Braixen, what's up?" Brisk asked. "*pant pant pant pant bark bark growl whimper*" Lesser Braixen replied and pointed towards his playing cards. "Oh, you want me to get your playing cards?" (Waddle Brisk's next choice) Meanwhile at the bar, E. Grill returned with Waddle Brisk and Sans's food: an order of Burg for Brisk and a ketchup bottle for Sans. "Thanks E. Grill, this is exactly what I wanted." Sans chuckled and began to chug the entire bottle. (E. Grill's next choice) Suddenly, the diner doors swung open and Undyne and Papyrus entered. Undyne was dragging Papyrus by his leg, as he desperately tried to escape. "BUT I DON'T LIKE IT HERE!!! I CAN'T STAND GREASE!!! I HAVE STANDARDS YOU KNOW!!" Papyrus yelled. "Yeah? And I hate standing out in the cold all day, but you make me do that." Undyne replied. (Undyne's next choice) Outside the bar, Monoco kid watched through a window as Undyne dragged Papyrus across the diner. He desperatly wanted to see his hero, but didn't know how to approach her.(Monoco Kid's next choice)

 Waddle Brisk choices
1. Retrieve the cards yourself
2. Call for Doggo (ask him to hand you the cards)
3. Ask Lesser Braixen why he can't get them
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 E. Grill's Choices
1. Turn on the diner's Tv (MTT Channel)
2. Sit down beside Sans
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 Undyne Choices
I want my choice to be a complete surprise!
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 Monoco Kid Choices
1. Rush in yelling Undyne
2. Casually stroll in and greet Undyne
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More characters will come in later. You wanted a continous story , didn't you? POST  YOUR CHOICES IN THIS THREAD, E. Gadd, Waddle, and Oronoco. This will be how the choices are picked from now on.

(Waddle Bro chose choice 3) (E. Gadd chose choice 1) (Oronoco chose choice 1)

E. Grill grabbed the diner's remote and turned the Diner's Tv on. "Cooking With a Killer Robot" was currently being broadcasted and starred the undergrounds very own superstar, MettaYears. "Good evening, ladies and gentlemen! Boy, do I have a show for you today! We have a lot to do so let's not waste any time. Bring out today's special guests!" MettaYears said as he was joined on stage by Noctowey and Burgerzeilants. "Howdy! I'm Noctowey. Noctowey the Flower!" Noctowey cheerfully exclaimed. "Hey boss, why do I have to do this, again?" Burgerzeilants said with a plastered smile on his face. "Because I'll fire you if you don't!" MettaYears cheerfully exclaimed. "Now then, How about we have a cook-off? What dish will you two be preparing?" (MettaYears, Burgerzeilants, and Noctowey's next choice) Meanwhile, across the bar, Brisk and Lesser Braixen were in a fierce arguement. "Why can't you get your own cards? It's not that hard!" Waddle Brisk argued. "Wruff woof bark growl snarl bark growl." Lesser Braixen wolfed. "It's not my fault your too shy to get your own cards. Why are you so freaking scared?" Waddle Brisk bellowed. Undyne noticed the confrontation and quickly rushed over, freeing Papyrus. "FREEDOM!!" Papyrus cackled as he dashed towards the door. Before he could reached It, Sans teleported into the doorway, and stopped his brother. "Hey bro, don't leave yet. You'll miss MettaYear's cooking show." Sans chuckled. "OOOOOH!! A COOKING SHOW!! I COULD LEARN NEW METHODS TO MAKE MY SPAGHETTI EVEN MORE IRRESISTIBLE!!! I GUESS IT WOULDN'T KILL ME TO STAY UNTIL THE SHOW'S OVER." Papyrus cackled. The two brothers then took a seat at the bar. Undyne had reached Lesser Braixen and Waddle Brisk. "Hey, what are you two punks fighting for?" Undyne questioned. "Lesser Braixens too lazy to get his cards off of Doggo's table." Waddle Brisk furiously replied. All of a sudden the diner door swung open and Monoco Kid came running into the diner. "UNNNNDDDYYYYNNNNEE!!!! YOU'RE MY HERO!!!" Monoco Kid yelled. As he ran towards Undyne, he tripped and landed face first on Doggo's table, flipping it and throwing all of it's contents skywards. "Hey! You ruined our game! I was going to win!" Doggo furiously barked. (Monoco Kid's next choice) As Monoco kid nocked the table over, Lesser Braixen's cards were flung towards Waddle Brisk, Lesser Braixen, and Undyne. (Brisk and Lesser Braixen's Next choice).
 MettaYears Choices
1. Consider cooking "soul food" (if you get what i mean...)
2. Consider cooking a quiche
3. Consider cooking a cake 
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 Noctowey choices
1. Consider cooking "friendliness pellets"
2. Consider cooking a cake
3. Consider cooking "soul food"
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 Burgerzeilants Choices
1. Cook a Burger
2. Cook a Steak in the Shape of MettaYear's Face.
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 Monoco Kid choices
1. Apologies and pick up the table
2. Be like Undyne and act tough.
3. Run to  Undyne and ask her to protect you.
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 Lesser Braixen AND Waddle Brisk Choices
1. Attempt to catch the cards.
2. Don't try to get the cards.
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Longest section I've written by far. My fingers are numb. I apologize for typo's...
Post your choices in the thread AwesomeYears, Nocturne, Zeila, Oronoco, Braixen, And Waddle.


(Zelia chose choice 2.) (AwesomeYears chose choice 2.) (Nocturne chose choice 1.) (Braixen chose choice 1) (Waddle Bro chose choice 2.) (Oronoco chose choice 3.)

Lesser Braixen leaped for the cards and caught them without any trouble. He then rushed to his table and began playig a game of Go Fish, by his self . "Whatever, I'm starving. I wonder if E. Grill has my food, yet." Waddle Brisk angrily stated. He then saw his plate of burg on the bar counter beside Papyrus and Sans. (YOU DONT HAVE A CHOICE.....YOU WILL PERISH...) Monoco Kid stood in horror as Doggo angrily approached him, barking hysterically. "UNDYNE!!!! HELP!!!" Monoco Kid screamed as he ran towards Undyne. "Hey get back here you little..." Doggo studdered as he saw Undyne standing in his way. "Uhhh...What are doing Doggo?" Undyne questioned."Oh.....uhhh.. Nothing boss! I was just leaving...." Doggo nervously replied as he ran out of the diner. Meanwhile on the tv...."I'll be cooking a quiche." MettaYears stated. "I guess I could cook a steak." Burgerzeilants moaned. "And I can cook my famous "friendliness pellets! Actually, they're already done. Time for the taste test." Noctowey said as Friendliness bullets appeared in the air. "Now....tell me how these taste when you see me in Hell... MWAHHH HAHA HAHAHAHHA urk!" Noctowey's maniacle laugh was cut short as he vanished into a cloud of darkness... "Oh no, not him..." Sans moaned as the darkness began to expand."My hunches are always right...." A mysterious voice stated. Then, the Underground went dark....(Everyone's choice, besides Olimar)
 Everyone but Olimar's choices
1.Struggle
2. Scream
3. Run
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Brainy Is Gone....I'm the one in control now....(Olimar.....i'm not giving you story control...i'm just adding hype

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 Chapter 2: Reality Shatters
(Waddle Bro, Braixen, and AwesomeYears chose choice 3) (Oronoco and Zeila chose choice 1) (E. Gadd chose a custom choice?) (Nocturne failed to make a choice- BrainyLucario assigned choice 1 to his character)

Chapter 2: Reality Shatters


Everyone in the Underground was frozen in place. Not a single monster could move. After several minutes of darkened silence, a strange voice echoed in every monsters head. "Did you all actually think you had a choice? You cannot escape what fate has in store for you. I am the only one who has the power to do this. Did you really think your actions would change how the story unraveled? In the end, you would all still end up here, trapped in this void, with me. Now then, each of you will be tested, and your actions weighed. Even though you didn't effect where the story ended up, your choices did determine your trial, and your choices in this eternal darkness will be what decides your fate. Now then, who should I test first?" O. L. Gastar declared. (O. L. Gastar's next choice)

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1. Test E. Grill and Lesser Braixen
2. Test Waddle Brisk
3. Test MettaYears and Burgerzeilants
4. Test Noctowey
5. Test Monoco Kid and Undyne
6. Test Sans
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(Olimar12345 chose choice 2)
AUDIO CHAPTER!!!! Play this in a separate tab....only works for computer users....
Spoiler
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 Brisk felt something tug at his shirt in the vast darkness. Everywhere he looked, darkness followed. All of a sudden, he felt a wave of cold hit his body. The gust of air ceased to let up, and got stronger and faster as time continued...untill the wind literally swept Brisk off his feet and sent him flying towards the endless abyss of darkness. "AHHHHH!!" Brisk screamed, but nobody could hear him. After what seemed like an eternity, the wind set him down in front of a cloaked figure. "Wh-who...are y-you.." Waddle Brisk stuttered. A voice boomed from the speakers of his phone. "I am O. L. Gastar, the one who was denied his own existence, who is tearing apart reality just to stand before you. You have performed actions that have gone against your own personality, and must pay the price. Your action to not help Lesser Braixen will be your demise. Now, you ignorant child, prepare to face your polar opposite, the eraser of worlds, Chara..." O. L Gastar boomed as he vanished from Brisk's sight. A sinister laugh echoed from the darkness surrounding Brisk. It seemed to come from everywhere. Waddle Brisk began to sweat as a figure approached from the darkness, wielding a knife. The figure raised it's head and a pair of glowing red eyes peered at Waddle Brisk."Hello, Brisk. Surprised to see me?" Chara cackled. "You think you're so special, that you don't have to fight anyone to make it out alive. That, you welp, is where you're wrong. You see, Mercy wont work on me, because I'm too far gone. I have too much LOVE, and will stop at nothing to kill you. You have no chance against me, for even if you choose to fight, and attack me, I'll posses your very being, and you'll never escape my clutches. So what are you gonna do, wimp? Hahaha!" Chara smiled and fiddled with her knife. (Brisk's next choice) (O. L. Gastar's next choice)

 Waddle Brisk choice
1. Scream
2. Flee
3. Fight
4. Mercy
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 O. L. Gastar Choice
1. Test E. Grill and Lesser Braixen
2. Test MettaYears and Burgerzeilants
3. Test Undyne and Monoco Kid
4. Test Sans and Noctowey
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( Waddle Brisk Chose Choice 3) (O. L. Gastar Chose Choice 3)
AUDIO CHAPTER!!!! Play this in a separate tab....only works for computer users....
Spoiler
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Waddle Brisk laughed mockingly at Chara. "You think I'm afraid of you? Your not some immortal demon, you're a human like me, and I wont lose to someone like you!" Waddle Brisk mocked and equipped the stick from his inventory. "You idiot! Your soul is mine! HAHAHAHAHA!" Chara bellowed as Brisk charged at her, swinging the stick psychotically. Chara began to hover in the air, glowing a faint shade of red. Brisk stared in horror as a demonic laugh filled the air, torturing his eardrums. Brisk screamed in agony as Chara began to hover towards him with her head cocked to the left. Brisk felt death close in on him, but for some reason, he began to think of his friends. What would they do without me? What Would Chara do to them if she used me? They would all die because of me.....because of.....me. Waddle Brisk thought. Suddenly memories started flooding his mind. He thought of Toriel, and how she treated him as her own child. He thought of Papyrus's calls and how he tried to help him escape from Undyne, even though he failed at that...he still tried. He thought of Undyne, Sans and Alphys, and how they were there for him until the end. He knew that he needed to stay alive, and as Chara began to try and posses Brisk, he smiled. "You're not going to posses me. I wont let you!" Brisk said as he began to walk towards Chara. The demonic being raised her head in shock. "Wh-why isn't this working? You're supposed to be under my control! I command you to stop!" Chara screamed. Brisk continued to approach Chara, wielding his stick. As he reached his destination, Chara attempted to stab Brisk with her knife, but Brisk knocked it out of her hands with his stick. "Don't you get it? You can't beat someone with my level of Determination. Sweet Dreams, you sick, twisted freak." Brisk said. He swung the stick with all his might and knocked Chara out of the air. As the stick connected with Chara's face, it snapped in half, breaking from the force of the blow. Chara was knocked out instantly, and fell to the ground with a thud. Brisk stared at the unconscious Chara with a feeling of triumph. He had passed the test. Chara started to fade away as a bright light began to take her place. Brisk shielded his eyes as the light grew brighter and brighter until a door made of light appeared in front of him. Without questioning anything, Waddle Brisk approached the door, and entered.


CHANGE MUSIC TO THIS.....IT's STILL OPTIONAL TO DO THIS BUT IT ADDS MORE 'UMPH TO THE STORY
Spoiler
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Monoco Kid stood completely still, for his body was frozen in place. "Undyne! WHERE ARE YOU!" He screamed. "Will you stop screaming! I'm standing right here!" Undyne roared. Monoco Kid gave a sigh of relief, as a strange breeze began to form. The breeze grew stronger and stronger, Until Monoco Kid and Undyne were swept away. Monoco Kid panicked as he was sent flying through the endless abyss of darkness. In a moment of pure panic, Monoco Kid opened his mouth and bit down on something he felt touch his face. "OW!!! THAT'S MY HAND!!!" Undyne yelled as Monoco Kid continued to bite it. The wind suddenly stopped and Undyne and Monoco Kid were thrown to the darkness that acted as the ground below them. Monoco Kid slowly rose to find a cloaked figure in front of him and Undyne. "Undyne! Who is that! Protect me!" Monoco Kid screamed and rushed behind Undyne, who had managed to stand up as well. A voice boomed from the figure in front of them. "I and Dr. O. L. Gastar, a being beyond your comprehension, a being that was denied his own existence, a being that has lost everything important to him. You're actions at E. Grill's, though they may have appeared to be insignificant, have decided your fate, little one. You and Undyne will be tested to decide your fates, and the test has been decided by your actions, Monoco Kid. Your reliance on Undyne has shown just how reliant on others you are. That is why, you will be facing two opponents in this test. Who are these opponents you ask? Why, you're staring at one of them right now, for I am one of your opponents, hahaha! I've also acquired a little back-up just in case you actually manage to defeat me, this backup goes by the name of Noctowey, and I'm sure he'll love to kill you just as much as I will. Let's have him join us." O. L. Gastar declared as Noctowey appeared from the darkness. "Hey! Where am I? Who's the idiot that foiled my plan!!" Noctowey screamed as he caught sight of Gastar. "P-p-please don't kill me! I'll do anything you want!" Noctowey pleaded. Gastar smiled and said, "Help me kill this child and I wont kill you...deal?" Noctowey turned around and saw Undyne and Monoco Kid standing in the darkness. He gave an evil smile and said, "Deal!" Gastar began to laugh as he absorbed Undyne  in the darkness. Monoco Kid watched in horror, as his hero disappeared into the surrounding darkness. "Did you think I would let Undyne help you? The only way she makes it out alive is if you manage to beat us. So come on! Show us what you've got." (O. L. Gastar, Noctowey, and Monoco kid's next choice)

 Monoco Kid Choices
1. Run
2. Fight
3. Plead
4. Cry
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 O. L. Gastar's next choice
1. Fight
2. Let Noctowey take him
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 Noctowey choices
1. Cooperate With Gastar
2. Attack Gastar
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(Oronoco chose choice 2) (Olimar12345 chose choice 2) (NocturneOfShadow chose choice 2)

Play the previous audio clip if you want, it doesn't really matter since it's just for effect.

Gastar sensed something was wrong, for he could feel the aura of betrayal in the air. He wasn't going to let some Flower ruin his revenge. "On second thought, I shouldn't waste my energy on the likes of you. This flower could easily defeat you without my help. Ciao." Gastar cackled as he began to disappear into the darkness. Noctowey narrowed his eyes as he watched Gastar begin to leave. Just before Gastar vanished into the darkness, vines sprung from the ground in front of him, trapping and encasing the being in a cage of greenery. "Where do you think your going? I'm not done with you yet. If you thought for one second that I was ever on your side, then your the biggest idiot that doesn't exist, hahahahaha!" Noctowey maniacally laughed. Gastar looked around at his enclosure and smiled. "Heh, you're right about one thing, Noctowey. I don't exist, at least not in reality. And due to my non-existance, the laws of reality don't apply to me, therefore, you can't defeat me. Did you actually think that I could be contained? If you did, then you're the real idiot." Gastar declared. He proceeded to phase through the vines that enclosed him, laughing hysterically. "WHY YOU...." Noctowey began as he was kicked by Monoco Kid, who was running full force towards Gastar. "GIVE ME BACK, UNDYNE!!!!!" Monoco Kid screamed as he lunged for Gastar's face with his mouth open wide. Gastar watched with confusion as Monoco Kid soared through the air towards him, only realizing what was happening after it was already too late. Monoco kid chomped on Gastar's face with all of his might, causing Gastar to yell in agony. Gastar attempted to pull Monoco Kid off of his face, but was unsuccessful. "AHHH! GET OFF MY FACE! THAT"S IT! I'VE HAD IT WITH YOU, I HAVE BETTER THINGS TO DO THAN DEAL WITH A BRAT LIKE YOU!" Gastar bellowed and disappeared without a trace.
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Noctowey watched in horror as Monoco Kid began to fall towards the ground where he was planted, and quickly disappeared into the black soil. Monoco Kid groaned as he attempted to stand up. Once he got to his feet, he noticed a bright light appear where Gastar used to be. He watched as the light grew brighter and bigger until it formed a door made of light. Monoco Kid searched the darkness around him for Undyne, but was unsuccessful in his search. With tears in his eyes, he slowly entered the door, alone..... Moments after Monoco Kid had entered the door, the darkness began to shift, as a fish-like figure began to appear from it. Undyne gasped as she was ejected from the darkness and began to cough uncontrollably. "Hey! Where'd that kid go?" Undyne questioned as she caught sight of the door of light. Without a second though or another word, she entered the door. A shout of joy could be heard from the other side.


E. Grill saw nothing but darkness, and when you're literally made of fire, that's not a good thing. He could still feel the bar counter in front of him and could still hear the sound of a dog whimpering.He slowly pushed his glass of gasoline setting on the bar away from him, and headed in the direction of the noise. After a few seconds of complete darkness, E. Grill reached the source of the cries. Lesser Braixen was cowering under a table, emitting yelps of fright. Lesser Braixen noticed E. Grill staring down at him, and immediately bolted towards him. He attempted to hug E. Grill, but yelped in pain as E. Grill burnt Lesser Braix on contact. Lesser Braixen gave E.Grill a cold stare and E. Grill replied back with  a casual shrug. It wasn't his fault that he was made of fire, anyway. All of a sudden, an eerie laugh began to originate from the surrounding darkness, as a figure appeared from the darkness. THe figure's face appeared to be bleeding, only the blood running down it's face wasn't red, it was as black as the darkness that surrounded it. "Greetings," The being declared. "My name is O. L. Gastar, a being who was denied his own existance, who knows your past, present, and future. You two, while not really effecting the outcome of many events, have made decisions that will effect your trial. For your actions. Each of you will face an opponent. E. Grill, you shall face a monster you know, very well. A monster that you can only see if you look in a mirror. Have you figured it out yet? You will be facing none other than, yourself." As Gastar spoke these words, a blue figure approached from the darkness. He looked exactly like E. Grill, only he ws made of blue fire, not orange. The other E. Grill rolled up his sleeves and cracked his knuckles. It was time for a bar fight...( E. Grill's next choice) Gastar turned to Lesser Braixen and contorted his bleeding face into a smile. "As for you, I have a special enemy for you to fight. An enemy whose existance is as questionable as my own. He may resemble someone you've come to know, but believe me, he's nothing like the one you know. Let me introduce to you....Error Sans." Gastar declared. Lesser Braixen's fur began to stand on it's ends as the air slowly acquired a negative charge. A figure began to approach from the darkness behind Gastar, and as the being came into view, he appeared to blend into the darkness. His eyesockets were as red as blood, and his blue pupil seemed to disappear occasionally into his blood-like eyesockets. He plastered a constant smile onto his face and grinned from cheek to cheek with dull, yellow teeth. Blue lines appeared to be streaming down from the seas of blood he just so happened to call his eyes, and ran down his cheeks like a festive looking face-paint. The hood of his solid black jacket was decorated with a blue fur lining and two pale, yellow laces hung from his hood. He sported a red T-shirt under his jacket and wore a pair of black sports shorts that had two blue lines going vertically across them, one on each short leg. His hands were as black as the darkness that surrounded Lesser Braixen, and each finger was decorated with varying stripes of yellow, blue, and red. Blue beams appeared to shoot from his finger tips, and various sections of his body were blocked out by the word ERROR. His legs were crimson-red, and his feet bore black sneakers with red, blue , and yellow design details. IF THAT"S STILL NOT ENOUGH DETAIL FOR YOU, JUST LOOK AT THIS PICTURE.
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"H-Heeeyy there-there buddy! I'm sorry-sorry to tell you thi-this, bu-bu-but !EMIT DAB YLLAER A EVAH OT TUOBA RUOY !GOD DIPUTS UOY ,SREYARP RUOY YAS AHAHAHAH!" Error Sans glitched. (Lesser Braixen and O.L. Gastar's next choice.)

 E. Grill Choices
1. Roll Up your sleeves and Fight!
2. Offer him a drink.
3. Compliment him on his looks.
4. Ask him if he wants to preform a face swap on UnderSnap (UT SnapChat.)
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 Lesser Braixen's Choices
1. Bite Error Sans's legs.
2. Attack Error Sans with your sword and Shield
3, Panic and run away.
4. Sit there and stare into space
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 O. L. Gastar Choices
1.Test MettaYears and Burgerzeilants.
2. Watch E. Grill's and Lesser Braixen's fights.
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(E. Gadd chose choice 1) (Braixen chose choice 3) (Olimar12345 chose choice 1)

E. Grill watched as his duplicate pounded his fists together. E. Gadd casually laughed an  rolled up his sleeves. "We're closed....but since you look famished, I'll serve you a knuckle sandwich, on the house!" E. Gadd roared as he began to turn a fiece red color.
 BATTLE MUSIC!!
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The two E. Grills rushed towards each other and collided, forming a sphere of fire around the two and throwing the two away from one another. The fire sphere was so intense that it lit up the darkness surrounding them. E. Grill looked around in astonishment and saw that they were currently in Waterfall, despite being inside E. Grill's diner just moments prior to their confrontation with O. L. Gastar. He lgasped as he saw a lake of water directly behind him, his feet almost came into contact with the lake's water. E. Grill turned back around and saw his duplicate start to rush towards him for a second time as an idea popped into E. Grill's fiery mind. Without a second though, E. Grill pointed his palms at the ground in front of him and shot out a blast of fire from his hands. The blast was so intense that it lifted E. Grill of the ground and sent him flying across the lake of water. As he was sent flying backwards across the lake, he saw his duplicate run towards the lake and shoot a blast of blue flames at the ground behind him, which sent him flying towards E. Grill. As E. Grill watched his duplicate chase him across the lake of water, he laughed and halted the stream of fire, flowing from his palms. As he fell towards the lake, he aimed his palm towards the blue E. Grill and fired a stream of fire at him. The blue E. Grill gasped as he halted the stream of blue flames jetting from his hands, causing him to plummet towards the lake below him. He began to laugh as he saw E. Grill's fire blast fly past him. "Haha! You missed m-" the Blue E. Gadd was cut off as he fell directly into the lake. He let out a short scream of agony as the water extimguished him instantly, leaving only a wet tuxedo and a pair of glasses floating in the water, before they began to sink towards the bottom. E. Grill gave a sigh of relieve before realizing the he was falling as well. He closed his eyes and prepared to hit the water he assumed was below him. Instead of water, E. Grill hit the ground on the other side of the lake with a thud. Shocked, he slowly tried to stand up, and managed to get to his feet after several attempts. The sphere of fire was still illumiating the darkness around him as he frantically looked for lesser Braixen. He spotted the dog with a being that resembled a monster he knew very well. His eyes filled with anger as he saw the figure start to approach Lesser Dog, and began walking over to confront the being that resembled Sans

Lesser Braixen trembled as Error Sans began to walk towards him, causing the darkness to bend around the two. Unable to cope with the fear that plagued him, Lesser Braixen yelped and started to run away from Error Sans. "HA-H-Ha! THAT'S Rig- I KNEW-KNEW-KNeW YOu WEr- CoW$rD! NO 0?e can St@p ME! AHAHAH!" Error Sans laughed. He attempted to chase Lesser Braixen, but was tripped by E. Grill's leg, for he had reached Error Sans while the being was busy gloating. As Error Sans fell forward, E. Grill Grabbed Error Sans by his eyesocket, causing his hand to glitch slightly. Unable to escape, Error Sans watched as E. Grill began to shake uncontrollably with anger. " MY FRIEND, SANS, WOULD NEVER ATTEMPT TO ATTACK A MONSTER! YOU DON'T DESERVE TO LOOK LIKE HIM, YOU FREAK SHOW! DIIIEEE!!" E. Grill shouted and sent a constant stream of fire directly into Error Sans's red eyesocket. The flames engulfed Error Sans's skull as he screamed in pain. E. Grill laughed as he watched the demon melt into a puddle of black liquid. Clenching his fists, E. Grill smiled and said, "Get dunked on, you skeletal freak." Lesser Braixen ran towards E. Grill, but stopped right before he attempted to tackle him, not wanting another burn like last time. The pair smiled at each other as a beam of light appeared from the melted Error Sans. The beam shined brighter and brighter as E. Grill and Lesser Braixen Shielded their eyes. The beam began to dim and left a door made of light behind. With no where else to go, the pair slowly approached the door and slowly entered.

MettaYears dashed through the darkness as fast as he could, with BurgerZeilants not far behind him. "Hey, Boss! Wait up! Where are you going?" Burgerzeilants wheezed, clearly not used to running this much. MettaYears suddenly stopped and turned towards Burgerzeilants,"I have to get  out of this this place! I can't let my fans down! The show must continue!" Burgerzeilants jumped into MettaYears arms as a sinister laughed echoed around them. A figure approached from the darkness, who's face was drenched with blood. "Greetings, you incompetent fools, I am Dr. O. L. Gastar, a god of space and time. I am here to test you two in order to determine how worthy you are to live. Fail my test and you die. Got it? If not, TOO BAD! You two will work as a team to defeat a creature who's as mad and crazy as I am. Prepare to die by the hands of Mad Dummy!" Gastar declared and dissapeared without a trace. Directly where Gastar stood, a dummy was hovering from side to side in the air. "Hello MettaYears, Remember me? Or are you too good for ghosts like me now? You haven't came to visit me and Nabstablook even once since you became a star. Now prepare to get what you deserve!" Mad Dummy crazily rambled. (MettaYears and BurgerZeilants next choice)

MettaYears Choice
1. Tell Burgerzeilants to flip the switch on your back
2. Sing to Mad Dummy
3. Quiz Mad Dummy
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Burgerzeilants Choice
1. Fling Glamburgers at Mad Dummy
2.Cower Behind MettaYears
3. Taunt Mad Dummy
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THIS TOOK ABOUT AN HOUR AND A HALF TO WRITE!!!

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So I've decided to create a little interactive Undertale story on NSM. This story could go a couple different ways depending on what the community wants to do. I'm always going to be the one that writes the story, but when your character is given an important choice, You get to decide their actions. This story could be an interactive story where the member's who sign up to play the role of certain characters decides what they want their character (not another person's character) to do via the thread or by PM. The story could either be one continuous story with the reader's point of view changing between characters each chapter, or we could have mini-stories that focuses on one character per story.
List of characters and which NSM member controls them
Character list
1. Frisk= Waddle Bro (Waddle Brisk)
2. Papyrus=
3. Sans=
4. Toriel=
5. Flowey= NocturneOfShadow (Noctowey)
6. Temmie=
7. Chara=  Chara  (Chara) Told to me via irl
8. Asgore=
9. Mettaton= AwesomeYears ( MettaYears)
10. Undyne=
11. Alphys=
12. Napstablook=
13. Burgerpants= Zeila ( Burgerzeilants) <-i tried
14. Bratty=
15. Catty=
16. Monster kid=Oronoco (Monoco Kid)
17. Muffet=
18. W. D. Gaster?= Olimar12345 (O. L. Gastar)
19. Grillby= E. Gadd Industries  (E. Grill Industries or just E. Grill)
20. Lesser Dog= Braixen1264  (Lesser Braixen)
21. Onion-San=
22. Jerry=
23.
*not: not all roles have to be filled. This is just to decide on the user controlled characters
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With that said. If you want to sign up. Answer these questions and post hem in the thread:

A. What character would you like to have control over? (Make sure someone's not already claimed that character. If your character's not listed, I'll add them in)

B. Would you like the story to be one continuous story or several short stories?

C (Optional). Do you have any suggestions for the story?


You can sign up at any point..just make sure you catch up on the story
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story Story: Character Sign-Ups going on NOW!
Post by: E. Gadd Industries on February 26, 2016, 10:07:57 AM
I suppose I'll join, but I'm not as knowledgeable in this area as I could be. I'll be Grillby.
B. Short stories
C. Nope. I'm just a big flame.
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story Story: Character Sign-Ups going on NOW!
Post by: braix on February 26, 2016, 10:53:35 AM
A. Muffet. I'd rather be Lesser Dog but I guess that isn't a choice
B. Continuous
C. Nope
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story Story: Character Sign-Ups going on NOW!
Post by: BrainyLucario on February 26, 2016, 10:56:34 AM
Quote from: braixen1264 on February 26, 2016, 10:53:35 AMA. Muffet. I'd rather be Lesser Dog but I guess that isn't a choice
B. Continuous
C. Nope
I Can add lesser dog if you want me to. I would list all the characters in the game but that would take quite a while.
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story Story: Character Sign-Ups going on NOW!
Post by: braix on February 26, 2016, 11:29:55 AM
Sure just make me lesser dog
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Character Sign-Ups going on NOW!
Post by: mikey on February 26, 2016, 12:20:01 PM
Flowey
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Character Sign-Ups going on NOW!
Post by: Waddle Bro on February 26, 2016, 12:41:11 PM
dibs frisk
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Character Sign-Ups going on NOW!
Post by: braix on February 26, 2016, 02:03:43 PM
No.
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Character Sign-Ups going on NOW!
Post by: Oronoco on February 26, 2016, 02:51:48 PM
Toronoco
Asgoronoco
Mettatonoco
Onionoco-San


Actually can I please be the Monster Kid?
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Character Sign-Ups going on NOW!
Post by: BrainyLucario on February 26, 2016, 03:55:04 PM
Speaking of those names....they don't really have a purpose. I just wanted To see how hilarious some of the names would get. The characters in the story will still have their official name. Hehe, E. Grill Industries is my favorite so far!
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Character Sign-Ups going on NOW!
Post by: mikey on February 26, 2016, 04:21:18 PM
can you not nocturneofflowey
pls
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Character Sign-Ups going on NOW!
Post by: AwesomeYears on February 26, 2016, 05:10:26 PM
I suppose Mettaton.

Also continuous.
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Character Sign-Ups going on NOW!
Post by: Zeila on February 26, 2016, 05:53:35 PM
A. Burgerpants
B. Continuous
C. No
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Character Sign-Ups going on NOW!
Post by: BrainyLucario on February 27, 2016, 11:34:06 AM
I'll go ahead and start the story, If anyone still wants to sign-up, you can.PM ME YOUR CHOICE...


Chapter 1: The Hunch

Grillby stood behind his bar counter, as usual, and watched as monsters filed into his diner. As always, he spotted his best customer, Sans, at the front of the crowd, but unlike most of the time, he appeared to have someone with him. He watched as the two approached the bar and took a seat in front of him. "Hey, Grillby. My friend , Frisk, here wants an order of  burg, and I'll have the usual," Sans chuckled. Across the diner, Lesser Dog was getting ready to play cards by himself, as he normally did. When he went to get his cards from his pocket, he felt nothing but air. The realization struck him that he forgot to take them with him when he left the diner last night. Frantically, he searched the diner for his missing cards, which he soon spotted in the middle of Doggo and Greater Dog's table. In order to retrieve his cards, he would have to interrupt their game. (WHAT SHOULD GRILLBY, LESSER DOG, AND FRISK DO?)
 Grillby Choices
1. Hand Sans a bottle of ketchup
2. Give Sans a plate of Fries
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 Lesser Dog Choices
1. Ask Frisk to retrieve the cards
2. Approach Doggo's table and retrieve the cards
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 Frisk Choices
1. Ask Grillby for a glass of water
2. Ask Sans about a talking flower
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PM ME YOUR CHOICES, E. Gadd, Braxien, and Waddle.
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 1.////Sign-ups still accepted.
Post by: BrainyLucario on February 27, 2016, 09:05:43 PM
(E. Gadd chose choice 1) (Waddle chose choice 1) (Braixen chose choice 1)

"I'd like a glass of water, as well," Frisk stated to Grillby. Grillby gave Frisk a ticked off stare and replied," I'd get you it, but i don't really touch the stuff....for obvious reasons." He then rushed through the "fire exit" to fetch the order Sans requested. As Grillby walked out, Frisk noticed Lesser Dog beckon him over to his table. "I'll be right back, Sans," Frisk murmured. "Heh, whatever you say, kid," Sans replied. Frisk rushed over to Lesser Dog's table. "Hey Lesser Dog, what's up?" Frisk asked. "*pant pant pant pant bark bark growl whimper*" Lesser Dog replied and pointed towards his playing cards. "Oh, you want me to get your playing cards?" (Frisk's next choice) Meanwhile at the bar, Grillby returned with Frisk and Sans's food: an order of Burg for Frisk and a ketchup bottle for Sans. "Thanks Grillby, this is exactly what I wanted." Sans chuckled and began to chug the entire bottle. (Grillby's next choice) Suddenly, the diner doors swung open and Undyne and Papyrus entered. Undyne was dragging Papyrus by his leg, as he desperately tried to escape. "BUT I DON'T LIKE IT HERE!!! I CAN'T STAND GREASE!!! I HAVE STANDARDS YOU KNOW!!" Papyrus yelled. "Yeah? And I hate standing out in the cold all day, but you make me do that." Undyne replied. (Undyne's next choice) Outside the bar, Monster kid watched through a window as Undyne dragged Papyrus across the diner. He desperatly wanted to see his hero, but didn't know how to approach her.(Monster Kid's next choice)

 Frisk choices
1. Retrieve the cards yourself
2. Call for Doggo (ask him to hand you the cards)
3. Ask Lesser Dog why he can't get them
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 Grillby Choices
1. Turn on the diner's Tv (MTT Channel)
2. Sit down beside Sans
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 Undyne Choices
I want my choice to be a complete surprise!
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 Monster Kid Choices
1. Rush in yelling Undyne
2. Casually stroll in and greet Undyne
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More characters will come in later. You wanted a continous story , didn't you? POST  YOUR CHOICES IN THIS THREAD, E. Gadd, Waddle, and Oronoco. This will be how the choices are picked from now on.
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 1.////Sign-ups still accepted.
Post by: braix on February 27, 2016, 09:49:27 PM
waddle bro pls get my cards for me i beg u
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 1.////Sign-ups still accepted.
Post by: E. Gadd Industries on February 28, 2016, 05:11:58 AM
*gets remote and turns on TV*
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 1.////Sign-ups still accepted.
Post by: Waddle Bro on February 28, 2016, 08:45:51 AM
Quote from: braixen1264 on February 27, 2016, 09:49:27 PMwaddle bro pls get my cards for me i beg u
why cant you get them urself u lazy fuck
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 1.////Sign-ups still accepted.
Post by: Oronoco on February 28, 2016, 09:14:17 AM
1. UUNDYYYYYYYYYYNEE!!
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 1.////Sign-ups still accepted.
Post by: braix on February 28, 2016, 09:37:41 AM
Quote from: Waddle Bro on February 28, 2016, 08:45:51 AMwhy cant you get them urself u lazy fuck
DUDE I THOUGHT U WERE A BRO ;_____;
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 1.////Sign-ups still accepted.
Post by: Waddle Bro on February 28, 2016, 11:13:32 AM
sorry fren but i couldn't betray my homies immanuel kant, gandhi and jesus and what they've taught me
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 1.////Sign-ups still accepted.
Post by: braix on February 28, 2016, 11:39:27 AM
im best homie :c
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 1.////Sign-ups still accepted.
Post by: BrainyLucario on February 28, 2016, 05:00:48 PM
(Waddle Bro chose choice 3) (E. Gadd chose choice 1) (Oronoco chose choice 1)

Grillby grabbed the diner's remote and turned the Diner's Tv on. "Cooking With a Killer Robot" was currently being broadcasted and starred the undergrounds very own superstar, Mettaton. "Good evening, ladies and gentlemen! Boy, do I have a show for you today! We have a lot to do so let's not waste any time. Bring out today's special guests!" Mettaton said as he was joined on stage by Flowey and Burgerpants. "Howdy! I'm Flowey. Flowey the Flower!" Flowey cheerfully exclaimed. "Hey boss, why do I have to do this, again?" Burgerpants said with a plastered smile on his face. "Because I'll fire you if you don't!" Mettaton exclaimed. "Now then, How about we have a cook-off? What dish will you two be preparing?" (Mettaton, Burgerpants, and Flowey's next choice) Meanwhile, across the bar, Frisk and Lesser Dog were in a fierce arguement. "Why can't you get your own cards? It's not that hard!" Frisk argued. "Wruff woof bark growl snarl bark growl." Lesser Dog wolfed. "It's not my fault your too shy to get your own cards. Why are you so freaking scared?" Frisk bellowed. Undyne noticed the confrontation and quickly rushed over, freeing Papyrus. "FREEDOM!!" Papyrus cackled as he dashed towards the door. Before he could reached It, Sans teleported into the doorway, and stopped his brother. "Hey bro, don't leave yet. You'll miss Mettaton's cooking show." Sans chuckled. "OOOOH!! A COOKING SHOW!! I COULD LEARN NEW METHODS TO MAKE MY SPAGHETTI EVEN MORE IRRESISTIBLE!!! I GUESS IT WOULDN'T KILL ME TO STAY UNTILL THE SHOWS OVER." Papyrus cackled. The two brothers then took a seat at the bar. Undyne had reached Lesser Dog and Frisk. "Hey, what are you two punks fighting for?" Undyne questioned. "Lesser Dogs too lazy to get his cards off of Doggo's table." Frisk furiously replied. All of a sudden the diner door swung open and Monster Kid came running into the diner. "UNNNNDDDYYYYNNNNEE!!!! YOU'RE MY HERO!!!" Monster Kid yelled. As he ran towards Undyne, he tripped and landed face first on Doggo's table, flipping it and throwing all of it's contents skywards. "Hey! You ruined our game! I was going to win!" Doggo furiously barked. (Monster Kid's next choice) As Monster kid nocked the table over, Lesser Dog's cards were flung towards Frisk, Lesser Dog, and Undyne. (Frisk and Lesser Dog's Next choice).
 Mettaton Choices
1. Consider cooking "soul food" (if you get what i mean...)
2. Consider cooking a quiche
3. Consider cooking a cake 
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 Flowey choices
1. Consider cooking "friendliness pellets"
2. Consider cooking a cake
3. Consider cooking "soul food"
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 Burgerpants Choices
1. Cook a Burger
2. Cook a Steak in the Shape of Mettaton's Face.
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 Monster Kid choices
1. Apologies and pick up the table
2. Be like Undyne and act tough.
3. Run to  Undyne and ask her to protect you.
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 Lesser Dog AND Frisk Choices
1. Attempt to catch the cards.
2. Don't try to get the cards.
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Longest section I've written by far. My fingers are numb. I apologize for typo's...
Post your choices in the thread AwesomeYears, Nocturne, Zeila, Oronoco, Braixen, And Waddle.
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 1.////Sign-ups still accepted.
Post by: Olimar12345 on February 28, 2016, 05:06:26 PM
OP sign up:

A: W. D. Gaster
B: continuous
C: no
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 1.////Sign-ups still accepted.
Post by: Zeila on February 28, 2016, 05:21:42 PM
2. Cook a steak in the shape of Mettayears face
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 1.////Sign-ups still accepted.
Post by: Oronoco on February 28, 2016, 07:08:09 PM
3. UNDYNE HALP
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 1.////Sign-ups still accepted.
Post by: braix on February 28, 2016, 08:58:27 PM
1. I WANT MY CARDS DAMMIT
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 1.////Sign-ups still accepted.
Post by: AwesomeYears on February 28, 2016, 10:37:26 PM
Lets cook some quiche bitches!
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 1.////Sign-ups still accepted.
Post by: BrainyLucario on February 29, 2016, 07:24:39 AM
Your characters will now be refered to as whatever the name combination i gave you for your character. For Example, Grillby will be called E. Grill Industries, and Frisk will be called Waddle Brisk


The OP will have the first 3 segments with the fixed versions that Include your character name

I'm also still waiting for Waddle and Noc's choices
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 1.////Sign-ups still accepted.
Post by: Waddle Bro on February 29, 2016, 08:20:07 AM
the only things i'll be catching here are stds
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 1.////Sign-ups still accepted.
Post by: mikey on February 29, 2016, 09:10:29 AM
Quote from: BrainyLucario on February 29, 2016, 07:24:39 AMYour characters will now be refered to as whatever the name combination i gave you for your character. For Example, Grillby will be called E. Grill Industries, and Frisk will be called Waddle Brisk


The OP will have the first 3 segments with the fixed versions that Include your character name
oh heck no
if I make friendliness pellets can I kill people
whichever choice ends up being the most evil, that's what I'll do
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: [REDACTED]
Post by: BrainyLucario on February 29, 2016, 04:43:50 PM
(Zelia chose choice 2.) (AwesomeYears chose choice 2.) (Nocturne chose choice 1.) (Braixen chose choice 1) (Waddle Bro chose choice 2.) (Oronoco chose choice 3.)

Lesser Braixen leaped for the cards and caught them without any trouble. He then rushed to his table and began playig a game of Go Fish, by his self . "Whatever, I'm starving. I wonder if E. Grill has my food, yet." Waddle Brisk angrily stated. He then saw his plate of burg on the bar counter beside Papyrus and Sans. (YOU DONT HAVE A CHOICE.....YOU WILL PERISH...) Monoco Kid stood in horror as Doggo angrily approached him, barking hysterically. "UNDYNE!!!! HELP!!!" Monoco Kid screamed as he ran towards Undyne. "Hey get back here you little..." Doggo studdered as he saw Undyne standing in his way. "Uhhh...What are doing Doggo?" Undyne questioned."Oh.....uhhh.. Nothing boss! I was just leaving...." Doggo nervously replied as he ran out of the diner. Meanwhile on the tv...."I'll be cooking a quiche." MettaYears stated. "I guess I could cook a steak." Burgerzeilants moaned. "And I can cook my famous "friendliness pellets! Actually, they're already done. Time for the taste test." Noctowey said as Friendliness bullets appeared in the air. "Now....tell me how these taste when you see me in Hell... MWAHHH HAHA HAHAHAHHA urk!" Noctowey's maniacle laugh was cut short as he vanished into a cloud of darkness... "Oh no, not him..." Sans moaned as the darkness began to expand."My hunches are always right...." A mysterious voice stated. Then, the Underground went dark....(Everyone's choice, besides Olimar)
 Everyone but Olimar's choices
1.Struggle
2. Scream
3. Run
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Brainy Is Gone....I'm the one in control now....(Olimar.....i'm not giving you story control...i'm just adding hype
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 1.////Sign-ups still accepted.
Post by: E. Gadd Industries on February 29, 2016, 05:09:47 PM
*ahem* you seem to be forgetting the choices.
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: [REDACTED]
Post by: BrainyLucario on February 29, 2016, 05:39:56 PM
nope
 Help
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Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 1.////Sign-ups still accepted.
Post by: braix on February 29, 2016, 06:04:52 PM
I shall choose to run.
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 1.////Sign-ups still accepted.
Post by: AwesomeYears on March 01, 2016, 03:09:43 AM
Run.
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: [REDACTED]
Post by: Zeila on March 01, 2016, 07:38:58 AM
Struggle
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Post by: E. Gadd Industries on March 01, 2016, 09:19:20 AM
Is slowly push away my drink an option? :D
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: [REDACTED]
Post by: Oronoco on March 01, 2016, 09:53:49 AM
Struggles. Tries to hold hands with Undyne.
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: [REDACTED]
Post by: BrainyLucario on March 01, 2016, 10:16:42 AM
Don't pay attention to this post. I accidentally posted this
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: [REDACTED]
Post by: BrainyLucario on March 01, 2016, 10:18:13 AM
Quote from: E. Gadd Industries on March 01, 2016, 09:19:20 AMIs slowly push away my drink an option? :D
Uhhhh....sure?

Edit: oh....i see.... People start to black out when they are drunk...
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: [REDACTED]
Post by: Zeila on March 01, 2016, 10:22:23 AM
Quote from: Oronoco on March 01, 2016, 09:53:49 AMStruggles. Tries to hold hands with Undyne.
With what hands though? or is that the joke
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: [REDACTED]
Post by: BrainyLucario on March 01, 2016, 10:49:50 AM
Quote from: Oronoco on March 01, 2016, 09:53:49 AMStruggles. Tries to hold hands with Undyne.
Haha! He bites her hand instead....that's going in the story!
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: [REDACTED]
Post by: Waddle Bro on March 01, 2016, 10:52:40 AM
i'm out
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 2///Sign-Ups still accepted
Post by: BrainyLucario on March 02, 2016, 05:50:43 AM
(Waddle Bro, Braixen, and AwesomeYears chose choice 3) (Oronoco and Zeila chose choice 1) (E. Gadd chose a custom choice?) (Nocturne failed to make a choice- BrainyLucario assigned choice 1 to his character)

Chapter 2: Reality Shatters


Everyone in the Underground was frozen in place. Not a single monster could move. After several minutes of darkened silence, a strange voice echoed in every monsters head. "Did you all actually think you had a choice? You cannot escape what fate has in store for you. I am the only one who has the power to do this. Did you really think your actions would change how the story unraveled? In the end, you would all still end up here, trapped in this void, with me. Now then, each of you will be tested, and your actions weighed. Even though you didn't effect where the story ended up, your choices did determine your trial, and your choices in this eternal darkness will be what decides your fate. Now then, who should I test first?" O. L. Gastar declared. (O. L. Gastar's next choice)

Spoiler
1. Test E. Grill and Lesser Braixen
2. Test Waddle Brisk
3. Test MettaYears and Burgerzeilants
4. Test Noctowey
5. Test Monoco Kid and Undyne
6. Test Sans
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Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 2///Sign-ups still accepted
Post by: braix on March 02, 2016, 07:13:50 AM
Isn't it waddle brisk not waddle bro
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 2///Sign-ups still accepted
Post by: BrainyLucario on March 02, 2016, 07:37:00 AM
Oops! I'll fix that...thanks for pointing that out. I also added a vital comma to that section,as well.
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 2///Sign-ups still accepted
Post by: mikey on March 02, 2016, 09:06:15 AM
wait, why did I have to make a choice
I wasn't in the bar
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 2///Sign-ups still accepted
Post by: BrainyLucario on March 02, 2016, 09:09:27 AM
Neither was MettaYears or Burgerzeilants.....you were in the darkness,right? It really didn't matter anyway. The choices were denied by Gastar.
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 2///Sign-ups still accepted
Post by: mikey on March 02, 2016, 09:14:18 AM
this really doesn't sound like I get to be the bad guy
fine, I'll just restart the game from my last save point until I AM a bad guy
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 2///Sign-ups still accepted
Post by: BrainyLucario on March 02, 2016, 10:16:42 AM
Quote from: NocturneOfShadow on March 02, 2016, 09:14:18 AMthis really doesn't sound like I get to be the bad guy
fine, I'll just restart the game from my last save point until I AM a bad guy
Who said you weren't the bad guy? Just be patient....the story is about to get intense
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 2///Sign-ups still accepted
Post by: Waddle Bro on March 02, 2016, 01:18:27 PM
you gotta risk it for the waddle brisket
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 2///Sign-ups still accepted
Post by: BrainyLucario on March 03, 2016, 05:53:21 AM
(Olimar12345 chose choice 2)
AUDIO CHAPTER!!!! Play this in a separate tab....only works for computer users....
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 Brisk felt something tug at his shirt in the vast darkness. Everywhere he looked, darkness followed. All of a sudden, he felt a wave of cold hit his body. The gust of air ceased to let up, and got stronger and faster as time continued...untill the wind literally swept Brisk off his feet and sent him flying towards the endless abyss of darkness. "AHHHHH!!" Brisk screamed, but nobody could hear him. After what seemed like an eternity, the wind set him down in front of a cloaked figure. "Wh-who...are y-you.." Waddle Brisk stuttered. A voice boomed from the speakers of his phone. "I am O. L. Gastar, the one who was denied his own existence, who is tearing apart reality just to stand before you. You have performed actions that have gone against your own personality, and must pay the price. Your action to not help Lesser Braixen will be your demise. Now, you ignorant child, prepare to face your polar opposite, the eraser of worlds, Chara..." O. L Gastar boomed as he vanished from Brisk's sight. A sinister laugh echoed from the darkness surrounding Brisk. It seemed to come from everywhere. Waddle Brisk began to sweat as a figure approached from the darkness, wielding a knife. The figure raised it's head and a pair of glowing red eyes peered at Waddle Brisk."Hello, Brisk. Surprised to see me?" Chara cackled. "You think you're so special, that you don't have to fight anyone to make it out alive. That, you welp, is where you're wrong. You see, Mercy wont work on me, because I'm too far gone. I have too much LOVE, and will stop at nothing to kill you. You have no chance against me, for even if you choose to fight, and attack me, I'll posses your very being, and you'll never escape my clutches. So what are you gonna do, wimp? Hahaha!" Chara smiled and fiddled with her knife. (Brisk's next choice) (O. L. Gastar's next choice)

 Waddle Brisk choice
1. Scream
2. Flee
3. Fight
4. Mercy
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 O. L. Gastar Choice
1. Test E. Grill and Lesser Braixen
2. Test MettaYears and Burgerzeilants
3. Test Undyne and Monoco Kid
4. Test Sans and Noctowey
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Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 2///Sign-ups still accepted
Post by: braix on March 03, 2016, 08:05:12 AM
*"You think you're so special"
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 2///Sign-ups still accepted
Post by: BrainyLucario on March 03, 2016, 08:45:04 AM
Quote from: braixen1264 on March 03, 2016, 08:05:12 AM*"You think you're so special"
Crap! I thought i fixed all the typo's. Thanks for that!

Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 2///Sign-ups still accepted
Post by: E. Gadd Industries on March 03, 2016, 01:25:54 PM
*"Who's tearing apart reality"
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 2///Sign-ups still accepted
Post by: mikey on March 03, 2016, 01:28:55 PM
he seems like the type of person to say who is
regardless we could sit here all day fixing his typos, but we won't
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 2///Sign-ups still accepted
Post by: BrainyLucario on March 03, 2016, 01:49:53 PM
Quote from: E. Gadd Industries on March 03, 2016, 01:25:54 PM*"Who's tearing apart reality"
Everyone's a critic
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Post by: Waddle Bro on March 03, 2016, 02:13:18 PM
i'll 1v1 this bitch in a knife fight whether or not i even have a knife
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Post by: BrainyLucario on March 03, 2016, 03:04:13 PM
Quote from: Waddle Bro on March 03, 2016, 02:13:18 PMi'll 1v1 this bitch in a knife fight whether or not i even have a knife
You don't...this won't end well......or will it? :)

By the way.... I've always viewed Frisk as a boy and Chara as a girl...so deal with it....plz
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Post by: mikey on March 03, 2016, 03:17:43 PM
I've always viewed both of them as strangely androgynous
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Post by: BrainyLucario on March 04, 2016, 06:51:03 AM
( Waddle Brisk Chose Choice 3) (O. L. Gastar Chose Choice 3)
AUDIO CHAPTER!!!! Play this in a separate tab....only works for computer users....
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Waddle Brisk laughed mockingly at Chara. "You think I'm afraid of you? Your not some immortal demon, you're a human like me, and I wont lose to someone like you!" Waddle Brisk mocked and equipped the stick from his inventory. "You idiot! Your soul is mine! HAHAHAHAHA!" Chara bellowed as Brisk charged at her, swinging the stick psychotically. Chara began to hover in the air, glowing a faint shade of red. Brisk stared in horror as a demonic laugh filled the air, torturing his eardrums. Brisk screamed in agony as Chara began to hover towards him with her head cocked to the left. Brisk felt death close in on him, but for some reason, he began to think of his friends. What would they do without me? What Would Chara do to them if she used me? They would all die because of me.....because of.....me. Waddle Brisk thought. Suddenly memories started flooding his mind. He thought of Toriel, and how she treated him as her own child. He thought of Papyrus's calls and how he tried to help him escape from Undyne, even though he failed at that...he still tried. He thought of Undyne, Sans and Alphys, and how they were there for him until the end. He knew that he needed to stay alive, and as Chara began to try and posses Brisk, he smiled. "You're not going to posses me. I wont let you!" Brisk said as he began to walk towards Chara. The demonic being raised her head in shock. "Wh-why isn't this working? You're supposed to be under my control! I command you to stop!" Chara screamed. Brisk continued to approach Chara, wielding his stick. As he reached his destination, Chara attempted to stab Brisk with her knife, but Brisk knocked it out of her hands with his stick. "Don't you get it? You can't beat someone with my level of Determination. Sweet Dreams, you sick, twisted freak." Brisk said. He swung the stick with all his might and knocked Chara out of the air. As the stick connected with Chara's face, it snapped in half, breaking from the force of the blow. Chara was knocked out instantly, and fell to the ground with a thud. Brisk stared at the unconscious Chara with a feeling of triumph. He had passed the test. Chara started to fade away as a bright light began to take her place. Brisk shielded his eyes as the light grew brighter and brighter until a door made of light appeared in front of him. Without questioning anything, Waddle Brisk approached the door, and entered.


CHANGE MUSIC TO THIS.....IT's STILL OPTIONAL TO DO THIS BUT IT ADDS MORE 'UMPH TO THE STORY
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Monoco Kid stood completely still, for his body was frozen in place. "Undyne! WHERE ARE YOU!" He screamed. "Will you stop screaming! I'm standing right here!" Undyne roared. Monoco Kid gave a sigh of relief, as a strange breeze began to form. The breeze grew stronger and stronger, Until Monoco Kid and Undyne were swept away. Monoco Kid panicked as he was sent flying through the endless abyss of darkness. In a moment of pure panic, Monoco Kid opened his mouth and bit down on something he felt touch his face. "OW!!! THAT'S MY HAND!!!" Undyne yelled as Monoco Kid continued to bite it. The wind suddenly stopped and Undyne and Monoco Kid were thrown to the darkness that acted as the ground below them. Monoco Kid slowly rose to find a cloaked figure in front of him and Undyne. "Undyne! Who is that! Protect me!" Monoco Kid screamed and rushed behind Undyne, who had managed to stand up as well. A voice boomed from the figure in front of them. "I and Dr. O. L. Gastar, a being beyond your comprehension, a being that was denied his own existence, a being that has lost everything important to him. You're actions at E. Grill's, though they may have appeared to be insignificant, have decided your fate, little one. You and Undyne will be tested to decide your fates, and the test has been decided by your actions, Monoco Kid. Your reliance on Undyne has shown just how reliant on others you are. That is why, you will be facing two opponents in this test. Who are these opponents you ask? Why, you're staring at one of them right now, for I am one of your opponents, hahaha! I've also acquired a little back-up just in case you actually manage to defeat me, this backup goes by the name of Noctowey, and I'm sure he'll love to kill you just as much as I will. Let's have him join us." O. L. Gastar declared as Noctowey appeared from the darkness. "Hey! Where am I? Who's the idiot that foiled my plan!!" Noctowey screamed as he caught sight of Gastar. "P-p-please don't kill me! I'll do anything you want!" Noctowey pleaded. Gastar smiled and said, "Help me kill this child and I wont kill you...deal?" Noctowey turned around and saw Undyne and Monoco Kid standing in the darkness. He gave an evil smile and said, "Deal!" Gastar began to laugh as he absorbed Undyne  in the darkness. Monoco Kid watched in horror, as his hero disappeared into the surrounding darkness. "Did you think I would let Undyne help you? The only way she makes it out alive is if you manage to beat us. So come on! Show us what you've got." (O. L. Gastar, Noctowey, and Monoco kid's next choice)

 Monoco Kid Choices
1. Run
2. Fight
3. Plead
4. Cry
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 O. L. Gastar's next choice
1. Fight
2. Let Noctowey take him
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 Noctowey choices
1. Cooperate With Gastar
2. Attack Gastar
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Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 2///Sign-ups still accepted
Post by: braix on March 04, 2016, 08:01:33 AM
Whenever I see Brisk I read Braix :c
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 2///Sign-ups still accepted
Post by: BlackDragonSlayer on March 04, 2016, 08:36:31 AM
Whenever I see Brisk, I think of the tea. And wonder what tea has to do with this.
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Post by: BrainyLucario on March 04, 2016, 09:04:24 AM
Quote from: BlackDragonSlayer on March 04, 2016, 08:36:31 AMWhenever I see Brisk, I think of the tea. And wonder what tea has to do with this.
Haha! It's not my fault Bro + Frisk= Brisk....

Quote from: braixen1264 on March 04, 2016, 08:01:33 AMWhenever I see Brisk I read Braix :c
Way to make me feel bad Braixen.... but ya gotta understand that in order for a story to be good, it's gotta have smooth transitions, or at least stay relevant. The First Chapter was not a good example of this....from here on...it's going to be more focused, and Having Lesser Dog just randomly show up would ruin this..don't worry, you'll have your lesser dog eventually! :)
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Post by: Oronoco on March 04, 2016, 03:10:13 PM
Monoco Kid

Can be found

FIGHTing

Why, when Monoco Kid fights...

He'll be so cool.
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 2///Sign-ups still accepted
Post by: BrainyLucario on March 07, 2016, 05:47:27 AM
NOCTURNE HURRY UP!!! Plz
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Post by: mikey on March 07, 2016, 12:15:40 PM
yelling at someone who isn't there is a great way to get their attention
2
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Post by: BrainyLucario on March 08, 2016, 07:50:51 AM
(Oronoco chose choice 2) (Olimar12345 chose choice 2) (NocturneOfShadow chose choice 2)

Play the previous audio clip if you want, it doesn't really matter since it's just for effect.

Gastar sensed something was wrong, for he could feel the aura of betrayal in the air. He wasn't going to let some Flower ruin his revenge. "On second thought, I shouldn't waste my energy on the likes of you. This flower could easily defeat you without my help. Ciao." Gastar cackled as he began to disappear into the darkness. Noctowey narrowed his eyes as he watched Gastar begin to leave. Just before Gastar vanished into the darkness, vines sprung from the ground in front of him, trapping and encasing the being in a cage of greenery. "Where do you think your going? I'm not done with you yet. If you thought for one second that I was ever on your side, then your the biggest idiot that doesn't exist, hahahahaha!" Noctowey maniacally laughed. Gastar looked around at his enclosure and smiled. "Heh, you're right about one thing, Noctowey. I don't exist, at least not in reality. And due to my non-existance, the laws of reality don't apply to me, therefore, you can't defeat me. Did you actually think that I could be contained? If you did, then you're the real idiot." Gastar declared. He proceeded to phase through the vines that enclosed him, laughing hysterically. "WHY YOU...." Noctowey began as he was kicked by Monoco Kid, who was running full force towards Gastar. "GIVE ME BACK, UNDYNE!!!!!" Monoco Kid screamed as he lunged for Gastar's face with his mouth open wide. Gastar watched with confusion as Monoco Kid soared through the air towards him, only realizing what was happening after it was already too late. Monoco kid chomped on Gastar's face with all of his might, causing Gastar to yell in agony. Gastar attempted to pull Monoco Kid off of his face, but was unsuccessful. "AHHH! GET OFF MY FACE! THAT"S IT! I'VE HAD IT WITH YOU, I HAVE BETTER THINGS TO DO THAN DEAL WITH A BRAT LIKE YOU!" Gastar bellowed and disappeared without a trace.
(STOP AUDIO)

Noctowey watched in horror as Monoco Kid began to fall towards the ground where he was planted, and quickly disappeared into the black soil. Monoco Kid groaned as he attempted to stand up. Once he got to his feet, he noticed a bright light appear where Gastar used to be. He watched as the light grew brighter and bigger until it formed a door made of light. Monoco Kid searched the darkness around him for Undyne, but was unsuccessful in his search. With tears in his eyes, he slowly entered the door, alone..... Moments after Monoco Kid had entered the door, the darkness began to shift, as a fish-like figure began to appear from it. Undyne gasped as she was ejected from the darkness and began to cough uncontrollably. "Hey! Where'd that kid go?" Undyne questioned as she caught sight of the door of light. Without a second though or another word, she entered the door. A shout of joy could be heard from the other side.


E. Grill saw nothing but darkness, and when you're literally made of fire, that's not a good thing. He could still feel the bar counter in front of him and could still hear the sound of a dog whimpering.He slowly pushed his glass of gasoline setting on the bar away from him, and headed in the direction of the noise. After a few seconds of complete darkness, E. Grill reached the source of the cries. Lesser Braixen was cowering under a table, emitting yelps of fright. Lesser Braixen noticed E. Grill staring down at him, and immediately bolted towards him. He attempted to hug E. Grill, but yelped in pain as E. Grill burnt Lesser Braix on contact. Lesser Braixen gave E.Grill a cold stare and E. Grill replied back with  a casual shrug. It wasn't his fault that he was made of fire, anyway. All of a sudden, an eerie laugh began to originate from the surrounding darkness, as a figure appeared from the darkness. THe figure's face appeared to be bleeding, only the blood running down it's face wasn't red, it was as black as the darkness that surrounded it. "Greetings," The being declared. "My name is O. L. Gastar, a being who was denied his own existance, who knows your past, present, and future. You two, while not really effecting the outcome of many events, have made decisions that will effect your trial. For your actions. Each of you will face an opponent. E. Grill, you shall face a monster you know, very well. A monster that you can only see if you look in a mirror. Have you figured it out yet? You will be facing none other than, yourself." As Gastar spoke these words, a blue figure approached from the darkness. He looked exactly like E. Grill, only he ws made of blue fire, not orange. The other E. Grill rolled up his sleeves and cracked his knuckles. It was time for a bar fight...( E. Grill's next choice) Gastar turned to Lesser Braixen and contorted his bleeding face into a smile. "As for you, I have a special enemy for you to fight. An enemy whose existance is as questionable as my own. He may resemble someone you've come to know, but believe me, he's nothing like the one you know. Let me introduce to you....Error Sans." Gastar declared. Lesser Braixen's fur began to stand on it's ends as the air slowly acquired a negative charge. A figure began to approach from the darkness behind Gastar, and as the being came into view, he appeared to blend into the darkness. His eyesockets were as red as blood, and his blue pupil seemed to disappear occasionally into his blood-like eyesockets. He plastered a constant smile onto his face and grinned from cheek to cheek with dull, yellow teeth. Blue lines appeared to be streaming down from the seas of blood he just so happened to call his eyes, and ran down his cheeks like a festive looking face-paint. The hood of his solid black jacket was decorated with a blue fur lining and two pale, yellow laces hung from his hood. He sported a red T-shirt under his jacket and wore a pair of black sports shorts that had two blue lines going vertically across them, one on each short leg. His hands were as black as the darkness that surrounded Lesser Braixen, and each finger was decorated with varying stripes of yellow, blue, and red. Blue beams appeared to shoot from his finger tips, and various sections of his body were blocked out by the word ERROR. His legs were crimson-red, and his feet bore black sneakers with red, blue , and yellow design details. IF THAT"S STILL NOT ENOUGH DETAIL FOR YOU, JUST LOOK AT THIS PICTURE.
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(https://encrypted-tbn3.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcRJdpKhh99bG2ttnWdRsRVxx6xgZNoulN8D2prOOHvZRQuIG49G)
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"H-Heeeyy there-there buddy! I'm sorry-sorry to tell you thi-this, bu-bu-but !EMIT DAB YLLAER A EVAH OT TUOBA ER'UOY !GOD DIPUTS UOY ,SREYARP RUOY YAS AHAHAHAH!" Error Sans glitched. (Lesser Braixen and O.L. Gastar's next choice.)

 E. Grill Choices
1. Roll Up your sleeves and Fight!
2. Offer him a drink.
3. Compliment him on his looks.
4. Ask him if he wants to preform a face swap on UnderSnap (UT SnapChat.)
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 Lesser Braixen's Choices
1. Bite Error Sans's legs.
2. Attack Error Sans with your sword and Shield
3, Panic and run away.
4. Sit there and stare into space
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 O. L. Gastar Choices
1.Test MettaYears and Burgerzeilants.
2. Watch E. Grill's and Lesser Braixen's fights.
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Sorry it took so long to finish! I got grounded from my phone for a few days.
EVERYONE NEEDS TO POST THEIR CHOICES IN THE THREAD!!! Olimar, I can't get on skype right now, so If you don't, I wont be able to see your choices.
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 2///Sign-ups still accepted
Post by: mikey on March 08, 2016, 11:00:58 AM
just for the record
I tried to kill the other guy not because I didn't want to kill monster kid, but because killing the other guy was SUPER evil
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 2///Sign-ups still accepted
Post by: BrainyLucario on March 09, 2016, 07:40:31 AM
I finally got the section finished! You can make your choices now! Some of you probably think you already know where the door of light leads everyone, but I bet most of you are not right! Chapter 3 should be starting soon! Gastar isn't as big of a part in this chapter, so the new main enemy will be Noctowey. Happy, Nocturne?
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Post by: E. Gadd Industries on March 09, 2016, 03:14:59 PM
This is a tough decision... I want to offer FaceSwap, but then again, I also want to compliment him. BUT THEN AGAIN, THERE CAN ONLY BE ONE GRILLBY!!!!! >:( *unties bowtie* *rolls up sleeves* GET DUNKED ONNNN!!!
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Post by: mikey on March 09, 2016, 03:41:57 PM
*ER'UOY
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Post by: BrainyLucario on March 09, 2016, 04:52:18 PM
You're the perfect villain Noc....
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Post by: mikey on March 09, 2016, 06:14:48 PM
(http://i.ytimg.com/vi/7IJMEd8mAIo/hqdefault.jpg)
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 2///Sign-ups still accepted
Post by: BrainyLucario on March 11, 2016, 06:41:13 AM
I'm going to give Braixen more time that usual for this section since he's currently moving. So don't worry about missing your chance to pick your choice Braixen! The same goes for you, Olimar. I wont move ahead without your choices this time.
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Post by: braix on March 11, 2016, 08:20:31 AM
i aint a stupid dog, bitch
3. Panic and run away
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Post by: Olimar12345 on March 11, 2016, 05:27:41 PM
You should remind us via pm or skype. If I forget to do this, chances are I'm not hanging around the topic lol.

Edit: (Choice 1 btw)
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Post by: BrainyLucario on March 11, 2016, 07:05:09 PM
Quote from: Olimar12345 on March 11, 2016, 05:27:41 PMYou should remind us via pm or skype. If I forget to do this, chances are I'm not hanging around the topic lol.

Edit: (Choice 1 btw)
Noted....
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Post by: BrainyLucario on March 12, 2016, 02:45:20 PM
(E. Gadd chose choice 1) (Braixen chose choice 3) (Olimar12345 chose choice 1)

E. Grill watched as his duplicate pounded his fists together. E. Gadd casually laughed an  rolled up his sleeves. "We're closed....but since you look famished, I'll serve you a knuckle sandwich, on the house!" E. Gadd roared as he began to turn a fiece red color.
 BATTLE MUSIC!!
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The two E. Grills rushed towards each other and collided, forming a sphere of fire around the two and throwing the two away from one another. The fire sphere was so intense that it lit up the darkness surrounding them. E. Grill looked around in astonishment and saw that they were currently in Waterfall, despite being inside E. Grill's diner just moments prior to their confrontation with O. L. Gastar. He lgasped as he saw a lake of water directly behind him, his feet almost came into contact with the lake's water. E. Grill turned back around and saw his duplicate start to rush towards him for a second time as an idea popped into E. Grill's fiery mind. Without a second though, E. Grill pointed his palms at the ground in front of him and shot out a blast of fire from his hands. The blast was so intense that it lifted E. Grill of the ground and sent him flying across the lake of water. As he was sent flying backwards across the lake, he saw his duplicate run towards the lake and shoot a blast of blue flames at the ground behind him, which sent him flying towards E. Grill. As E. Grill watched his duplicate chase him across the lake of water, he laughed and halted the stream of fire, flowing from his palms. As he fell towards the lake, he aimed his palm towards the blue E. Grill and fired a stream of fire at him. The blue E. Grill gasped as he halted the stream of blue flames jetting from his hands, causing him to plummet towards the lake below him. He began to laugh as he saw E. Grill's fire blast fly past him.

"Haha! You missed m-" the Blue E. Gadd was cut off as he fell directly into the lake.

He let out a short scream of agony as the water extimguished him instantly, leaving only a wet tuxedo and a pair of glasses floating in the water, before they began to sink towards the bottom. E. Grill gave a sigh of relieve before realizing the he was falling as well. He closed his eyes and prepared to hit the water he assumed was below him. Instead of water, E. Grill hit the ground on the other side of the lake with a thud. Shocked, he slowly tried to stand up, and managed to get to his feet after several attempts. The sphere of fire was still illumiating the darkness around him as he frantically looked for lesser Braixen. He spotted the dog with a being that resembled a monster he knew very well. His eyes filled with anger as he saw the figure start to approach Lesser Dog, and began walking over to confront the being that resembled Sans

Lesser Braixen trembled as Error Sans began to walk towards him, causing the darkness to bend around the two. Unable to cope with the fear that plagued him, Lesser Braixen yelped and started to run away from Error Sans.

"HA-H-Ha! THAT'S Rig- I KNEW-KNEW-KNeW YOu WEr- CoW$rD! NO 0?e can St@p ME! AHAHAH!" Error Sans laughed.

 He attempted to chase Lesser Braixen, but was tripped by E. Grill's leg, for he had reached Error Sans while the being was busy gloating. As Error Sans fell forward, E. Grill Grabbed Error Sans by his eyesocket, causing his hand to glitch slightly. Unable to escape, Error Sans watched as E. Grill began to shake uncontrollably with anger.

" MY FRIEND, SANS, WOULD NEVER ATTEMPT TO ATTACK A MONSTER! YOU DON'T DESERVE TO LOOK LIKE HIM, YOU FREAK SHOW! DIIIEEE!!" E. Grill shouted and sent a constant stream of fire directly into Error Sans's red eyesocket. The flames engulfed Error Sans's skull as he screamed in pain. E. Grill laughed as he watched the demon melt into a puddle of black liquid.

Clenching his fists, E. Grill smiled and said, "Get dunked on, you skeletal imposter."

Lesser Braixen ran towards E. Grill, but stopped right before he attempted to tackle him, not wanting another burn like last time. Thw pair smiled at each other as a beam of light appeared from the melted Error Sans. The beam shined brighter and brighter as E. Grill and Lesser Braixen Shielded their eyes. The beam began to dim and left a door made of light behind. With no where else to go, the pair slowly approached the door and slowly entered.

MettaYears dashed through the darkness as fast as he could, with BurgerZeilants not far behind him.

 "Hey, Boss! Wait up! Where are you going?" Burgerzeilants wheezed, clearly not used to running this much.

 MettaYears suddenly stopped and turned towards Burgerzeilants,"I have to get  out of this this place! I can't let my fans down! The show must continue!"

 Burgerzeilants jumped into MettaYears arms as a sinister laughed echoed around them. A figure approached from the darkness, who's face was drenched with blood.

 "Greetings, you incompetent fools, I am Dr. O. L. Gastar, a god of space and time. I am here to test you two in order to determine how worthy you are to live. Fail my test and you die. Got it? If not, TOO BAD! You two will work as a team to defeat a creature who's as mad and crazy as I am. Prepare to die by the hands of Mad Dummy!" Gastar declared and dissapeared without a trace. Directly where Gastar stood, a dummy was hovering from side to side in the air. "Hello MettaYears, Remember me? Or are you too good for ghosts like me now? You haven't came to visit me and Nabstablook even once since you became a star. Now prepare to get what you deserve!" Mad Dummy crazily rambled. (MettaYears and BurgerZeilants next choice)

MettaYears Choice
1. Tell Burgerzeilants to flip the switch on your back
2. Sing to Mad Dummy
3. Quiz Mad Dummy
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Burgerzeilants Choice
1. Fling Glamburgers at Mad Dummy
2.Cower Behind MettaYears
3. Taunt Mad Dummy
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THIS TOOK ABOUT AN HOUR AND A HALF TO WRITE!!!
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Post by: Zeila on March 12, 2016, 03:05:40 PM
3. Taunt Mad Dummy

"Sorry, little weirdo. Threats won't work on me. I can't go to hell. I'm all out of vacation days."
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Post by: AwesomeYears on March 12, 2016, 05:17:44 PM
3 mate, gotta get them fans before I get beaten up!
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Post by: braix on March 12, 2016, 07:13:05 PM
thx 4 saving me egrill
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Post by: BrainyLucario on March 12, 2016, 07:29:41 PM
Quote from: braixen1264 on March 12, 2016, 07:13:05 PMthx 4 saving me egrill
I just realized how terrifying seeing Error Sans melt would be. That's really gruesome when you think about it. I didn't think E. Grill was so hardcore..
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Post by: E. Gadd Industries on March 13, 2016, 05:34:34 AM
Hey, I'm not gonna sit by and let one of my most dedicated customers get pummeled! And besides, freaky things deserve to die by gruesome methods. I wasn't letting that glitch revive.
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 2///Sign-ups still accepted
Post by: BrainyLucario on March 13, 2016, 01:33:11 PM
(AwesomeYears chose choice 3) (Zeila chose choice 3)

MettaYears gears turned and his servos whirled as he gave off a mechanical laugh and donned a black bow-tie. "Good evening, beauties and gentlebeauties! Welcome to the quiz show that's literally to die for! I'm your host, the Undergrounds very own MettaYears! So without further ado, let's meet our contestant!" MettaYears announced like a camera was present, the only people that could were standing right next to him.

 "What are you doing? No can hear you, MettaLoser! Now Go to hell!" Mad Dummy frantically spat.

Burgerzeilants looked at mad dummy and smiled. "Sorry little weirdo, I can't go to hell. I'm all out of vacation days. So I'm stuck working for MettaYears. If I did have some, i would be more than happy to." Burgerzeilants leans back and give Mad Dummy a chill smile.

 "Well now that everyone's been introduced, let's start the quiz! Answer correctly, and you live! Get a question wrong, and you die! Question 1: Would you smooch a ghost?" MettaYear leaned towards Mad Dummy and waited for his answer.

 "What kind of question is that? I'm a ghost! I'm just possessing this dummy! Of course I'm going to say yes," Mad Dummy roared.

 "Correct! Question 2: What symbol represents the Royal Family? MettaYears laughed as he saw Mad Dummy's confused expression.

 "WHAT! HOW AM I SUPPOSED TO KNOW THAT! AND WHY AM I EVEN GOING ALONG WITH THIS! DIE ALREADY!" Mad Dummy made a  "mad" dash towards MettaYears.

MettaYears snapped his fingers and said, "Sorry, my friend, but the correct answer was a Delta Rune. Goodbye!" MettaYears' hands morphed into to laser canons as he took aim at Mad Dummy. A blast of high powered light shot out of the canons and disintegrated Mad Dummy, or at least the dummy that he resided in, for Ghosts can't really die.

This ghost, known as Madstablook, looked at MettaYears and laughed. "You may have beaten me this time, but you haven't seen the last of me, MettaYears! You will pay!" Madstablook cackled as he faded into the darkness.

"That was my test? I didn't even do anything!" Burgerzeilants complained.

"You didn't have to, darling. Not with someone as fabulous as me around." MettaYears beeped. Their conversation was interrupted as a beam of light appeared where Madstablook had been. The beam began to grow brighter and brighter, causing the duo to shield their eyes. Then, ending as quickly as it had started, the beam faded and left behind a glowing door made of light. The light gave off an aura that drew MettaYears and Burgerzeilants towards it. Without a word of objection, the pair slowly entered the door. Gastar watched from afar as the pair vanished behind the door.

"It looks like I underestimated these mortals, for every single one of them has reached the center of reality. I suppose they deserve an award for their success, but if they ever want to reach it, they'll have to survive one final test. They will not stand a chance, hahaha!" As Gastar concluded, he faded into the darkness.

Brisk was blinded by the white space that covered the room. He was all alone in a circular room with 4 double doors, one of which Brisk had came from. The doors were positioned at the center of the room, completely separate from a wall and were decorated with strange symbols. These symbols varied tremendously, as some doors were decorated with hands and others were decorated with bombs and mail. As Brisk examined one of the doors, he heard the creak of a door hinge followed by the sound of someone crying. Curiously, he headed towards the source of the sobs, and found Monoco Kid lying on the ground with tears in his eyes.

 "Hey, Monoco Kid . Are you okay? Did you fall on your face again?" Waddle Brisk asked.

 With tears in his eyes, Monoco kid replied, "N-n-no...i-i-it's U-Undyne....s-she's gone. Gastar killed her, and i couldn't save her. I bit Gastar, hoping it would be enough to make him give Undyne back, but he left and never released her from the darkness. B-but she can't be dead, can she Brisk? She's too tough to die, right?" He looked up at Brisk waiting for an answer. Brisk's mind went back to his battle with Undyne, and remembered her Hotland dilemma. If it wasn't for him, she would have died.

 "I'm sure she's fine. In fact, she'll probably walk through that door any second now." Brisk pointed towards the door that Monoco Kid came from. As soon as he said this, The door swung open as the blue fish-lady stomped into the room, clutching her spear in her right hand.

"NGAHH! Where is that punk? Nobody traps me like that and just runs away. This Gastar person is gonna pay." Undyne roared with anger.

Brisk looked down at his hands in amazement, as Monoco Kid gave a shout of delight and ran towards Undyne. "UNDYNE!!!!! YOU'RE ALIVE!!!" He shouted, and lunged towards Undyne. Surprised by Monoco Kid, Undyne was unprepared for the barrage and fell backwards on the ground as Monoco Kid collided with her. "Sorry Undyne!" Monoco Kid apologized, quickly getting off of Undyne.

 "It's fine, brat. It takes a lot more that the likes of you to hurt me." Undyne sprang from the ground. A warm breeze began to blow from the door to the group's left as it swung open, colliding with the other doors. E. Grill and Lesser Braixen stepped into the white circular room, and E. Grill appeared to be covered in a strange black liquid. The two smiled and waved at the others as they made their way towards them. Lesser Braixen ran up to Undyne and saluted the Royal gaurd leader, panting loudly as he did. Undyne gave a nod of acknowledgement as she approached E. Grill.

"What the heck is on your clothes? It looks like oil." Undyne asked. E. Grill looked down at his clothes to find blobs of Error Sans's liquefied body on his suit. Shrugging, he quickly evaporated the substance from his fire-proof uniform. Not long after that, the final door opened as MettaYears and Burgerzeilants entered the room. They quickly joined the group, MettaYears approached Undyne and Burgerzeilants approached Brisk.

 "Hello, darling! How have you been since my last visit? That piano of yours is an incredible device." MettaYears seductively stated.

 "Ugh...what do you want creep? I don't know why you keep coming over to my house just to feed yourself grapes while laying on my piano. Robots don't even need to eat, so for the last time, STOP!" Undyne furiously screamed.

Meanwhile Burgerzeilants was chatting away with Brisk. "Hey there, little buddy. How've you been?" the 19 year old fast-food worker asked.

"Never been better! How's th-" Brisk was interrupted as a static sound began to echo around the room. A maniacal laugh could be heard in the static.

The group watched as Gastar appeared from the wall in front of them. "So you've all made it past my tests. Congratulations, but I'm not done with you yet. Prepare for your final challenge. Prepare to face a being fused with six human souls...may i present to you, Omega Noctowey." He snapped his fingers and Noctowey appeared before the group surrounded by six human souls. He gave an evil laugh as he absorbed the souls into his body. Then, everything went black.

Brisk was at the continue screen. He stared at his save file, but saw something that horrified him. Instead of his usual save. There was a file named Noctowey's world. Hesitantly, he touched the file and entered the world. He was greeted by a horrible beast, with arms made of vines. He looked to his left and saw his friend stare in horror at the beast. Something snapped inside of Brisk as he watched his friends tremble in fear. The room was blood red as Noctowey began to attack the group by flailing his arms left and right. Everyone managed to dodge the blow, and retreated behind one of the 4 doors.

"You guys, we can beat him. I know we can. We just have to stay determined. If we all work together, he wont stand a chance who's with me?" Brisk boldly stated. The monsters roared with confidence as they prepared to attack Noctowey. (Everyone's next choice)

 E. Grill's choices
1. Torch Noctowey
2. Serve Noctowey a knuckle sandwich
3. Attack with Lesser Braixen
4. Attack with Brisk
[close]
 Waddle Brisk's Choice
1. Fight
2. Throw your broken stick
3. Eat some instant noodles
4. Attack with Undyne
[close]
 Noctowey's Choice
1. Smash the 4 wooden doors
2. Attack the group with Nukes
3. Attack the group with Flamethrowers
4. Attack with Friendliness pellets
[close]
 Lesser Braixen's Choice
1. Drool on Noctowey
2. Attack with your sword
3. Bite Noctowey
4. Attack with E. Grill
[close]
 Monoco Kid's choices
1. Attack with Undyne
2. Bite Noctowey
3. Attack with Brisk
4. Headbutt Noctowey
[close]
MettaYear's Choices
1. Fire a laser at Noctowey
2. Turn into MettaYears Ex and attack
3. Turn into MettaYears -NEO- and attack
[close]
Burgerzeilants's Choices
1. Throw glamburgers at Noctowey
2. Sparkle up Noctowey's Day (TM)
3. Attempt to punch Noctowey [/spoilers]
[close]
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 2///Sign-ups still accepted
Post by: E. Gadd Industries on March 13, 2016, 02:32:42 PM
You may want to proofread that before continuing...
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 2///Sign-ups still accepted
Post by: BrainyLucario on March 13, 2016, 03:31:55 PM
What do you mean?
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 2///Sign-ups still accepted
Post by: E. Gadd Industries on March 13, 2016, 04:09:44 PM
I'm pretty sure I counted at least 5 errors in your writing
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Post by: braix on March 13, 2016, 05:18:15 PM
Brainy do I have your permission to modify your posts to get rid of some annoying errors
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Post by: BrainyLucario on March 13, 2016, 05:31:33 PM
Yeah. I'll allow it.
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Post by: braix on March 13, 2016, 06:07:08 PM
I'm only fixing what I can understand. Whatever isn't fixed isn't fixed because I didn't understand it enough to be able to change it without potentially altering the intended meaning.
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Post by: E. Gadd Industries on March 13, 2016, 06:44:48 PM
You have done a good thing, braix.
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Post by: Zeila on March 13, 2016, 07:05:31 PM
* Burgerzeilants is pleased

About the errors, if you want to get super technical...
Spoiler
I bolded/crossed out them out

MettaYears gears turned and his servos (I had to look up "robot parts s..." Is this what you meant?) whirled as he gave off a mechanical laughed and donned a black bowtie. "Good evening, beauties and gentlebeauties! Welcome to the quiz show that's literally to die for! I'm your host, the Underground's very own MettaYears! So without further ado, let's meet our contestant!" MettaYears announced like a camera was present, the only people that could were standing right next to him. "What are you doing? No can hear you, MettaLoser! Now Go to hell!" Mad Dummy frantically spat. Burgerzeilants looked at mad dummy and smiled. "Sorry little weirdo, I can't go to hell. I'm all out of vacation days. So I'm stuck working for MettaYears. If I did have some, i would be more than happy to." Burgerzeilants leans back and give Mad Dummy a chill smile. "Well now that everyone's been introduced, let's start the quiz! Answer correctly, and you live! Get a question wrong, and you die! Question 1: Would you smootch a ghost?" MettaYear leaned towards Mad Dummy and waited for his answer. "What kind of question is that? I am a ghost! I'm just possessing this dummy! Of course I'm going to say yes", Mad Dummy roared. "Correct! Question 2: What symbol represents the Royal Family? MettaYears laughed as he saw Mad Dummy's confused expression. "WHAT! HOW AM I SUPPOSED TO KNOW THAT! AND WHY AM I EVEN GOING ALONG WITH THIS! DIE ALREADY!" Mad Dummy made a "mad" dash towards MettaYears. MettaYears snapped his fingers and said, "Sorry, my friend, but the correct answer was a Delta Rune. Goodbye!" MettaYears' hands morphed into to laser canons as he took aim at Mad Dummy. A blast of high powered light shot out of the canons and disintegrated Mad Dummy, or at least the dummy that he resided in, for Ghosts can't really die. This ghost, known as Madstablook, looked at MettaYears and laughed. "You may have beaten me this time, but you haven't seen the last of me, MettaYears! You will pay!" Madstablook laughed as he faded into the darkness.
I'm not finished with this yet....
[close]

Also, this is really picky stuff, but I noticed you used the word "laughed" quite a bit, while two of them are right next to each other (sort of). Maybe you could replace one or two of those with a synonym or another word like cackle, snicker, sneer, or anything else that would fit in your opinion (those were just examples)
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Post by: braix on March 13, 2016, 07:11:32 PM
huh I wondered what servis could've meant.
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Post by: BrainyLucario on March 14, 2016, 05:37:40 AM
Quote from: braixen1264 on March 13, 2016, 07:11:32 PMhuh I wondered what servis could've meant.
I put Servis?
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Post by: Oronoco on March 14, 2016, 06:52:26 AM
Don't worry about typos too much, Brainy. I'm really enjoying the story.
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 2///Sign-ups still accepted
Post by: BrainyLucario on March 14, 2016, 11:20:55 AM
Choices have been added. Prepare for an Epic Battle.
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 2///Sign-ups still accepted
Post by: braix on March 14, 2016, 01:06:50 PM
4. Attack with E.Grill
lets go get em frend
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Post by: Zeila on March 14, 2016, 01:22:23 PM
2. Sparkle up Noctowey's day (tm)

I'm on the job at every waking moment..
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Post by: mikey on March 14, 2016, 01:40:00 PM
Fools.  "Determination" can only go so far.
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Post by: E. Gadd Industries on March 14, 2016, 06:30:19 PM
Quote from: braixen1264 on March 14, 2016, 01:06:50 PM4. Attack with E.Grill
lets go get em frend
Let's do this! *Rolls up my sleeves again*
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Post by: AwesomeYears on March 15, 2016, 03:58:53 AM
2.) Transform into Sexy Mettaton. (Don't know about NEO form, so probs spoilers for me)
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Post by: BrainyLucario on March 15, 2016, 05:32:02 AM
Quote from: AwesomeYears on March 15, 2016, 03:58:53 AM2.) Transform into Sexy Mettaton. (Don't know about NEO form, so probs spoilers for me)
Don't worry about that.....I fixed a couple typo's in the section too BTW

AAANNDD I surpassed the character limit on my original post... Great....
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Post by: Oronoco on March 15, 2016, 06:31:36 AM
What happens if I want to attack with Waddle Brisk, but all Brisk does is eat some Instant Noodles?
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Post by: BrainyLucario on March 15, 2016, 07:34:01 AM
You still attack with Him. He just eats the instant noodles along with attacking with you. I did this to try and have more actions per section.
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Post by: Waddle Bro on March 15, 2016, 12:28:10 PM
sorry fam only got the most important exams like the ultimate finals tomorrow

but noodles tho always down
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Post by: mikey on March 15, 2016, 12:35:25 PM
gonna go with #4.  I feel like either it or #1 are the best options for what everyone else is doing, but smashing the doors likely leaves me more open to attacks whereas attacking with friendliness pellets forces them to go on the defensive
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Post by: BrainyLucario on March 16, 2016, 05:35:05 AM
Quote from: NocturneOfShadow on March 15, 2016, 12:35:25 PMgonna go with #4.  I feel like either it or #1 are the best options for what everyone else is doing, but smashing the doors likely leaves me more open to attacks whereas attacking with friendliness pellets forces them to go on the defensive
Eyyy! You really though about this, didn't you! You're in the center of a circular room. The doors are set at equal distances around you. Said doors make it harder for you to attack, but also makes it harder for them to attack. Here's a diagram. It's poorly done with punctuation but you can see how the doors are both an advantage and a disadvantage

                                       ----------------                 
                  __________ /        __       \     
                          G       /                      \               
                 _________/      !     N     !     \
                                 \                          /
                                   \          __         /         
                                     \        B        /                 
                                      -----------------

 
Key: N= Noctowey       G=Gastar    B= Braix and Co.   ! and __: doors
_________
_________ = secret tear in time and space


Just waiting on Monoco Kid now...
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Post by: Oronoco on March 16, 2016, 07:29:13 AM
Sorry. I'll attack with Waddle Brisk and maybe he'll share some noodles.
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Post by: BrainyLucario on March 16, 2016, 07:50:43 AM
(E. Gadd Industries Chose Choice 3) (Waddle Bro Chose Choice 3) (NocturneOfShadow Chose Choice 4) (Braixen1264 Chose Choice 4) (Oronoco Chose Choice 3) (AwesomeYears Chose Choice 2) (Zeila Chose Choice 3)

"Hahahaha! You all are so stupid. I'm the one in control now, and there's nothing you can do to stop me! Try to hit me, I dare you! Noctowey laughed as he watched the monsters and Brisk came out from behind the door. E. Grill and Lesser Braixen stepped forward and looked at each other. "Lesser Braixen, do you have your sword with you?" E. Grill asked. Lesser Braixen panted as he quickly unsheathed his sword from his belt. E. Grill approached the sword and touched the sharp blade and engulfed it in an orange flame. Lesser Braixen's eyes widened as his sword was transformed. Withdrawing his hand, E. Grill faced towards Noctowey and said, "Time to burn this weed to the ground. Lesser Braixen, when I give the signal, run up and slice Omege Noctowey's arm off, got it?" Lesser Braixen barked and equipped his shield. E. Grill adjusted his glasses and rolled up his sleeves. " I hope you like your flowers, well-done." His arms grew larger and larger until they matched the size of Omega Noctowey. E. Grill grabbed Omega Noctowey with his massive hands. Unable to escape, Omega Noctowey watched as his health bar drained 1 point. "Now, Lesser Braixen!" E. Grill screamed. Lesser Braixen rushed towards Omega Noctowey's left arm of vines and swung his flaming sword down on it. The sword shattered, leaving Noctowey's arm completely unharmed. (Omega Noctowey lost 1 HP) Omega Noctowey laughed as he surrounded E. Grill and Lesser Braixen with friendliness pellets. "W-what?" E. Grill stuttered. "Hahaha! Don't you get it? I'm too powerful to be killed. Say goodbye, you idiots!" Omega Flowey yelled as he closed the friendliness pellets around E. Grill and Lesser Braixen. They screamed as the bullets pelted their bodies, killing them. "HAHAHAHA! DOES ANYONE ELSE WANT TO TRY AND STOP ME?" The group stared at the piles of dust that stood where E. Grill and Lesser Braixen were, with a horrified look on their face.

Burgerzeilants and MettaYears stepped towards Omega Noctowey. "Alright, you beast. It's about time I sparkled up your day! (TM)" Burgerzeilants put up his fists and stared at Omega Noctowey, gritting his teeth. MettaYears gears grinded as he faced towards Omega Noctowey. "That's right, darling, prepare to face the wrath of Burgerzeilants and MettaYears Ex." He extended his arms and reached for a switch on his back. He flicked the switch on and began to shake violentlyas the room filled with a bright light, making it impossible to see. As it faded away, MettaYears Ex was standing where MettaYears stood. "It's showtime!" Burgerzeilants and MettaYears Ex said as they rushed towards Omega Noctowey's face. MettaYears Ex kicked Noctowey's giant pincer-like mouth as Burgerzeilants violently punched Noctowey's Tv-like face, causing the screen to crack slightly. (Omega Noctowey Lost 3 HP) "You Guys are all idiots!" Omega Notowey laughed as he surrounded the duo with friendliness pellets. MettaYears Ex and Burgerzeilants screamed as the bullets impacted their body, killing both of them.

Waddle Brisk, Monoco Kid, and Undyne stared at the 4 ash piles that used to be their friends. Brisk began shaking furiously as he roared with anger. "Do you think we're going to give up? We're not gonna let our friend die in vein!" He screamed at Noctowey and turned towards Undyne and Monoco Kid. "Undyne, do you think you can launch your spear at Omega Noctowey with me and Monoco Kid on it?" Are you kidding me? Of course I can!" Undyne roared. ¨How will that stop Omega Noctowey, Brisk?" Monoco Kid stuttered.
"Do you have any other plan?"
"No..."
"Then stop questioning it! Come on, get on the spear!" Brisk commanded He dragged Monoco Kid onto the spear that Undyne had set on the ground.
"Hold on tight" Undyne instructed as she lifted the spear off the ground and began charging at Omega Noctowey. With an enormous amount of strength, she launched the spear directly at Omega Noctowey's face, shattering it. The spear hit the inside of Noctowey's head with a thud.
"AHHHH!!! YOU'RE DEAD MEAT!!" Omega Noctowey screamed. Brisk and Monoco Kid heard an explosion followed by a scream of pain. Undyne had fallen.
"UNDYNE!!! NOOO!!!" Monoco Kid shrieked as he attempted to jump out of Noctowey's head.
Brisk grabbed him by his shirt collar and said "Don't! If you go out there, you'll die too!"
"B-but...U-Undyne....." Monoco Kid hung his head and began to sob. "O-okay...*sniff*" He sat down in the middle of Noctowey's head, still crying. Brisk looked at Monoco kid and sat down beside him. He started to feel light-headed as he was overcome with hunger. He reached in his inventory for a pack of instant noddles. He opened the package and began to eat them dry."Wait! Don't you have to cook those? I know it's not really important right now, but that doesn't seem like a good idea."Monoco Kid said with tears in his eyes.
"Nah, they're better dry, want some?" Brisk asked.
"I think I'll pass."
"More for me, then.." He began to devour the noodles. Monoco Kid began to sob uncontrollably.
"E-everyone's d-dead...there's no hope for a couple of kids like us." Monoco Kid wailed. Brisk's eyes began to tear up as well. I let everyone down...I was supposed to be there savior, but I failed...What should I do now? Brisk thought to himself. (Brisk and Monoco Kid's next choice..)

Brisk's choice,,,
1. Call For Help
2. Call For Sans and cry...
[close]
Monoco kid choice
1. Call For Help
2. Call for Undyne and cry..
[close]
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Post by: braix on March 16, 2016, 08:41:45 AM
I fixed up the diagram a bit for you, as the text was all inside of the diagram and it was super gross.
I also should say that I fixed your mistake where in the key "B = Brisk and co."
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Post by: mikey on March 16, 2016, 10:34:31 AM
Quote from: BrainyLucario on March 16, 2016, 07:50:43 AM"Hahahaha! You all are so stupid. I'm the one in control now, and there's nothing you can do to stop me! Try to hit me, I dare you! Noctowey laughed as he watched the monsters and Brisk came out from behind the door. E. Grill and Lesser Braixen stepped forward and looked at each other. "Lesser Braixen, do you have your sword with you?" E. Grill asked. Lesser Braixen panted as he quickly unsheathed his sword from his belt. E. Grill approached the sword and touched the sharp blade and engulfed it in an orange flame. Lesser Braixen's eyes widened as his sword was transformed. Withdrawing his hand, E. Grill faced towards Noctowey and said,
said...?
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Post by: BrainyLucario on March 16, 2016, 11:06:21 AM
Quote from: NocturneOfShadow on March 16, 2016, 10:34:31 AMsaid...?
Said to wait till i finish writing the section
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Post by: E. Gadd Industries on March 16, 2016, 06:41:29 PM
OOOH! SASSAFRAS ALERT!
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Post by: BrainyLucario on March 18, 2016, 05:50:08 AM
DONE!!!! People have died btw....:c
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Post by: Waddle Bro on March 18, 2016, 06:41:15 AM
both opts make me sound like a whiny shit

ain't going to cry tho
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Post by: BrainyLucario on March 18, 2016, 06:50:07 AM
Quote from: Waddle Bro on March 18, 2016, 06:41:15 AMboth opts make me sound like a whiny shit

ain't going to cry tho
I'll take that as a choice 1 then..... You have to remember that It's not technically you...and you just witness your friends die...
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Post by: Waddle Bro on March 18, 2016, 07:05:55 AM
:]

btw i might seem mean on this topic but it's clearly an act sorry to anyone if i harmed your feelings!!
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Post by: Oronoco on March 18, 2016, 08:35:26 AM
Go with 1. It's high time I got over my Undyne obsession. She dead.
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 2///Sign-ups still accepted
Post by: BrainyLucario on March 18, 2016, 08:50:45 AM
(Waddle Bro chose choice 1) (Oronoco chose choice 1)

someone...anyone....please help us....... Brisk and Monoco Kid thought. Omega Noctowey's head began to shake violently, causing Brisk and Monoco Kid to tumble to a corner. From the center of Noctowey's head, six human figures began to appear. One of the humans wore a bandanna with abs drawn on it around his neck and wore a pink 5-fingered glove on his left hand. He wasn't that strong, and was probably the scrawniest of all the humans, but he acted as though he was bullet proof. To his left, a human wearing a tutu and ballet shoes looked at Brisk and Monoco Kid and smiled. To her left, a human with glasses was writing down something in a notebook he was carrying, paying no attention to either Brisk nor Monoco Kid. To his left, a human with a cooking apron tied around her waist and a frying pan in her left hand looked at Monoco Kid and waved. To her left, a girl with a faded ribbon in her hair and a toy knife in her hand looked at Brisk and blushed. She covered her face with her free hand. To her left, a tough looking kid had a cowboy hat on his head and surprisingly carried a real gun in his right hand, though it was clearly empty. He tipped his hat at Brisk and Monoco Kid. The apron-wearing girl stepped forward and extended her hand to Brisk. Hesitantly, he shook her hand. "Hello, Brisk. It's a pleasure to meet you! We heard your plea for help and escaped from Noctowey's grasp to help you. We are the six human souls, and with our help, Noctowey won't stand a chance against you two. Take my hand Brisk, and help us get rid of this brute." She said with a smile. Brisk nodded and took her hand. She led him to the other 5 humans, who were all holding hands now. "Hold on to Justice's hand Brisk, and don't let go, got it?" The gun-wielding human looked at Brisk and extended his hand. Brisk grabbed it as the apron-wearing girl grabbed the bandanna-wearing boy. The group started to glow, not just one color, but a rainbow of colors. Monoco kid stared at the group with wide eyes as they began to float up into the air. They drifted out of Noctowey's head and began to laugh, even Brisk joined in. Noctowey, unable to see, heard their cries of joy and smiled.
"Time to rain on your parade, Brisk! Once I kill you, I'll become God! MWAHH HAH HAH HAH!!! With seven human souls under my control, I'll be unstoppable!" Omega Noctowey roared.
"There's just one problem with your plan, Noctowey. You see, you don't have six human souls....you have zero.." Brisk stated as he laughed uncontrollably.
"WHAT??" Noctowey screamed as he noticed the empty feeling inside of him, the wriggling of the six human souls he previously felt was gone. "WHY YOU ANNOYING BRAT!!! HOW DID YOU STEAL MY SOULS? IT DOESN"T MATTER, ANYWAY, BECAUSE YOU'RE STILL GOING TO DIE!!!! HAHAHAHA!!!" Omega flowey cackled as Brisk and the other humans rushed towards Noctowey and began to circle around his head. Monoco Kid noticed this and panicked.
"Oh no. I'm going to die if I stay in Noctowey's head. I'm going to have to get out of here!" Monoco Kid stuttered. He rushed towards the opening in Noctowey's head and looked down. He was at least 60 ft (18.288 M) off the ground. He searched for a way down and to his surprise, he saw a vine that led down to the ground. Realizing how difficult grabbing that vine in his mouth would be, Monoco Kid took a deep breath and ran to the back of Noctowey's head. He stared at the vine intensely, and with an insane amount of courage, he sprinted towards the vine and jumped out of Noctowey's head. He closed his eyes and bit down on the vine just enough so that he slid down towards the ground. A few seconds later, he reached the ground and rushed behind one of the 4 doors, spitting out bits of plant as he ran. Brisk and the other's began to chant something as they circled around Omega Noctowey.
"This is all just a bad dream...this is all just a bad dream..THIS IS ALL JUST A BAD DREAM!!!" The group repeated. Omega Noctowey began to scream with anger.
"STOP SAYING THAT!!!" Omega Noctowey surrounded the group with Friendliness Pellets. "DIE!!!" He shot the friendliness pellets towards the group. Brisk closed his eyes and smiled.
"THIS IS ALL JUST A BAD DREAM.....AND YOU'RE NEVER WAKING UP, NOCTOWEY!!!" Brisk yelled. The group rushed towards the ground, dodging the bullets completely. The bullets sped towards Omega Noctowey. Unaware of the incoming barrage of bullets, Noctowey remained in place as the bullets impacted his body. He screamed in pain as a light began to emanate from his chest. It filled the room completely, blocking everyone's view. When it faded away, Omega Noctowey was gone, and a hurt, drooping, normal-looking Noctowey was rooted to the ground. Brisk and the grouped let go of each other's hand and stared at Noctowey for a second then looked at the 5 dust piles behind them. Monoco kid rushed out from behind one of the doors and joined Brisk and the 6 humans. Brisk approached one of the piles and got on his knees. He saw a pair of glasses in the pile and knew immediately that this was E. Grill's remains. He began to sob. The shy, toy knife wielding girl stepped forward and put her hand on Brisk.
"Don't worry, Brisk...We'll bring them back." The shy girl began to glow. A cyan heart appeared from her chest. The heart floated toward's E. Grill's remains and combined with the dust. The dust rose from the ground and molded  itself into E. Grill's shape. Before Brisk knew it, E. Grill was standing in front of him, but now, his head had a cyan flame in the center of it., surrounded by his usual orange flame. His monster soul had combined with a human's soul. Brisk stared at the shy girl beside him as she began to fade away. "Bye Brisk, it was nice meeting you!" She said as she walked towards E. Grill and disappeared inside of him. The bandanna-wearing boy walked towards an ash pile and began to glow. From his chest, an orange heart appeared. It rushed towards the dust pile and combined with the dust. The dust rose from the ground and formed the shape of Lesser Braixen as it combined together. Lesser Braixen looked at Brisk and stuck out his tongue. "Heya, Brisk! How's it going?" Lesser Braixen spoke to both his and Brisk's surprise. The human's soul had given Lesser Braixen the ability to talk. The scrawny bandanna-wearing boy waved at Brisk as he walked towards Lesser Braixen and faded into him. The glasses-wearing boy stepped towards an ash pile, as well, and began to glow, repeating the same process that the previous humans did. Before Brisk knew it, MettaYears Ex was standing where the ash pile had been, though it seemed like nothing had changed, besides the purple streak that MettaYears now had in his hair. The smart kid looked at Brisk and waved as he walked towards MettaYears Ex and faded into him. The gun-wielding boy and the tutu wearing girl repeated the process that the other humans did, as well. Burgerzeilants was standing where his ash pile stood, now sporting a yellow scarf around his neck. Undyne also appeared from her dust pile, now with a dark blue-streak in her red hair. The two humans waved at Brisk as they walked towards Undyne and Burgerzeilants and faded into them. The monsters were amazed as they began to walk towards Monoco Kid, the apron-wearing girl, Brisk, and E. Grill. The remaining human girl looked at Brisk and smiled. Brisk approached the girl and put his hand on her shoulder.
"You're not going to fade away, as well, are you?" Brisk asked.
"She smiled back and him and said "I think you may need all the help you can get right about now, since Gastar is still a problem you have to deal with. The name's JOHNNNNN CENAAAAAAAA(member decided name)"
The Group of monsters and humans looked at Noctowey and walked towards him, ready to decide his fate. (E. Grill's, Lesser Braixen's, Waddle Brisk's, Monoco Kid's, MettaYears Ex's, and Burgerzeilants's next choice)


YOUR CHOICES
1. Mercy
2. Fight
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I need a name for the remaining human....I'll pick the best one that you guys come up with.
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 2///Sign-ups still accepted
Post by: BrainyLucario on March 21, 2016, 07:49:04 AM
NEXT SECTION IS DONE!!! HELP ME COME UP WITH A NAME
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 2///Sign-ups still accepted
Post by: mikey on March 21, 2016, 10:37:20 AM
2/10 bad guy didn't win
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 2///Sign-ups still accepted
Post by: BrainyLucario on March 21, 2016, 10:45:25 AM
You still got to kill people, though...is that where the 2 came from?
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 2///Sign-ups still accepted
Post by: mikey on March 21, 2016, 10:47:06 AM
it just wasn't a 0
0's are hard to get.  Feel good if you get a 0.  Anyway, the deaths were forgettable since they didn't matter in the end, and it felt like I didn't get a choice in the end
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 2///Sign-ups still accepted
Post by: E. Gadd Industries on March 21, 2016, 11:36:39 AM
Mercy. We're taking the high road. *you see our flame glow brighter when we say that* Huh. I guess the brightness of our flame relates directly to our choices.
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 2///Sign-ups still accepted
Post by: BrainyLucario on March 21, 2016, 11:45:02 AM
Quote from: NocturneOfShadow on March 21, 2016, 10:47:06 AMit just wasn't a 0
0's are hard to get.  Feel good if you get a 0.  Anyway, the deaths were forgettable since they didn't matter in the end, and it felt like I didn't get a choice in the end
How is the story supposed to continue if you win? I mean..if i made everyone die to your hands (vines?) then there's no story.
Chara's going to come back in the story at some point, and Flowey might not stay Flowey *ahem* ..so if you do want to change characters, now would be the best time....since Flowey isn't completely evil you know...Chara is however, so that would be your best choice.
Quote from: E. Gadd Industries on March 21, 2016, 11:36:39 AMMercy. We're taking the high road. *you see our flame glow brighter when we say that* Huh. I guess the brightness of our flame relates directly to our choices.
Someone remembered that your character's besides Gastar, Monoco Kid, Brisk, and Noctowey, all have another person inside of them. Very Observant E. Gadd!

Also let me know if i got the colors right, you guys. My knowledge on that isn't very accurate.
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 2///Sign-ups still accepted
Post by: Waddle Bro on March 21, 2016, 11:52:02 AM
gonna show mercy you owe me your first-born child now
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 2///Sign-ups still accepted
Post by: mikey on March 21, 2016, 11:53:46 AM
you guys are stupid if you think showing mercy will change my mind about anything.
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 2///Sign-ups still accepted
Post by: Zeila on March 21, 2016, 02:04:54 PM
I'll fight
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Post by: Oronoco on March 21, 2016, 02:30:58 PM
Mercy because I'm a good person.

Whoops. Not that Zeila is a bad person. She's just got the gumptions.

Since you named one of the humans "Justice," it might be cool to go with another "intangible virtue" name. Like Grace, Charity, Felicity, Hope, Prosperity, DETERMINATION, (I'm kind-of failing here), etc. If you'd give the name to a unicorn, then it's a good name.

Or, you know, use Bertha.
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 2///Sign-ups still accepted
Post by: braix on March 21, 2016, 02:36:45 PM
I fixed some mistakes in your post

I choose Mercy. I need Noc alive if I want to destroy him in League later(no lag, clean match this time)
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 2///Sign-ups still accepted
Post by: Chara on March 21, 2016, 04:52:28 PM
An Undertale story, eh? Nice....

A. Chara

B. Continuous

c. Make me the villain

Also..i'm new to the forums..so hi?
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 2///Sign-ups still accepted
Post by: mikey on March 21, 2016, 04:55:19 PM
Quote from: Chara on March 21, 2016, 04:52:28 PMc. Make me the villain
get off my turf
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 2///Sign-ups still accepted
Post by: Chara on March 21, 2016, 04:57:09 PM
Quote from: NocturneOfShadow on March 21, 2016, 04:55:19 PMget off my turf
Fight me, bruh
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 2///Sign-ups still accepted
Post by: mikey on March 21, 2016, 05:04:46 PM
let's go m8
stick em up
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 2///Sign-ups still accepted
Post by: Chara on March 21, 2016, 05:07:28 PM
Whoever's in charge of this thread...make this fight happen in the story...

You're gonna get your butt kicked by a girl!
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 2///Sign-ups still accepted
Post by: BrainyLucario on March 21, 2016, 05:10:36 PM
Quote from: Chara on March 21, 2016, 05:07:28 PMWhoever's in charge of this thread...make this fight happen in the story...

You're gonna get your butt kicked by a girl!
First of all..very creative name (sarcastically claps)....second of all...I'll see what I can do..
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 2///Sign-ups still accepted
Post by: Chara on March 21, 2016, 05:19:16 PM
Quote from: BrainyLucario on March 21, 2016, 05:10:36 PMFirst of all..very creative name (sarcastically claps)....second of all...I'll see what I can do..
I'M NOT VERY CREATIVE, OKAY?
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 2///Sign-ups still accepted
Post by: BrainyLucario on March 22, 2016, 05:43:07 AM
 MettaYears! where you at, bro?
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 2///Sign-ups still accepted
Post by: BrainyLucario on March 30, 2016, 06:50:49 AM
(Braixen chose choice 2) (E. Gadd chose choice 2) (Waddle Bro chose choice 2) (Zeila chose choice 1) (AwesomeYears failed to chose for a week~Brainy Chose choice 2 for him) (Oronoco chose choice 2) THIS WAS A SURPRISE GROUP VOTE....MAJORITY VOTED FOR MERCY... and the Kindness (Green soul) Human's in-story name is Charity, thanks Oronoco!

The Group approached Noctowey slowly. The flower sighed as he heard their footsteps grow closer and closer. He turned his damaged head and looked at the group that surrounded him.
"What ..are you doing here still...you've won...I managed to kill some of you...but it didn't matter in the end, because you've managed to overcome death. I'm nothing but a failure, and a failure like me...deserves to die. Kill me and end my suffering." Noctowey feebly stated.
"Not gonna happen, darling." MettaYears EX sung. Noctowey rose his head from the ground a little bit.
"..Do you think I've learned anything from this? Killing me is the only option." Noctowey spat.
"if you think I'm going to kill you, you've got another thing coming, punk. Just don't f%#@ing* kill me ever again." Undyne cursed. Monoco Kid gasped.
"Uhh..yeah...I-if U-Undyne's not killing you...neither am I...." Monoco kid stuttered. He started to question if Undyne was really a good role model, or not.(Oronoco's Next choice) Noctowey's eye twitched.
"If you let me go...I'll try this all again...I'll kill you!" The flower cackled. E. Grill shook his head.
"................No" Two voices came from E. Grill's mouth, a little girl's voice, and E. Grill's. The Cyan human's soul shared equal power with E. Grill's soul. Noctowey began to twist his face into a sinister smile.
"I'll kill everyone!" Noctowey laughed. Lesser Braixen's tail wagged furiously.
"I forgive you, Noctowey...we should play LeagueTM together sometime!" Noctowey made a demonic facial expression.
"I'll kill everyone you love!" Noctowey demonically chuckled. Burgerzeilants lit a cigar* and began smoking it.
"Nah, little buddy, I've got no reason to stay mad at you." Burgerzeilants said with a smooth voice. Noctowey's face gave a confused expression.
"...? Why? Why are you being so nice to me?" Noctowey started to tear up. Brisk smiled at Noctowey.
"We all make mistakes..,and just because you made a mistake, doesn't mean you deserve to die." Brisk calmly stated. Charity walked up to Brisk and smiled.
"Now that's showing kindness." She smiled and gave Brisk a kiss on the cheek. Brisk blushed.
"..I don't understand...I...just can't understand..I CAN'T UNDERSTAND!" Noctowey ran away... Brisk looked at Charity and smiled...until he noticed that she was starting to fade away...
"Charity! You're disappearing!" Brisk shouted. Charity looked down at herself and saw her now transparent body slowly begin to fade.
"Oh no...I forgot...I'm not alive anymore.............but...I don't want to go...please....someone...anyone....do something...." She began to sob. Brisk started to tear up as well. Gastar watched the group as they all looked at Charity and Brisk sadly..He felt like he should do something..but didn't know what...(Waddle Brisk, and Gastar's next choice.)
(End of chapter 2)

 O. L. Gastar's Choices
1. Save Charity
2. Keep watching...
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 Oronoco's Choices
1. Keep Undyne as a Role model
2. Make Papyrus your role model.
3. (Chose your own role-model)
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Waddle Brisk's Choices
1. Attempt to hug Charity.
2. Console Charity
3. Thank Charity
4. Do nothing...like a prick
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*BrainyLucario does not promote the use of curse words or the use of any kind of Tobacco product. Smoking is very dangerous and should not be performed.
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 2///Sign-ups still accepted
Post by: BrainyLucario on March 30, 2016, 07:50:56 AM
Next section is up
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 2///Sign-ups still accepted
Post by: braix on March 30, 2016, 08:22:00 AM
y'know, oronoco, lesser braix is the only role model in the story
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 2///Sign-ups still accepted
Post by: mikey on March 30, 2016, 09:54:47 AM
2/10 why don't I have a choice
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Post by: BrainyLucario on March 30, 2016, 11:10:58 AM
Quote from: NocturneOfShadow on March 30, 2016, 09:54:47 AM2/10 why don't I have a choice
What the heck could your choice have been?
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 2///Sign-ups still accepted
Post by: mikey on March 30, 2016, 11:22:54 AM
kill or be killed
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 2///Sign-ups still accepted
Post by: BrainyLucario on March 30, 2016, 11:26:18 AM
Well...you'll be quite "active"in chapter 3, so you'll get your "kill or be killed" choice..
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 3 : Your Best Friend
Post by: Waddle Bro on March 30, 2016, 03:15:07 PM
welcome back brainy :]

also gonna do nothing fam but chill what are you shaming me for
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 3 : Your Best Friend
Post by: BrainyLucario on March 30, 2016, 06:08:42 PM
Quote from: Waddle Bro on March 30, 2016, 03:15:07 PMwelcome back brainy :]

also gonna do nothing fam but chill what are you shaming me for
Thanks Waddle!
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 3 : Your Best Friend
Post by: Oronoco on March 30, 2016, 07:43:57 PM
3. Make Noctowey my role model.


Oh dear. Is that allowed?
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 3 : Your Best Friend
Post by: BlackDragonSlayer on March 30, 2016, 08:00:26 PM
Quote from: Oronoco on March 30, 2016, 07:43:57 PM3. Make Noctowey my role model.


Oh dear. Is that allowed?
Thinking outside the box, there. I like that.
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 3 : Your Best Friend
Post by: mikey on March 30, 2016, 08:14:28 PM
frick
now what
am I morally required to make good decisions now?
...nah
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 3 : Your Best Friend
Post by: BrainyLucario on March 31, 2016, 05:50:50 AM
Quote from: NocturneOfShadow on March 30, 2016, 08:14:28 PMfrick
now what
am I morally required to make good decisions now?
...nah
This is going to be hilarious to write!
Oh yeah.. I should announce that Sans and Papyrus will have their dialogue typed in their corresponding fonts... all is now right with the world. This means no capitals for Sans and all caps for Papyrus!
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 3 : Your Best Friend
Post by: BrainyLucario on April 01, 2016, 05:51:02 AM
(Olimar12345 chose choice 2) (Waddle Bro chose choice 4) (Oronoco chose choice 3~Noctowey)

TRUE PACIFIST SPOILERS

Chapter 3: Your Best Friend


Gastar continued to watch, waiting for the moment to act. Charity looked at the monsters she had helped save....they all lowered their heads. She looked at Brisk, who was staring at the ground, his head hung low. I.....I...I don't want to die again....I can't die....I WONT DIE!! Charity thought. She began to glow a bright green color as she rose off the ground. She shined so intensely that the room filled with the beautiful green light....until, the light split into 2 colors. Red and Green. It faded away causing Charity to fall towards the ground. Gastar saw his moment and snapped his fingers. As she was about to hit the hard ground, a Grey Monoco Kid rushed out from behind one of the 4 wooden doors and caught Charity on his back. She slid off and landed on her feet, completely unharmed. The group stared at this...this..Monoco Kid look-alike with confused looks on their faces.
This..."Goner Kid" watched the group with his wide white eyes and said, "It's best if you just forgot about me...just go to the barrier...you're destiny starts there...bring the following monsters with you: Sans, Papyrus, Doggo, Muffet, Alphys, and Temmie." He vanished into thin air. Stunned, the group kept staring at where "Goner Kid" stood. Brisk snapped out the gaze and looked at Charity. On her chest, was a heart made of both Kindness and Determination. He smiled.
"Charity! You've stopped  fading away! It looks like some of my Determination rubbed off on you. If it wasn't for that," Brisk pointed to Charity's heart," You'd be dead." Charity smiled and approached Brisk.
"I'm really glad I got the chance to meet you, Brisk. Your a great friend, but..I want to ask you something...do you..want to..uhh..grab a bite to eat or something after we visit the barrier?" Charity asked hopefully. (Brisk's next choice) The room around them began to fade...as they were hurled through time and space. As the group was thrown back to reality, Gastar's voice echoed around them.
"Remember...I'm always listening...your close to your goal..don't fail now...your victories during my test was poof that you could overcome this fate. This was the real reason I attempted to kill and destroy you. If you were to fail, the underground would have been doomed. Good luck......." O. L. Gastar declared. The group hit the ground in front of E. Grill's with a thud. From behind a tree, Noctowey stared at the group as they got up from the cold snowy ground.
"I've had it with them...Why can't I kill them/ I've killed most of them multiple times before..but now..I can't kill a single thing. What's wrong with me?" Noctowey growled.
"Maybe it's because you aren't really yourself, Nocriel Shadowmurr, you're just a wimpy little flower." Chara had appeared behind Noctowey, juggling her knife.
"Go away Chara...I'm trying to think..." Noctowey snapped. Chara's eyes grew red.
"DON'T TELL ME WHAT TO DO..NOCRIEL...I HAVE A FAVOR TO ASK AND YOU'RE GOING TO FULFILL IT. YOU OWE ME, REMEMBER?" Chara stated in a demonic voice...memories came flooding back to Noctowey.....
(Flashback)
"Wait up, Chara!" Nocriel chased after Chara, as she led him towards the Castle.
"Why Don't you hurry up, instead, hahaha!" Chara heckled. "We need to hurry or else we'll be late for dinner, Mom's making Butterscotch pie for us!" The two hurried towards the castle door. There, they were greeted by the Queen, Toriel, waiting for them.
"My Childs, hurry up and clean up before dinner, you're Dad's starting to get impatient. Nocriel could here Asgore inside.
"But, Tori...why do we have to wait for the kids? Let's just dig in!' Asgore shouted.
"Fore the last time, we're eating as a family and that's final!" Toriel shouted back. Asgore huffed but stopped complaining.
"Come on, Nocriel...I need to show you something!" Chara cackled. She dragged Nocriel into their room and pulled a box from under her bed. Nocriel gasped as Chara pulled a knife from the box.
"Chara, what are you doing with that? Mom and Dad said you weren't supposed to play with knives! Give it to me!" Nocriel reached for the knife.
"No!! It's mine!" Chara shouted as she swung the knife at Nocriel, impaling his chest. Nocriel gasped as Chara pulled the knife out of his chest. Blood began to seep from the stab wound, soaking Nocriel's striped shirt with blood.
"W-why? I-I though I was y-your brother..." Nocriel stuttered, as blood began to fill his mouth.
"Nocriel! I...I didn't mean to! I'm sorry!" Chara said as she fought back a smile. Nocriel fell to his knees, as Chara attempted to cover the wound with her hand.
"I...I...I d-don't w-want t-to d-die!" Nocriel sobbed and began coughing up blood.
"Shut up, you baby...you're not going to die..." Chara grumbled. NOT YET ANYWAY... she thought. Chara closedher eyesand emitted a bright red beam of light from her hand. The light filled Nocriel's wound, healing it completely. The blood soaked into Nocriel's stripped shirt disappeared, as well as the blood Nocriel coughed up. Shocked, Nocriel began to shake violently. "You owe me big time, bro." Chara laughed. Nocriel stopped shaking and rose from his knees.
"T-thanks,sis...I promise...I'll repay the favor one day... I promise..." Nocriel hugged Chara. She cringed at first, but eventually hugged him back. As they hugged, Toriel and Asgore burst into the room.
"What was that noise?" Toriel and Asgore yelled. (Chara's, Nocriel [Noctowey's] next choice) (Group Choice- for E. Grill, Burgerzeilants, MettaYears EX, Lesser Braixen, and Monoco Kid)

 Nocriel choices
1. Tell on Chara
2. Don't tell
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Brisk choices
1. Say yes
2. Say no
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Chara's Choices
1. Lie
2. Suck up to Toriel
[close]
Group choice
1. Continue to the Castle
2. Make a detour
[close]
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 3 : Your Best Friend
Post by: mikey on April 01, 2016, 08:35:25 AM
I feel violated
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 3 : Your Best Friend
Post by: BrainyLucario on April 01, 2016, 11:43:28 AM
Next section is up!
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 3 : Your Best Friend
Post by: mikey on April 01, 2016, 12:20:38 PM
1
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 3 : Your Best Friend
Post by: Waddle Bro on April 01, 2016, 12:31:02 PM
sure fam if you're paying
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 3 : Your Best Friend
Post by: Zeila on April 01, 2016, 12:56:32 PM
2. Make a detour
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 3 : Your Best Friend
Post by: Oronoco on April 01, 2016, 02:41:34 PM
2. Let's not go where we're supposed to go. It'll be more fun.
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 3 : Your Best Friend
Post by: braix on April 01, 2016, 03:52:37 PM
1. Let's continue and die
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 3 : Your Best Friend
Post by: BrainyLucario on April 02, 2016, 07:03:41 AM
Since you guys banned Chara....She had to tell me her choice....1
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 3 : Your Best Friend
Post by: mikey on April 02, 2016, 07:37:34 AM
lol
just give it up already
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 3 : Your Best Friend
Post by: BrainyLucario on April 02, 2016, 08:58:16 AM
added spoiler warning to the OP...I wanted to put the Toriel one instead..but I wasn't able to copy that image from the wiki...assistance, plz?
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 3 : Your Best Friend
Post by: Oronoco on April 02, 2016, 10:04:17 AM
Spoiler
(http://i1381.photobucket.com/albums/ah222/Oronoco/Toriel%20Spoiler%20Warning_zpsjrndbo8k.png)
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Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 3 : Your Best Friend
Post by: BrainyLucario on April 02, 2016, 12:07:19 PM
Quote from: Oronoco on April 02, 2016, 10:04:17 AM
Spoiler
(http://i1381.photobucket.com/albums/ah222/Oronoco/Toriel%20Spoiler%20Warning_zpsjrndbo8k.png)
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Thx, homie!
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 3 : Your Best Friend
Post by: E. Gadd Industries on April 03, 2016, 07:33:37 PM
I say detour!
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 3 : Your Best Friend
Post by: BrainyLucario on April 05, 2016, 09:54:29 AM
https://docs.google.com/document/d/19MG4Th3YFBGQPww92zFYTmYf0mKiQiCHsi-D3dw42oY/edit?usp=sharing (https://docs.google.com/document/d/19MG4Th3YFBGQPww92zFYTmYf0mKiQiCHsi-D3dw42oY/edit?usp=sharing)

Google docs story link
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 3 : Your Best Friend
Post by: mikey on April 05, 2016, 10:02:35 AM
you'll continue to post the story in the thread though right
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 3 : Your Best Friend
Post by: BrainyLucario on April 05, 2016, 11:40:40 PM
Quote from: NocturneOfShadow on April 05, 2016, 10:02:35 AMyou'll continue to post the story in the thread though right
Of course. I'm  just making the document for the whole story to be accessible in one place.
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 3 : Your Best Friend
Post by: BrainyLucario on April 10, 2016, 12:52:06 PM
OK...I feel like AwesomeYears is ignoring his choices...I would be thankful if someone could ask him about it, because he's not responding to me. For everyone else, this flashback will last about 3 to 4 sections (a section in this story is separated by a choice, BTW). So for those of you who don't get a choice for a while, just wait and enjoy the story! After the flashback, a really big battle will take place. It's really easy to guess who will be fighting, if you think about it.
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 3 : Your Best Friend
Post by: BrainyLucario on April 11, 2016, 05:45:32 AM
(Nocturne chose choice 1) (Chara chose choice 1) (Group vote chose Detour)

Nocriel stood before his parents, uncertain of what he should do. Toriel and Asgore were staring at him with worried looks in their eyes. "Uhh...well...you see..." Nocriel stuttered.
"We were just playing Monsters and Humans. It got pretty intense. Theirs nothing to worry about, right Nocriel?" Chara lied. She looked at Nocriel with an intimidating smile.
"*gulp* uhh...yeah... hey, Mom? Can I talk to you for a minute?" Nocriel nervously asked.
"Not at all, my "child. Let's talk near the fireplace." Toriel replied happily. "I'm glad you two are okay. For a minute there, me and your dad were worried sick!" Nocriel held Toriel's hand as she guided him into the dining room. She led him towards her favorite chair, which she sat down in. Nocriel sat in the floor in front of her, frowning. "Now what was it you wanted to tell me?"
"Uhh...Well...You see....Chara....she...she...stabbed me...with a knife... I don't think it was on purpose, but she almost killed me." Nocriel stuttered. Toriel stared at Nocriel in disbelief.
"Are you sure she did? You don't look like you were stabbed...maybe you just imagined it. I'm sure Chara would never try to stab you on purpose." Toriel went to Nocriel and hugged him, "There's nothing to worry about, my child. I'll always be here for you. I promise."
Nocriel smiled and returned the hug, "Thanks, Mom. Hey, is dinner ready, yet?"
"Oh! I almost forgot. Asgore! Chara! Dinner Time."
(end of flashback)
Noctowey shook his head. "I don't owe you anything! You almost killed me!"
Chara smiled. "But I didn't, right? That's why you owe me. Now then, I have a plan to kill everyone, again. I need you to go to the barrier. I'll meet you there, okay?"
"....Fine..." Noctowey groaned. Chara smiled and faded away. Noctowey turned back around to spy on Brisk and the others but found that they had already headed out. Frustrated, he burrowed back into the ground and set out for Asgore's castle.

The group arrived at the entrance to the Ruins. While they were in Snowdin, Papyrus, Sans, and Doggo had joined them on their journey. Sans had insisted that they returned back to the Ruins before they headed towards the king's Castle. To Brisk's surprise, the door was open.
"huh....weird. it normally isn't open. i just wanted you guys to hear my new knock-knock joke. since it's open, we might as well go in. what do you say guys?" Sans cackled.
"That sounds exciting! I've never saw the Ruins before! Let's go in and kill everyone inside!" Monoco Kid laughed, acting like his new role model. The others stared at him with shocked expressions. "I....I was just...joking...hehe.." Monoco kid said. Brisk still suspicious of Monoco kid, turned back towards the Ruin door. He couldn't believe that the door was open. He could finally go back and visit Toriel, again.
But she said to not come back. Why would the door be open if nobody was supposed to return to the Ruins? Oh no......that must mean someone's broke into the Ruins. But.....who would do that? Brisk thought. A scream could be heard from inside the Ruins. A scream that made Brisk's heart pound harder, as he realized who broke in.

Noctowey rose from the dirt near the barrier. He expected to see Chara waiting for him, but was only greeted by the noises coming from the other side of the barrier. Next to the barrier, a note written in blood sat beside the barrier.
"Where the heck is Chara? she was supposed to be here by now. She left a note, though. Maybe she made a change to the plan." Noctowey picked up the note with his leaf and read it.
"You're such an Idiot =) I can't believe you fell for this! You've already cause me enough problems, Nocriel. You're not ruining my plans this time. I'm going to kill everyone in the underground, starting with our stupid mom. After I kill everyone else, I'm coming for you. See you in hell, Idiot! =)" the note read. Noctowey stared at the note in anger. He threw the note down and disappeared back into the dirt., as he hurried towards the Ruins.

A smiling figure appeared in the door way of the ruins. Their eyes and mouth glowed red. The group stepped baxk as the figure stepped out into the open. Chara was standing before them, covered in monster dust, with blood dripping from her knife.
"Were you here to see Toriel? That's too bad. She just left for an extended vacation. Don't worry, though. I'll send you to where she went. hahaha! =)" Chara threw her knife towards the monsters, avoiding Brisk and Charity. One by one, the knife cut through the monsters, as it went directly towards each of them, turning unnaturally in mid-air. Burgerzeilants, Undyne, MettaYearsEX, Monoco Kid, Sans, Papyrus, Doggo, E. Grill, and Lesser Braixen were killed instantly. They turned to dust before Brisk and Charity's eyes, as the knife ruturned to Chara's hand. Unable to speak, Brisk began to shake with uncontrollable anger.
Now.....I'M TAKING YOUR SOULS AND YOU CAN'T STOP ME THIS TIME!!!! HAHAHA!!!! Chara screamed as a black substance shot out from her eyes and darted towards Brisk and Charity. The black substance phased into them, blocking out their souls. Chara was now in control of them, and there was no one left to stop her. Or was there?
(incoming fourth wall break.)
BrainyLucario looked at his writing and smiled. Another section was done. He looked at his clock and gasped. He needed to get to school. He grabbed his backpack and left the room, leaving the computer open. The screen began turning red, as Chara appeared on it. She looked at the writing and smiled.
"Not bad...but how about I change it up a little. I'll make Brisk and Charity reset. That way, I can make them personally kill every monster. I can't wait to see the look on the monster's faces as Brisk and Charity personally rip them to shreds. HAHAHA!! Boy, I love being evil!" Chara laughed as she began adding the words "Brisk and Charity reset." to the end of the section. She then disappeared back into the textbox, as Brainy entered back into the room.
"I can't believe I almost forgot to save my post! that would have been a waste of time!" He said as he pressed the save button. The Genocide run had begun.

Brisk choice
1. Try to escape from Chara.
2. Attempt to reset
3. Try and refuse Chara's commands.
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Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 3 : Your Best Friend
Post by: BrainyLucario on April 17, 2016, 04:04:41 AM
Section is done!
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 3 : Your Best Friend
Post by: Waddle Bro on April 17, 2016, 04:29:39 AM
i'm the one calling the shots here this bitch can't tell me what to do
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 3 : Your Best Friend
Post by: BrainyLucario on April 21, 2016, 07:50:44 AM
(Waddle Bro chose choice 3)

Brisk and Charity were falling down into the underground. They felt their souls blacken as Chara's influence controlled them. As much as both of them wanted to refuse Chara's commands, they couldn't. With a thud, the two humans landed on the bed of Golden flowers for the second time. With emotionless faces, they slowly got up and headed towards the door to their right. Their eyes were as black as the darkness around them. In the next room, Noctowey was lashing out in anger.

"This can't be happening....I can't believe I was such a fool. I knew I shouldn't have trusted Chara, and now We're all gonna die...I can't believe I'm doing this, but I know I can't win this on my own. There are only two other monsters besides me that know about the resets, but the only one I can actually get to is Smiley Trashbag. He'll have to do. Hopefully that Gastar freak knows about this already." Noctowey planned as he dissappeared into the ground, heading towards San's sentry station. In no time, he arrived and appeared in front of the sleeping skeleton, who was leaning up against a tree, snoring. "Hey! Smiley Trashbag, wake up!" Sans opened his eyes.

"..so...come to beg me for help?" Sans chuckled.

"shut up, I still hate you, but we need to stop Chara, and you know it. Where's Gastar? We need him too." Noctowey said.

"trust me when i say he already knows. g knows everything. he told me about the plan he had to help all of us, but chara messed that up. he wont be happy about that. let's stop her before she kills tori." Sans chuckled as he snapped his fingers and teleported Noctowey and himself to the stairway at the beginning of the ruins. There, they saw Gastar standing at the top of the stairs, with Toriel behind him. She looked terrified.

"What are you doing Gastar? I need to check the hole for fallen humans! Is this the only reason you came back from the dead? To mess with me?" Toriel stated.

"No...the humans approaching are possessed by a demon." Gastar looked towards Sans and Noctowey, "ah, there you two are. Prepare yourselves, for the moment those two enter, we attack. Toriel, get out of here. NOW!!" Gastar yelled. Toriel sadly nodded and ran away from the stairway. Two sinister laughs could be heard from the doorway in front of the 3 monsters. Brisk and Charity entered the room, and smiled at the site befor them. Their eyes turned blood red. Time for another battle... (Gastar, Noctowey, Chara, and Brisk's next choice)

Waddle, you have a 50% chance to have your actions overruled by Chara.
Chara possessed Brisk battle choices
Fight
1. Noctowey
2. Gastar
3. Sans
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Act
Noctowey
1. Threaten
2. Apologize
3. Talk
4. Cry
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Gastar
1. Cry
2. Talk
3. Threaten
4. Apologize
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Sans
1. Cry
2. Joke
3. Mention Papyrus
4. Apologize
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Item
Stick
1. Gastar
2. Sans
3. Noctowey
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Gastar
Fight
1.Charity 2. Brisk
1. Gastar Blaster
2. Reality Check
3. Time Bomb
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Act
Brisk
1. Scare
2. Confuse
3. Call out
4. Remind
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Charity
1. Scare
2. Confuse
3. Remind
4. Plead
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Item
Mysterious device
1. Brisk
2. Charity
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Picture of the Future
1. Brisk
2. Charity
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Noctowey's choices
1. Attack Brisk
2. Mock Chara
3. Attack Charity
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Group vote:
Sans
1. Judge Charity and Brisk
2. Attack Charity and Brisk
3. Reason with Charity and Brisk
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Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 3 : Your Best Friend
Post by: mikey on April 21, 2016, 08:38:05 AM
I choose to betray people then run before sans can get me
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 3 : Your Best Friend
Post by: Waddle Bro on April 21, 2016, 09:53:32 AM
^fighting this person for scumbaggery
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 3 : Your Best Friend
Post by: mikey on April 21, 2016, 09:56:33 AM
attack toriel
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 3 : Your Best Friend
Post by: BrainyLucario on April 21, 2016, 12:39:19 PM
She ran away.....how in the world would you be able to attack her?
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 3 : Your Best Friend
Post by: braix on April 21, 2016, 03:15:12 PM
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Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 3 : Your Best Friend
Post by: Oronoco on April 21, 2016, 04:29:34 PM
(http://i1381.photobucket.com/albums/ah222/Oronoco/YSTSTF_zpsbzxd3igh.png)

And then probably 1.
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 3 : Your Best Friend
Post by: BrainyLucario on April 22, 2016, 05:49:11 AM
Typing for Chara again...she chose Act: Noctowey: Threaten
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 3 : Your Best Friend
Post by: Olimar12345 on April 22, 2016, 04:11:02 PM
Item>Mysterious Device>1.Brisk
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 3 : Your Best Friend
Post by: mikey on April 22, 2016, 04:12:06 PM
Quote from: BrainyLucario on April 21, 2016, 12:39:19 PMShe ran away.....how in the world would you be able to attack her?
by chasing after her
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 3 : Your Best Friend
Post by: Zeila on April 22, 2016, 06:38:02 PM
1. Judge
Title: Re: The Undertale Interactive Story: Chapter 3 : Your Best Friend
Post by: BrainyLucario on April 28, 2016, 05:51:12 AM
( Waddle Bro chose to Fight Noctowey - his choice overpowered Chara's)  (Olimar chose to use the mysterious device on Brisk) (Noctowey chose..uhh to fight Toriel?) (Group vote made Sans Judge Brisk and Charity)

"heh, you guys never learn, do you? You know you can't win against me. I'll just reset and try again!" Brisk laughed.

"Why don't we teach these fools a lesson, Brisk? Then, once we kill them, we can dance on their dust! Hahaha!" Charity cackled. Brisk nodded as he set his sight's on Noctowey, raised his toy knife, and charged towards the flower.

Work In Progress
Finals are close, so I don't have much time to work on this. Expect a shortage of sections until school is over.